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the green warrior
07-08-11, 15:52
its is my sprites
coment please:mega-1up:
i still looking a name for him
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/803/deltamanv3byboberatud3k.png/
rockmaneye
07-08-11, 17:35
Ho boy. Where do I begin.
First, welcome to Sprites Inc. Lord knows you are trying in some way, but... your sprites aren't too nice.
One, the color scheme is all over the place. Light green, with dark grey, and yellow and blue? And red? I don't really care if it's possible on the NES, but if you drew it on paper, the outfit's color scheme would be too distracting.
Two, I see you tried to edit the sprites make it seem less of a Mega Man rip. However, just slightly editing the sprites one pixel actually makes it seem like a Mega Man rip even more. Why? Because now, he looks disfigured.
Three, the entire thing is what we call a "frankenstein." It looks like you just slapped on official Mega Man sprites together and expect to make it a new thing. That drill weapon is probably Drill Man's arms, the burning fist is Heat Man's, the tornado is Air Man's weapon, it's a mess.
I don't mean to violently bash you, but expect to see people who might. Sorry.
the green warrior
07-08-11, 17:46
thanks
and yes I agree that my sprite is a crap
and see these two sprites and liked to talk
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/405/jupiterplayable.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/97/mynewhero.png/
that's just jupiter and fireman... okay, first, you need to make some of the parts from scratch, that way it isnt the way rockmaneye says, the head looks like it came from crashman, that is the main part you should scratch because it is what most people mess up on, so start there and make it not look like crashman.
the green warrior
07-08-11, 20:25
well i quitted from this character
Dont say "I give up" because the sprite is bad.
You can improve it, if you tried hard enough.
the green warrior
08-08-11, 00:02
yeah
the green warrior
08-08-11, 21:06
my new robot master
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/4/turtleman.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/24/dashp.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/98/flintman.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/193/articman.png/
All of those robot masters are too small and WAY too thin. If turtleman is intended to be even remotely serious then it is completely unoriginal. It is a teenage mutant ninja turtle ¬¬.
You need to make more original head designs.
the green warrior
09-08-11, 21:24
Could you please stop giving such heavy criticism
I'm just a beginner
wat
what
What.
WHAT
There is no such thing as "heavy criticism"
If you don't want to improve your mediocre sprites, that's fine with us.
the green warrior
09-08-11, 21:57
hey calmdown
i i'n just a begginer
It may not be heavy crit, but it is alot of it. Try taking it slower guys.
GreenWarrior, try making the robot masters' heads bigger. It helps show more detail. Once you do that, we will continue from there.
Sorry for mistakes in spelling. My "R" key is not registering sometimes.
the green warrior
09-08-11, 22:17
okay guy
hey dude are you from Brazil?
and here my others sprites
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/855/thunderman.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/808/blastmand.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/691/ballonman.png/
and here playables characters
http://http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/97/timeman.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/143/terragbsheet.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/405/snakeman.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/215/playabletornadoman.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/220/playablestarman.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/708/cutman.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/703/crashv.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/191/playablequickman.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/64/playablemetalman.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/21/playablefireman.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/809/icemanplayable.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/705/heatmanplayable.png/
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/854/flashmanplayable.png/
Nah man. I'm from the US.
You're getting better, but still not big enough. look at megaman's head for a refrence.
I would suggest that you finish a project before you start all these playable bosses. Pick a project and move from there. It's easier to fix things that way. And you may learn a thing or two.
EDIT: Balloon man is okay head wise.
the green warrior
09-08-11, 23:10
thanks man
hey man you have an account on deviantart?
Nope. Never realy saw the point in it. BTW, you gonna revisit your first sprite? The one in your avatar?
please for the love of god stop posting all of your images as links.
Not gonna lie a lot of your sprites are just Frankensteins and minor edits. Not awful, but nothin amazing or great or even good, for that matter.
