Model RB ( Red Bust From X7 )

SpeedReemix · 16-03-07, 21:45

Please comment about this. Give me Some C+C,Here an one pose of him- Look to first post for updates-

Tell me what you thnk about that!

Novacrash · 16-03-07, 21:48

Hah, I forgot about him XD, Good work

! The green on the legs seems very...out of place though.

Kairos · 16-03-07, 21:52

Looks cluttered. And it looks wired.

tuckur21 · 16-03-07, 22:17

Make the base a little more obvious. And try and edit the hair thing.

Grid Man · 16-03-07, 22:33

I really like thetop half of the sprite, but like Nova said, the green on his legs does seem a bit off.

SpeedReemix · 17-03-07, 07:14

Quote:

Originally Posted by Grid Man

I really like thetop half of the sprite, but like Nova said, the green on his legs does seem a bit off.

I used offical-arts and other things he had green things on his legs. its looks weird 'cause background color is black and you cant see details.
EDIT - Look with this-

Grid Man · 17-03-07, 14:18

Official leg design or not, I don't like that color scheme for the legs. Besides, this is a model. You're free to change whatever you want. I'm thinking that blackish color should be used in place of the light color on the legs, and the green should be changed to red.

SpeedReemix · 18-03-07, 18:48

Updated, I changed green line on the legs to red line and dashing added-

More C+C Please!

Terry von Feledae · 18-03-07, 19:24

Good, I like the body, but it has two flaws:
First, the pants are too shiny. When I first looked at the new sprite, the first thing I've seen are the pants. Make them another color, and make the outline lighter. Use the colour you used for the part between pants and knees, for example.
Second, the hair looks a tad odd. Make it more curved, and less high. I don't know how to explain it. Can I post an example?

Grid Man · 18-03-07, 19:27

Yay, I like those colors much better.

For the dash, I think his shoulder pads would probably point upwards while he's going. His arms are now in a different position; his shoulderpads would change accordingly.

And I can tell that you used the same sprite for frames 2 and 4.

SpeedReemix · 19-03-07, 13:51

Upadated W.I.P sheet of Model Red Bust-

Please post your comments and attack ideas.
EDIT- Animation Added-

Grid Man · 19-03-07, 14:31

I like it in general, but the final frame's no good. You should redo the scythe blades, at least in that frame, to match up with the slash. Or you could redo the slash to match up with the scythe.

The thing is, the slash goes too far. For instance, look at the top of his head. The slash extends all the way to where the 'hair' flattens out. But in the next frame where the slash is gone, the scythe doesn't go nearly as far. Realistically, the scythe and its slash should match up.

SpeedReemix · 19-03-07, 15:55

Updated Again- Added second slash and animation-

Animation-

Kairos · 19-03-07, 16:01

Not bad. Great actually, is this for Smoke's game?

SpeedReemix · 19-03-07, 16:04

Quote:

Originally Posted by Soul Lock

Not bad. Great actually, is this for Smoke's game?

Maybe, if I can finish it. I'm working on MMZ5 sprites. Did you make anything about Z5 Project?
EDIT- And there is have a lot of models for model royal. There is not many models like model x.

Grid Man · 19-03-07, 16:05

Hey, that's really cool. And I certainly hope you can finish it; it would be a nice addition to Model Royale.

SpeedReemix · 19-03-07, 16:07

Quote:

Originally Posted by Grid Man

Hey, that's really cool. And I certainly hope you can finish it; it would be a nice addition to Model Royale.

If I cant finish it, maybe we can add it in Model Royale's another update.

Grid Man · 19-03-07, 16:10

Well there's plenty of time left before Model Royale is finished. He's got room for about 15 more characters, actually. Heck, I've still got another character I'm going to do for it, and I haven't even started that one!

SmokedToast · 19-03-07, 16:17

Quote:

Originally Posted by SpeedReemix

If I cant finish it, maybe we can add it in Model Royale's another update.

At the rate MR's going speed, we can implement it into this version.

In fact, my last post over there I asked if people would prefer yours over Soul Lock's just to make it fair.

[fish in space] · 19-03-07, 16:36

I prefer it over Soul's (No offe-Brick'd)... plus it's more comple-Brick'd...

16-03-07, 21:45	#1
SpeedReemix The B-Day Boy Rank: Legendary Join Date: May 2006 Location: Turkey , Istanbul Posts: 1,730	Model RB ( Red Bust From X7 ) Please comment about this. Give me Some C+C,Here an one pose of him- Look to first post for updates- Tell me what you thnk about that! Last edited by SpeedReemix : 19-03-07 at 16:52

16-03-07, 21:48	#2
Novacrash Captain Falcons Grandpa. Rank: Legendary Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: In the good life. Posts: 1,960	Hah, I forgot about him XD, Good work ! The green on the legs seems very...out of place though. __________________ [Hellfire Soul] 7:16 pm: Come forth from the depths to SHOW ME YOUR MOVES! Arise, Captain Falcon's Grandpa! [Hiroshi] 7:17 pm: cue Ganondorf? [The Lounge]: Novacrash has entered at 7:17 pm

16-03-07, 21:52	#3
Kairos music Rank: Pony! Join Date: May 2006 Location: FRIENDSHIP IS MAGICAL Posts: 7,575	Looks cluttered. And it looks wired. __________________ why are you at old inc don't look at my post they're terrible.

