Thanatos-Zero´s Sprites

Thanatos-Zero · 30-09-07, 00:31

Hello everyone! I´m starting to post here my sprites. Like I´ve said before in the instruction thread, I´m not so good as you are now, but I want many critics never the less.
Now lets start with something, which almost everyone knows.

As everyone can see, this is a altered version of Zero, which resembles his former self from the X-series.

And here a bigger picture to see the details better.

click to show

I´m thinking about the idea to make a spritesheet of this Zero, but it will take much time to accomplish this.

So, before I show you more of my sprites, I want to see some posts from you.

Aen · 30-09-07, 00:32

Zero's right foot looks REALLY odd, and some pixels are messed up in places. Good job, though!

Ragekill15 · 30-09-07, 00:34

WOAH!!! AWESOME!!!!

You rock man! That is a really good MMX Zero to MMZ Sprite!

SHEET IT NAO!!!

The only thing is that the left hand needs some work.

Slur · 30-09-07, 01:00

Maybe I can help you with the foot, Its awesome.

Aen · 30-09-07, 01:03

Yeah, ZB here is a good spriter; you should get him to help you. ^_^

Thanatos-Zero · 30-09-07, 01:04

Is it better now?

Personally I would have added the green crystals on his chest, but unfortunately there are limits to the colours.

Here as I have promised.
From "LufiaII : Rise of the Sinistrals" here comes Arek, the allmighty.

Version1

Version2

Version3

Version4

Edit:
@Zero-Beat
Do as you wish.^^

Slur · 30-09-07, 01:06

Well........ Looks best, but I dont know. Need, Something more.

Bifrost · 30-09-07, 23:26

Just add the green circles on his chest its your guy do what you want to him

Loki · 01-10-07, 01:16

The one thing I'm going to point out is that MMX Zero's foot is a BOOT. Not a seperate foot.

Thanatos-Zero · 01-10-07, 08:29

So I´ve found a way to use 16 colours at one time. At last I attached the crystals on his chest, in addition I´ve changed Zero´s leg a little bit.

Here a bigger picture.

It´s cool, when the crystals on his chest change the colour by using a element chip. At least the Z-saber and his other weapons must have the same colour, otherwise the colours goes about the 16 colour limit.

Edit: I´m now working on the sprite sheets of Zero.

Thanatos-Zero · 01-10-07, 15:25

Here are the first sheets of my altered Zero.

click to show

I hope the Z-Buster is not too huge.

Zomaxiee · 01-10-07, 20:53

Take off a row of pixels on the buster, and that looks like an alernate verison of Zero. The top of his helmet looks disconnected, why does he half white spikes on the back of his boot, the hair is odd, and his boots are too thin.
5/10 for Zero himself.
8/10 for the buster.

-EDIT-
Sorry I didn't know it was an alternate Zero, I thought it was supposed to resemble Zero himself. 8.5/10 for Zero.

Advent Axl · 02-10-07, 00:36

fix his helmet a little

Thanatos-Zero · 02-10-07, 09:53

I´m really thankful for your advice. Now I´ve fixed the helmet, leg and Z-Buster.

click to show

And here are the first hair sheets of Zero(edited).

click to show

Thanatos-Zero · 02-10-07, 23:38

Personal Review:
Wow. I´ve never expected that sprites makes so much work, but I admit that it makes a lot of fun. Now I´m very tidy. The hair edits comes tomorow.

I´ve a question on you all. Is Zero fine as he is or is there something what should be improved?

Ragekill15 · 02-10-07, 23:45

Well...

The sprite is good.

The hair sheet... not so good. It looks like a cape.

The buster shot looks like a snowflake.

For the hair, maybe take off the darkest color.

The buster shot is kinda hard....

I admit though, you are good at movement placement.

Advent Axl · 02-10-07, 23:47

REMOVE THOSE BROWN LINES, they look retarded, that's all

Drei · 02-10-07, 23:50

The hair doesn't look good at all. The hair is always smooth and barely splits at the ends when it is in motion. Look at the official MMZ Zero's hair. Try to shade it like that. For the motions of the hair, look at any official zero sprites.
The boots are too thin. Your trying to keep too similar to the original sprites. Look at MMX Zero. His boots are big and ovalish. MMZ Zero has thin and rectangular boots. Also listen to others advice too.

Ragekill15 · 02-10-07, 23:55

Quote:

Originally Posted by Drei

Look at the official MMZ Zero's hair. Try to shade it like that. For the motions of the hair, look at any official zero sprites.
The boots are too thin. Your trying to keep too similar to the original sprites. Look at MMX Zero. His boots are big and ovalish. MMZ Zero has thin and rectangular boots. Also listen to others advice too.