They're just okay.
the green warrior
10-08-11, 15:55
yeah neo man
forgot to mention earlier, it looks like you are just using the MS paint colors instead of the colors from the games.
the green warrior
10-08-11, 18:07
how so xearez?
how so xearez?
Well default paint colors are to bright. Megaman uses bright colors, but it sorta dulls them abit. I'm not sure if that explains it clearly. Do you understand, or should I try again?
the green warrior
10-08-11, 18:56
Then my master robot does not use bright colors?
is it?
Alittle. Nothing too bad though.
the green warrior
10-08-11, 23:31
hmmmm...
hey neo,what happened to megaman fan factory?
hey neo,what happened to megaman fan factory?
This...really has nothing to do with your sprites.
You need to stay on topic. PM him questions like that.
the green warrior
10-08-11, 23:47
ok.............
ok.............
Also avoid one word posts please.
I know you're knew, but please try to follow the rules.
the green warrior
10-08-11, 23:54
sorry I forgot some rules
but only some
sorry
sorry I forgot some rules
but only some
sorry
Check your pm's. Also, you think I could try redesigning your character to be less... Colorfull?
the green warrior
11-08-11, 00:42
yes
please and thanks
Okay, Feel free to use and/or edit this as you wish.
http://i.imgur.com/hBjzx.png
Also another gift. Try using this site to upload your stuff. When you do that use the message baoard link and paste it in your post.
http://imgur.com/
the green warrior
11-08-11, 01:02
wow thanks
hey I can use your old base?
old base?
You mean in my pd thread?
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/7512/34758369.png
Yeah, its pd for a reason.
Did you get my Private message?
the green warrior
11-08-11, 01:15
yes
much thanks
the green warrior
11-08-11, 01:23
hey dude
I do like the way that you put around your sprite?
hey dude
I do like the way that you put around your sprite?
1, try not to double post like that.
2, translation error. Can you rephrase that?
the green warrior
11-08-11, 01:37
1-sorry
2-as you managed put your sprites that way as a picture instead link
Oh, Imgur.com adds the correct tags to an uploaded picture when you use the message board option. We have a functuon here too, but you must direct link your pics, not link to your album.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 15:27
http://i.imgur.com/JL7yb.png
here is an unfinished sheet
I do not know if you'll like the color schemes
Well, design is okay, but you are using too many colors.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 17:20
where I tail off?
Start by only using one shade of each color.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 18:28
eg
Three colors at most?
Yes, well... You can have 4. # for the armor 1 for the face. I'll explain why later. And the outline counts as a color.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 19:18
hmm ok...
and here this
I do not know if you'll like
http://i.imgur.com/dCMS8.png
okay, But there is too many colors still. Replace the light green with yellow and the red with the boot color.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 19:23
okay
and now?
http://i.imgur.com/yKFyh.png
change the ears too.
Sorry, 8bit has limited colors
the green warrior
11-08-11, 19:31
well ok
http://i.imgur.com/dbDmT.png
Hmm. One more. Make th pants the same color as the outline.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 19:37
yellow?
no, black. Outline is the black part.
my eyes are bleeding!..... just kidding. on a serious note, you went right back to using MSpaint colors, the way to fix that would be to take the colors from robot master that have alrady been created, by using those colors, it will keep peoples eyes from bleeding. also, now it looks like he is wearing a nT-shirt instead of armor >_> not sure if thats what you were going for, but now it looks alot less like a robot master.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 19:45
hey dude this not a robot master
is my character
the green warrior
11-08-11, 19:47
and now neo?
http://i.imgur.com/et1gk.png
That's not the point. (Green Warrior, can I just call you GW?) The ppoint is that he is very bland. Needs a more detailed design.
http://i.imgur.com/qDyrT.png
Take my character. DEsign is different and uses few colors.
Edit: ignore the armless QuickMan.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 19:49
can call gw
dude but how can I leave the detailed his armor?
Try adding different shapes, shoulder-pads belt, and so on.