16-03-07, 22:17	#4
tuckur21 Insert witty coment here. Rank: Offically has No Life. Join Date: May 2006 Location: In between the great states of Maine, Florida, Washington and Hawaii. Posts: 4,053	Make the base a little more obvious. And try and edit the hair thing. __________________ Check out my Comic

16-03-07, 22:33	#5
Grid Man Rank: King Join Date: May 2006 Location: Location? Posts: 808	I really like thetop half of the sprite, but like Nova said, the green on his legs does seem a bit off. __________________ The Omega Mega Man Series--Coming Eventually. My PD Sprite Thread

17-03-07, 14:18	#7
Grid Man Rank: King Join Date: May 2006 Location: Location? Posts: 808	Official leg design or not, I don't like that color scheme for the legs. Besides, this is a model. You're free to change whatever you want. I'm thinking that blackish color should be used in place of the light color on the legs, and the green should be changed to red. __________________ The Omega Mega Man Series--Coming Eventually. My PD Sprite Thread

18-03-07, 18:48	#8
SpeedReemix The B-Day Boy Rank: Legendary Join Date: May 2006 Location: Turkey , Istanbul Posts: 1,730	Updated, I changed green line on the legs to red line and dashing added- More C+C Please!

18-03-07, 19:24	#9
Terry von Feledae I fail Touhou forever Rank: Godlike Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Queckborn, a small town near Gießen, Germany Posts: 3,143	Good, I like the body, but it has two flaws: First, the pants are too shiny. When I first looked at the new sprite, the first thing I've seen are the pants. Make them another color, and make the outline lighter. Use the colour you used for the part between pants and knees, for example. Second, the hair looks a tad odd. Make it more curved, and less high. I don't know how to explain it. Can I post an example? __________________

18-03-07, 19:27	#10
Grid Man Rank: King Join Date: May 2006 Location: Location? Posts: 808	Yay, I like those colors much better. For the dash, I think his shoulder pads would probably point upwards while he's going. His arms are now in a different position; his shoulderpads would change accordingly. And I can tell that you used the same sprite for frames 2 and 4. __________________ The Omega Mega Man Series--Coming Eventually. My PD Sprite Thread

19-03-07, 13:51	#11
SpeedReemix The B-Day Boy Rank: Legendary Join Date: May 2006 Location: Turkey , Istanbul Posts: 1,730	Upadated W.I.P sheet of Model Red Bust- Please post your comments and attack ideas. EDIT- Animation Added- Last edited by SpeedReemix : 19-03-07 at 14:02

19-03-07, 14:31	#12
Grid Man Rank: King Join Date: May 2006 Location: Location? Posts: 808	I like it in general, but the final frame's no good. You should redo the scythe blades, at least in that frame, to match up with the slash. Or you could redo the slash to match up with the scythe. The thing is, the slash goes too far. For instance, look at the top of his head. The slash extends all the way to where the 'hair' flattens out. But in the next frame where the slash is gone, the scythe doesn't go nearly as far. Realistically, the scythe and its slash should match up. __________________ The Omega Mega Man Series--Coming Eventually. My PD Sprite Thread

19-03-07, 15:55	#13
SpeedReemix The B-Day Boy Rank: Legendary Join Date: May 2006 Location: Turkey , Istanbul Posts: 1,730	Updated Again- Added second slash and animation- Animation- Last edited by SpeedReemix : 19-03-07 at 15:58

19-03-07, 16:01	#14
Kairos music Rank: Pony! Join Date: May 2006 Location: FRIENDSHIP IS MAGICAL Posts: 7,575	Not bad. Great actually, is this for Smoke's game? __________________ why are you at old inc don't look at my post they're terrible.

19-03-07, 16:05	#16
Grid Man Rank: King Join Date: May 2006 Location: Location? Posts: 808	Hey, that's really cool. And I certainly hope you can finish it; it would be a nice addition to Model Royale. __________________ The Omega Mega Man Series--Coming Eventually. My PD Sprite Thread

19-03-07, 16:10	#18
Grid Man Rank: King Join Date: May 2006 Location: Location? Posts: 808	Well there's plenty of time left before Model Royale is finished. He's got room for about 15 more characters, actually. Heck, I've still got another character I'm going to do for it, and I haven't even started that one! __________________ The Omega Mega Man Series--Coming Eventually. My PD Sprite Thread

19-03-07, 16:36	#20
[fish in space] Captain Hero Rank: Offically has No Life. Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Lightning Posts: 3,621	I prefer it over Soul's (No offe-Brick'd)... plus it's more comple-Brick'd... __________________

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