Megaman Zero 5: The ghosts of the past

Blackhook · 11-03-07, 17:16

You have surely noticed that i´ve started a MMZ comic. It continues the story from MMZ4 after the Ragnarok Crisis.
Here the English Version:
http://www.drunkduck.com/MegaMan_Zer...x.php?p=168032
What you think. Ok it´s not much but just a begin. If you wanna help PM me.I´m accepting Cameos

tuckur21 · 11-03-07, 17:20

Ya um its Ghost not Ghoust and you can't really read the text in the first panel of the second comic. And you do realize Zero is dead right?

Blackhook · 11-03-07, 19:26

yeah Zero´s was dead X times and he still came back so where´s the problem?

tuckur21 · 11-03-07, 19:33

No he wasn't! Are you fucking retarded!?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zero_%28Mega_Man%29

Terry von Feledae · 11-03-07, 19:41

As I can see, Mother Elf revived him. There's not much wrong with that.
Anyway, the text in the first panel is hard to read... White on beige...

Du sprichst also auch deutsch, huh?

Blackhook · 11-03-07, 19:43

Whats with X1? heh
Edit: Ja

Boilman · 11-03-07, 20:12

I also have a problem with the text. Try to oultine it manually. Black would be a wise choice for that. Outlined text can always be seen, and has no major disadvantages.

RyuReiatsu · 12-03-07, 04:44

Quote:

Originally Posted by Terry F.

As I can see, Mother Elf revived him. There's not much wrong with that.
Anyway, the text in the first panel is hard to read... White on beige...

Du sprichst also auch deutsch, huh?

The mother elf left during MMZ3 -.-...smart now smart...

Anyways, as for the text...
You gotta put a color we can see, or put a color for the strokes.

Terry von Feledae · 12-03-07, 17:04

She could have returned, right?

Sorry, I was not really serious ^.^"

Iota · 12-03-07, 19:58

I'm not going to bug about the story. It is fan fiction after all. But in terms of the comic, the revival portion takes a lot of frames. Maybe it would serve better as an animated gif?

Blackhook · 12-03-07, 20:29

Nah, i don´t think to make an GIF of Zero´s getting up, but i´m gonna animate battle sequences.

Iota · 12-03-07, 22:39

Ah. Well that sounds cool. Frame by frame fight are really bland. Good Luck.

Bi-Q · 13-03-07, 16:15

Ich spreche auch deutsch, der comic fängt schon mal gut an^^

Caeder · 13-03-07, 16:21

Looks good, but Zero's hair seems flattened. If he had 7 months to lay there maybe his helmet hair would have poofed up a bit? XD;
Also for the hair try making the blonde more similar to eachother, no need for dark streaks. It looks more pixely that way and uneven.

Blackhook · 18-03-07, 13:04

udpate ok only for the german version but who cares its a udpate!

The Sian Random Man · 18-03-07, 13:07

Can I cameo in some new reploid enemies?

Blackhook · 18-03-07, 13:12

i was so long waiting till someone ask this *cryes* yes you can.Pm me what do you gonna do

The Sian Random Man · 18-03-07, 13:27

Well, I thought of new grunt reploids who will be replacing the variants!
Theyre in the making.
OH! And I gave zero a newer cooler teleport! *goes to pm it to Blackhook*

[fish in space] · 18-03-07, 13:27

Ich spreche Deutch (Though I'm not very good). Cool comic by the way... so far... yeah.

Blackhook · 18-03-07, 13:29

Quote:

Originally Posted by Roar 'n' Stuff

Well, I thought of new grunt reploids who will be replacing the variants!
Theyre in the making.
OH! And I gave zero a newer cooler teleport! *goes to pm it to Blackhook*

I really need new grunts for the Ghosts of Revenge Troops

11-03-07, 17:16	#1
Blackhook The King of Logs Rank: Godlike Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: The Holy Ground Posts: 2,165	Megaman Zero 5: The ghosts of the past You have surely noticed that i´ve started a MMZ comic. It continues the story from MMZ4 after the Ragnarok Crisis. Here the English Version: http://www.drunkduck.com/MegaMan_Zer...x.php?p=168032 What you think. Ok it´s not much but just a begin. If you wanna help PM me.I´m accepting Cameos __________________ My Megaman Zero comic Click the banner to visit the thread on Sprites Inc. Last edited by Blackhook : 14-11-07 at 18:30

11-03-07, 17:20	#2
tuckur21 Insert witty coment here. Rank: Offically has No Life. Join Date: May 2006 Location: In between the great states of Maine, Florida, Washington and Hawaii. Posts: 4,053	Ya um its Ghost not Ghoust and you can't really read the text in the first panel of the second comic. And you do realize Zero is dead right? __________________ Check out my Comic

11-03-07, 19:26	#3
Blackhook The King of Logs Rank: Godlike Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: The Holy Ground Posts: 2,165	yeah Zero´s was dead X times and he still came back so where´s the problem? __________________ My Megaman Zero comic Click the banner to visit the thread on Sprites Inc.