EDIT, Pants are okay now.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 19:52
ok thanks
the green warrior
11-08-11, 20:06
and now
http://i.imgur.com/HDqhY.png
the green warrior
11-08-11, 20:11
thanks dude
no longer needs to improve in anything?
Well, It looks better design wise. The run looks alitttle stiff. Like he realy needs to crap. Trymaking him lean foward alittle.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 20:16
he is too thin?
no no. When he runs. He needs to lean foward. Lean doesn't just mean thin in english. It can also mean tilt. He needs to tilt forward abit.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 20:22
but he leans
so it is little
but I want to edit?
and another thing
You definitely do not speak Portuguese is not?
No, I only speak english. One of the moderators, Cobalt is hisa name speaks Portuguese.
He needs to lean this way ---->
the green warrior
11-08-11, 20:28
1-hmmmm
2-wath?
Nevermind, we'll come back to it.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 20:57
ok
i make a neew version,but is missing a name for it
http://i.imgur.com/qmSca.png
Shoulder pads are little big. And for a name... How about Super joe? He kinda looks like a sniper joe.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 21:08
not other
the green warrior
11-08-11, 21:31
other name please
i hate sniper joe
Oh...Tell us his powers then.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 21:45
he's a character like Megaman, Protoman and Bass
ie he can shoot normal shots and charged
and can absorb other weapons of defeated bosses
Nothing special?
Try a musical name
You know mega is rock. roll. Blues is protoman forte is bass. How about... Jazz? or Rythm?
the green warrior
11-08-11, 22:14
I do not know
How about a name of god Greek or Japanese?
I always thought god names was cliche.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 22:28
1 What a cliche?
2 that such this names: Tark or liten?
Cliche is something that is done so many times, that it gets stupid.
Tark or liten? Who are they?
the green warrior
11-08-11, 22:34
are the names I want your opinion
it is good or not these two put one on my character names
1 Not too good. Too many colors.
2, that sheet wasn't public domain and I'm going to have to ask you to remove those.
the green warrior
11-08-11, 23:21
ready
dude go continue to choice a name for my character
Saprano. How about Saprano?
the green warrior
11-08-11, 23:26
is more to a female character name
How about liten?
the green warrior
12-08-11, 00:05
well for me also
the green warrior
12-08-11, 00:07
what do you think these issues that I gave at the jamb and the canyon?
http://i.imgur.com/B0xDD.png
Shoulder pads are alittle too big.
the green warrior
12-08-11, 00:12
dude you could make a pads for me?
please?
Sure I'll give you them tomorrow.
the green warrior
12-08-11, 00:41
all right dude
the green warrior
12-08-11, 00:54
hey dude how about this new sprites of listen?
http://i.imgur.com/pkExL.png
and now?
Actualy, thats realy good. The only problem is the foot on the right(--->)
It is a little thin.
Do you still need the shoulder pads?
the green warrior
12-08-11, 14:53
yes i need
...I dont like Liten's backstory.
It sounds like a typical super powered teenager.
the green warrior
12-08-11, 15:47
and what's wrong with that?
It doesnt seem very original to me.
No offense, but it sounds like a 12 year old made it.
Make him into a android and it'll be acceptable
the green warrior
12-08-11, 15:54
but how do I make it like an android?
...by not making it Human?
the green warrior
12-08-11, 16:12
he already is human
...Is it that hard to replace Human with robot?
the green warrior
12-08-11, 16:19
well, for me is not very easy
Look at Casshern or something for an example
the green warrior
12-08-11, 16:46
very thanks dude
the green warrior
12-08-11, 16:54
and now karasai?
http://i.imgur.com/FMJsY.png
hey dude how about this new sprites of listen?
http://i.imgur.com/pkExL.png
and now?
