Originally Posted by Ony
He's just a recolor with very bad Effects....
Try to edit ... everything... more.
To rewrite what was just stated.
The body of the character is just a terrible recolor of Zero, and should be some very custom armored character of your own tastes. Not Zero.
Next, a lot of the effects (such as the ground wave, and the spiral thing) were really bad effects that just looked like they were C+Ped in for fun. The large slashes on the other hand were well shaped, and well sprited. They were in unique slashes, and I really liked how they all played out.
You just need to add the right blurs, and remaining frames to them. So far, that was the highlight of the sheet, and only redeeming quality. But understand you did a really good job with them, and you just have to fix the rest. Okay? I'm pretty sure you can do it. So try.
Also, I was a bit confused why you called it Model G if it was MotherElf/DarkElf's remaining power within Model O. That part made no sense to me. Just make a new character, and use the slashes.
Then there's the..."guardians"...unique design for Harpuia and Phantom, but what style exactly is this supposed to be? Also, compared to the unique changes in H and P, why is Leviathan and Fefnir still so alike with the original forms?
You need to implement more unique design there as well.
Oh, and as to why I asked what style they're supposed to be...it's because they're all very pillowshaded, and a lot of their shapes break the rules for Z/x/A spriting. You need more appropriate shading to fit the style, and the parts should also be more sized to fit their style.
For example, as cool as that head is for Phantom, it's WAY too large.
The model's yellow needs a new palette because right now it's too dull. It would definitely help to raise the contrast. I'd also suggest a new official palette of purple, but really the only thing wrong with that is also contrast.
And the face-mask looks pillowshaded, but that's about it really.
I like the shape. Is this going to be a Bass rip-off, or a custom character?
(EDIT)-Just for the record, I didn't double post. Baryl just deleted his post from above mine so that it looks like I doubleposted, but I didn't. Okay?
Obviously no longer a double-post at all. Just weird...