Quote:

As everyone can see, this is a altered version of Zero, which resembles his former self from the X-series.

Drei, either you are talking about MMZ and he's talking about MMX, or I am failing to pay atention (probally that one).

Advent Axl · 03-10-07, 00:00

He is talking about the Sprite base he used (MMZ) and who he is making the sprite in the image of (MMX Zero) which last time i edited Zero to clipse. . .he didnt have brown lines

30-09-07, 00:31	#1
Thanatos-Zero Rank: Commander Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Germany, Wittlich Posts: 482	Thanatos-Zero´s Sprites Hello everyone! I´m starting to post here my sprites. Like I´ve said before in the instruction thread, I´m not so good as you are now, but I want many critics never the less. Now lets start with something, which almost everyone knows. As everyone can see, this is a altered version of Zero, which resembles his former self from the X-series. And here a bigger picture to see the details better. click to show I´m thinking about the idea to make a spritesheet of this Zero, but it will take much time to accomplish this. So, before I show you more of my sprites, I want to see some posts from you. __________________ These worlds... They may differently look, but, after all, they carry the same sins, even on unintentional doings. My heart hurts it over and over again that the history recurs. Diese Welten... Sie mögen anders aussehen bei genauer Betrachtung, aber letzten Endes tragen sie die gleichen Sünden, selbst bei unbeabsichtigten Taten. Mein Herz schmerzt es, dass sich die traurige Geschichte immer wieder wiederholt. Last edited by Thanatos-Zero : 02-10-07 at 22:08

30-09-07, 00:34	#3
Ragekill15 Rank: Commander Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tampa, FL Posts: 405	WOAH!!! AWESOME!!!! You rock man! That is a really good MMX Zero to MMZ Sprite! SHEET IT NAO!!! The only thing is that the left hand needs some work. __________________ Is definitely back for good. Reason why I deleted Sprite Thread Link and posted a new one: I forgot I still had the link to it. Crummy reason, I know.

30-09-07, 01:04	#6
Thanatos-Zero Rank: Commander Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Germany, Wittlich Posts: 482	Is it better now? Personally I would have added the green crystals on his chest, but unfortunately there are limits to the colours. Here as I have promised. From "LufiaII : Rise of the Sinistrals" here comes Arek, the allmighty. Version1 Version2 Version3 Version4 Edit: @Zero-Beat Do as you wish.^^ __________________ These worlds... They may differently look, but, after all, they carry the same sins, even on unintentional doings. My heart hurts it over and over again that the history recurs. Diese Welten... Sie mögen anders aussehen bei genauer Betrachtung, aber letzten Endes tragen sie die gleichen Sünden, selbst bei unbeabsichtigten Taten. Mein Herz schmerzt es, dass sich die traurige Geschichte immer wieder wiederholt. Last edited by Thanatos-Zero : 30-09-07 at 01:08

30-09-07, 23:26	#8
Bifrost Rank: Commander Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: Guarding the sleeping soldiers Posts: 357	Just add the green circles on his chest its your guy do what you want to him __________________ http://www.gaiaonline.com/profiles/?u=10263699

01-10-07, 08:29	#10
Thanatos-Zero Rank: Commander Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Germany, Wittlich Posts: 482	So I´ve found a way to use 16 colours at one time. At last I attached the crystals on his chest, in addition I´ve changed Zero´s leg a little bit. Here a bigger picture. It´s cool, when the crystals on his chest change the colour by using a element chip. At least the Z-saber and his other weapons must have the same colour, otherwise the colours goes about the 16 colour limit. Edit: I´m now working on the sprite sheets of Zero. __________________ These worlds... They may differently look, but, after all, they carry the same sins, even on unintentional doings. My heart hurts it over and over again that the history recurs. Diese Welten... Sie mögen anders aussehen bei genauer Betrachtung, aber letzten Endes tragen sie die gleichen Sünden, selbst bei unbeabsichtigten Taten. Mein Herz schmerzt es, dass sich die traurige Geschichte immer wieder wiederholt. Last edited by Thanatos-Zero : 01-10-07 at 10:23

30-09-07, 00:32	#2
Aen Owner of a Lonely Heart Rank: Godlike Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 2,554	Zero's right foot looks REALLY odd, and some pixels are messed up in places. Good job, though!

30-09-07, 01:00	#4
Slur Rank: Warrior Princess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Always near to you Posts: 1,267	Maybe I can help you with the foot, Its awesome.

30-09-07, 01:03	#5
Aen Owner of a Lonely Heart Rank: Godlike Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 2,554	Yeah, ZB here is a good spriter; you should get him to help you. ^_^

30-09-07, 01:06	#7
Slur Rank: Warrior Princess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Always near to you Posts: 1,267	Well........ Looks best, but I dont know. Need, Something more.