Why'd you change the image in this post? The one you showed me was a single frame that looked very different than this!
the green warrior
12-08-11, 17:25
not the one you asked me to remove
I already removed
My bad, I need to stop worrying about theft. Seriously though, why'd you change the image. The sprite before was better.
the green warrior
12-08-11, 17:35
I thought the other was bad
excuse for not seeing your message that you sent me to get your character
the green warrior
12-08-11, 18:03
yeah
I'm editing right now
When I said "take my character" It is a slng for "use as an example". Not realy TAKE my character. I keep forget that english isn't your first language... ;>.>
the green warrior
12-08-11, 18:12
not
I'm always practicing my English
and I think I'm getting better
but still do not know their lingo or their abbreviations
the green warrior
12-08-11, 18:35
and this one dude
i made based on their old projects
http://i.imgur.com/U9mtX.png
Why don't you make the chest green? It's wierd that only his helmet is green.
the green warrior
12-08-11, 19:08
and now?
http://i.imgur.com/q4apV.png
Better. try making the rest of his animations.
the green warrior
12-08-11, 19:42
thanks
http://i.imgur.com/f1VYo.png
sorry bro but I had to use its new base and edited
but I think it was cool
the green warrior
12-08-11, 19:47
I do not know bro
but I think it would be better to replace some parts of yellow with another color
what do you think?
Yeah. If the upper arms are yellow, make the shoulder pads white.
the green warrior
12-08-11, 20:00
and now?
http://i.imgur.com/VsYa7.png
the green warrior
12-08-11, 20:13
because they are part of the armor
They looked better when they where yellow
the green warrior
12-08-11, 20:17
and now?
http://i.imgur.com/1mSSb.png
hey dude your character's red and white
what about my being white and green?
You forgot to fix the "Shooting" frame. Oyherwise, you're good.
the green warrior
12-08-11, 20:41
thanks
and now?
http://i.imgur.com/SkhEb.png
the green warrior
12-08-11, 21:21
well
this sprites is
finished
let's move onto another phase of this post
Please help me to Improve my sprites
http://i.imgur.com/skkcZ.png
http://i.imgur.com/9WBpG.png
http://i.imgur.com/Td3gD.png
http://i.imgur.com/UcU6Y.png
They need to be customized more. They are just basic FrankenEdits...
the green warrior
12-08-11, 22:03
so I need your help guy
pleasee
so do the poses and then stops I do the complete sheet
I'd help you, but I think you need to do this yourself. You learn nothing if I do it for you.
the green warrior
12-08-11, 22:21
ok dude
the green warrior
12-08-11, 22:25
and now?
http://i.imgur.com/5BlJC.png ghost man
Heavy and Metal.
12-08-11, 22:46
Slightly better than the extremely basic Hammer Joe edit. His head doesn't look big enough, so it makes his torso stick out forwards alot. His arms being disconnected seems like a bit of a lazy excuse to let them move around freely.
The second one.... It's just... A recoloured Guts Dozer... with the mecha dragon head added really badly on. There's still a bit of neck coming out the back of it's head, get rid of that, and there's still a huge shadow on it's chest that was cast by the Guts Dozer's head. The head looks stupidly small on it... you could have tried resizing the head, then making it neater.
The next one.. Just a variation of a Metool, doesn't really need any reviewing.
Dash Man looks more like an upgraded Protoman then it does a new robot master. You didn't even bother editing the head or the body, you just recoloured it all to match Proto's colour scheme.
Atleast change the colour scheme, and give Proto's head an edit so it doesn't look exactly the same.
Omniman is an interesting concept, but there's to much AirMan in there. Try making his torso look kind of patchwork like the rest of his body, with random parts of different themes mixed in around it.
so I need your help guy
pleasee
so do the poses and then stops I do the complete sheet
No.
You will learn nothing if you keep relying on NeoMan to do all of your stuff.
the green warrior
12-08-11, 22:55
yes and thanks for the tips heavy and metal
but i not understand what you said the last omni man
yes a know karasai
the green warrior
12-08-11, 23:08
and now guys?
http://i.imgur.com/8sOJB.png
the green warrior
12-08-11, 23:33
all right
the green warrior
12-08-11, 23:55
and now?
http://i.imgur.com/ppwyX.png
I call it "Copypaste Joe"
No offense, but you need to make something original for once.