11-03-07, 19:33	#4
tuckur21 Insert witty coment here. Rank: Offically has No Life. Join Date: May 2006 Location: In between the great states of Maine, Florida, Washington and Hawaii. Posts: 4,053	No he wasn't! Are you fucking retarded!? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zero_%28Mega_Man%29 __________________ Check out my Comic

11-03-07, 19:41	#5
Terry von Feledae I fail Touhou forever Rank: Godlike Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Queckborn, a small town near Gießen, Germany Posts: 3,143	As I can see, Mother Elf revived him. There's not much wrong with that. Anyway, the text in the first panel is hard to read... White on beige... Du sprichst also auch deutsch, huh? __________________

11-03-07, 19:43	#6
Blackhook The King of Logs Rank: Godlike Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: The Holy Ground Posts: 2,165	Whats with X1? heh Edit: Ja __________________ My Megaman Zero comic Click the banner to visit the thread on Sprites Inc.

11-03-07, 20:12	#7
Boilman Permanently Banned Rank: Legendary Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: The Netherlands. Wait, why are you looking for my location? Posts: 1,899	I also have a problem with the text. Try to oultine it manually. Black would be a wise choice for that. Outlined text can always be seen, and has no major disadvantages. __________________ When the HELL will people finally realize that it is not the AMOUNT of posts that matters, but the QUALITY of them!? ACE EDIT: Signature approved.

12-03-07, 17:04	#9
Terry von Feledae I fail Touhou forever Rank: Godlike Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Queckborn, a small town near Gießen, Germany Posts: 3,143	She could have returned, right? Sorry, I was not really serious ^.^" __________________

12-03-07, 19:58	#10
Iota Rank: Postie Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 87	I'm not going to bug about the story. It is fan fiction after all. But in terms of the comic, the revival portion takes a lot of frames. Maybe it would serve better as an animated gif?

12-03-07, 20:29	#11
Blackhook The King of Logs Rank: Godlike Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: The Holy Ground Posts: 2,165	Nah, i don´t think to make an GIF of Zero´s getting up, but i´m gonna animate battle sequences. __________________ My Megaman Zero comic Click the banner to visit the thread on Sprites Inc.

12-03-07, 22:39	#12
Iota Rank: Postie Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 87	Ah. Well that sounds cool. Frame by frame fight are really bland. Good Luck.

13-03-07, 16:15	#13
Bi-Q Rank: Commander Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: In the Sea of Chaos and Disaster Posts: 269	Ich spreche auch deutsch, der comic fängt schon mal gut an^^

13-03-07, 16:21	#14
Caeder Rank: Harry Kim Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Washington, US Posts: 167	Looks good, but Zero's hair seems flattened. If he had 7 months to lay there maybe his helmet hair would have poofed up a bit? XD; Also for the hair try making the blonde more similar to eachother, no need for dark streaks. It looks more pixely that way and uneven. __________________ View my art here. View my sprites here.

18-03-07, 13:04	#15
Blackhook The King of Logs Rank: Godlike Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: The Holy Ground Posts: 2,165	udpate ok only for the german version but who cares its a udpate! __________________ My Megaman Zero comic Click the banner to visit the thread on Sprites Inc.

18-03-07, 13:07	#16
The Sian Random Man Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: In my house. >.> Posts: 1,734	Can I cameo in some new reploid enemies?

18-03-07, 13:12	#17
Blackhook The King of Logs Rank: Godlike Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: The Holy Ground Posts: 2,165	i was so long waiting till someone ask this cryes yes you can.Pm me what do you gonna do __________________ My Megaman Zero comic Click the banner to visit the thread on Sprites Inc.

18-03-07, 13:27	#18
The Sian Random Man Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: In my house. >.> Posts: 1,734	Well, I thought of new grunt reploids who will be replacing the variants! Theyre in the making. OH! And I gave zero a newer cooler teleport! goes to pm it to Blackhook

18-03-07, 13:27	#19
[fish in space] salt lid Rank: Godlike Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: EVERYWHERE Posts: 3,479	Ich spreche Deutch (Though I'm not very good). Cool comic by the way... so far... yeah. __________________

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