Another Sprite Comic

[AB22]

This is my Comic
Another Sprite Comic is the name because thats all it is
is another sprite comic

http://www.drunkduck.com/Another_Sprite_Comic/index.php?p=67881

and then theres my other one

http://www.drunkduck.com/Random_Acts_of_Randomness/index.php?p=19553

i started off a newbie to Sprite Comics then i read the Guide on BnG so i got
better :p

[Don Kalypso]

They both are horrible, TTBGs, lame jokes, horrible grammar, recolours, bad sprites, and beating dead horses. Need I go on?

[Hotenshu Shogun]

I agree with Caly

[Dude/Man]

that second one looks like a horrible bng clone. the first is better but...it needs better jokes. try and work at it make a few practice comics so it to your freinds ask them what they think. you'll improve, also look at other comics and take notes. just keep trying.

[Yoshu]

They were kinda funny... but kinda is good... I didn't really like the second one...