Try making a sprite from scratch
the green warrior
13-08-11, 00:40
I already tried it once
but I'm horrible at drawing something
the green warrior
13-08-11, 00:46
and these
http://i.imgur.com/fUbkx.png water man
honestly I did this sprite from scratch
was a week that had done and forgot to post it
Scratch. That wasnt hard, took 5 minutes
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/2235/fastman.png
Edit: Its alright, but if its a Robot Master, he's too big.
the green warrior
13-08-11, 01:10
and now?
http://i.imgur.com/XtHCI.png
yes i know
He's a robot, not Kareem Abdul Jabbar.
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3083/karemt.png
the green warrior
13-08-11, 01:24
sorry
i not very good with scrath
the green warrior
13-08-11, 01:29
and now?
http://i.imgur.com/kq2ZV.png
the green warrior
13-08-11, 01:33
thanks
Fix the head and feet, and pose, then it'll be alright.
the green warrior
13-08-11, 01:42
all right
Kuribu The King
13-08-11, 02:01
His foots are blue not purple in the 4 row.
His foots are blue not purple in the 4 row.
I hope he didnt steal it from another sprite.
the green warrior
13-08-11, 11:37
yes i know kuribu
and kurasai my program of paint is still with problem
the green warrior
13-08-11, 12:12
My new bosses I'm still thinking about making the other
http://i.imgur.com/yinmL.png
from right to left
thunder man,furnace man,ballon man,bee man and dash man
Heavy and Metal.
13-08-11, 14:20
What happened to Dash Man's previous body? It looked far better.
A problem I'm noticing with your sprites is that their body is facing the camera, but their heads aren't, so it looks really weird. Try adjusting the features of the body so it looks theyre also facing towards the side.
They also all seem to be very big. If your making your own style, that's fine, but if your trying to fit in with the classic 8-bit series, they could be made a bit smaller.
the green warrior
13-08-11, 14:40
ok man
the green warrior
13-08-11, 15:15
and now?
http://i.imgur.com/ou25y.png
the green warrior
13-08-11, 16:29
improved my robot masters
http://i.imgur.com/C6fuO.png
from rigth to left
thunder man,furnace man,ballon man,bee man,dash man,omni man,ghost man and turtle man
kurasai my program of paint is still with problem
what problem?
I use Paint for my sprites, and I dont have a problem.
the green warrior
13-08-11, 17:52
the colors still changing randomly..
I am now using photofiltre..
the green warrior
14-08-11, 00:14
a small expansion of the sprite of dr wily and mr x
http://i.imgur.com/41tnc.png
You used N64Mario's Hadoken/Shoryuken sprites.
Give him permission or remove them please.
Edit: You also used the "Rock Ball" kick and ProboPingas' purple sword sprite.
Give them permission.
the green warrior
14-08-11, 00:44
sorry
and the wily still okay?
You used N64Mario's Hadoken/Shoryuken sprites.
Give him permission or remove them please.
Edit: You also used the "Rock Ball" kick and ProboPingas' purple sword sprite.
Give them permission.
You mean credit... give credit.
You mean credit... give credit.
Whoopsie, yes, I meant credit -_-
You can still have the sheet, TGW, but just remove those sprites.
the green warrior
14-08-11, 16:37
well, well,
thats sprites is the armor from megaman 6
http://i.imgur.com/0a72c.png
and this is the oil man from megaman powered up
http://i.imgur.com/1KYHS.png
ps:credit for mike1967 by the oil man mugshot
Nightshade Axl
14-08-11, 17:16
you should give credit to "mike1967-now" for the oil man mugshot, http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=oilman+sprites#/d1tudhy
the green warrior
14-08-11, 17:25
hey night shade you can give me a idea for a robot master?
and sorry i forgot
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