01-10-07, 01:16	#9
Loki Rank: Godlike Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Asgard. Posts: 2,381	The one thing I'm going to point out is that MMX Zero's foot is a BOOT. Not a seperate foot.

01-10-07, 15:25	#11
Thanatos-Zero Rank: Commander Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Germany, Wittlich Posts: 482	Here are the first sheets of my altered Zero. click to show I hope the Z-Buster is not too huge. __________________ These worlds... They may differently look, but, after all, they carry the same sins, even on unintentional doings. My heart hurts it over and over again that the history recurs. Diese Welten... Sie mögen anders aussehen bei genauer Betrachtung, aber letzten Endes tragen sie die gleichen Sünden, selbst bei unbeabsichtigten Taten. Mein Herz schmerzt es, dass sich die traurige Geschichte immer wieder wiederholt. Last edited by Thanatos-Zero : 02-10-07 at 22:09

01-10-07, 20:53	#12
Zomaxiee This is my custom title. Rank: Legendary Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Canada Posts: 1,777	Take off a row of pixels on the buster, and that looks like an alernate verison of Zero. The top of his helmet looks disconnected, why does he half white spikes on the back of his boot, the hair is odd, and his boots are too thin. 5/10 for Zero himself. 8/10 for the buster. -EDIT- Sorry I didn't know it was an alternate Zero, I thought it was supposed to resemble Zero himself. 8.5/10 for Zero. Attached Images __________________ This is my signature, ENVY IT!!!

02-10-07, 00:36	#13
Advent Axl Banned Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 2,853	fix his helmet a little

02-10-07, 09:53	#14
Thanatos-Zero Rank: Commander Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Germany, Wittlich Posts: 482	I´m really thankful for your advice. Now I´ve fixed the helmet, leg and Z-Buster. click to show click to show And here are the first hair sheets of Zero(edited). click to show __________________ These worlds... They may differently look, but, after all, they carry the same sins, even on unintentional doings. My heart hurts it over and over again that the history recurs. Diese Welten... Sie mögen anders aussehen bei genauer Betrachtung, aber letzten Endes tragen sie die gleichen Sünden, selbst bei unbeabsichtigten Taten. Mein Herz schmerzt es, dass sich die traurige Geschichte immer wieder wiederholt. Last edited by Thanatos-Zero : 02-10-07 at 22:07

02-10-07, 23:38	#15
Thanatos-Zero Rank: Commander Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Germany, Wittlich Posts: 482	Personal Review: Wow. I´ve never expected that sprites makes so much work, but I admit that it makes a lot of fun. Now I´m very tidy. The hair edits comes tomorow. I´ve a question on you all. Is Zero fine as he is or is there something what should be improved? __________________ These worlds... They may differently look, but, after all, they carry the same sins, even on unintentional doings. My heart hurts it over and over again that the history recurs. Diese Welten... Sie mögen anders aussehen bei genauer Betrachtung, aber letzten Endes tragen sie die gleichen Sünden, selbst bei unbeabsichtigten Taten. Mein Herz schmerzt es, dass sich die traurige Geschichte immer wieder wiederholt.

02-10-07, 23:45	#16
Ragekill15 Rank: Commander Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tampa, FL Posts: 405	Well... The sprite is good. The hair sheet... not so good. It looks like a cape. The buster shot looks like a snowflake. For the hair, maybe take off the darkest color. The buster shot is kinda hard.... I admit though, you are good at movement placement. __________________ Is definitely back for good. Reason why I deleted Sprite Thread Link and posted a new one: I forgot I still had the link to it. Crummy reason, I know.

02-10-07, 23:47	#17
Advent Axl Banned Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 2,853	REMOVE THOSE BROWN LINES, they look retarded, that's all

02-10-07, 23:50	#18
Drei KAMEN RIDE: DIEND Rank: Princess Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Getting more rope. Posts: 1,125	The hair doesn't look good at all. The hair is always smooth and barely splits at the ends when it is in motion. Look at the official MMZ Zero's hair. Try to shade it like that. For the motions of the hair, look at any official zero sprites. The boots are too thin. Your trying to keep too similar to the original sprites. Look at MMX Zero. His boots are big and ovalish. MMZ Zero has thin and rectangular boots. Also listen to others advice too. __________________ PixelCore. "Don't ask for it. Go out and win it. Do that and you'll be rewarded." Hey Tuna high five. GAR and Purity: Unstoppable combination, everlasting union, and neverending victory!

03-10-07, 00:00	#20
Advent Axl Banned Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 2,853	He is talking about the Sprite base he used (MMZ) and who he is making the sprite in the image of (MMX Zero) which last time i edited Zero to clipse. . .he didnt have brown lines

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