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His name is Joshua. He is 100% custom made by me, with general LSW Style sprites for reference.
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/1155/joshua.png
BIG GIANT UPDATE:
Joshua:
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/5788/joshuasheet.png
Jimmy:
http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/1210/jimmysheet.png
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/6366/q7hzrt1281222864.gifhttp://img96.imageshack.us/img96/5559/iuxmer1281222785.gif
BIG GIANT UPDATE:
Joshua:
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/5788/joshuasheet.png
Jimmy:
http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/1210/jimmysheet.png
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/6366/q7hzrt1281222864.gifhttp://img96.imageshack.us/img96/5559/iuxmer1281222785.gif
They're... The same sprite.
Really?
Joshua is mainly focused on the power of his attacks, so he uses excess energy to boost their power. Jimmy doesn't have this ability, so he mainly focuses more on the speed of his attacks. They're also identical twins, but Jimmy dyes his hair.
They're also identical twins, but Jimmy dyes his hair.
That sounds...
Lazy.
Looks a lot like these sprites: http://spriters-resource.com/gameboy/dbzlegend/
Heck, the first sprite you posted is even wearing DBZ clothing.
They're in the style of LSW sprites, yes.
Is it 100% custom or did you use those sprites as templates?
Well, the first one was, but a couple of poses for the sheets themselves I edited from the sprites. Shadowhunter was the one who ripped them.
Seriously? No more replies? This took forever to make.
Anyway, now Jimmy wears a hat
Joshua:
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/5788/joshuasheet.png
Jimmy:
http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/1210/jimmysheet.png
You've already got more replies-per-sprite than most people do on this forum, but alright.
First off, Jimmy is just a recolor of Joshua. Literally the only 2 things on his sheet that aren't on Joshua's are the second pose on the first row and the very last row. And saying "they are recolors because they are twins" is silly. Twins don't need to dress the same way, or stand in the same way, or use the same hairstyle.[EDIT: seens like you added a hat to Jimmy while I wasn't looking! Either way, he's still pretty much the same, but now with the same hat pasted into every sprite[except 2 of them], although I give you a thumbs up for at least changing him a bit]
Seeecondly, the "stance" that you animated looks rather bad. The only thing Joshua moves is his hands, which for that matter are a mesh of pixels and for the most part don't look like hands. I suggest redoing the hands[on all sprites that use them] and making Joshua move his body and his arms in the stance, too.
Third, the mugshots look bad. The hair looks off style and seens like you just copy-pasted it on a character's mugshot. Even then, it looks nothing like it does on the actual sprites.
And finally, this one is mostly an opinion, but I think ignoring the 3-colors-per-sprite limit of the style kinda ruins it's charm.
RyuReiatsu
08-08-10, 17:43
I liked Jimmy with a buzzcut better. Give him new clothes so that they'll look different.
Cobalt speaks the truth.
Okay, a couple of updates to the both of them:
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/5788/joshuasheet.png
http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/1210/jimmysheet.png
AND NOW, THE VILLAIN
Ifreann:
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/9706/ifreannsheet.png
They bare an uncanny resemblance to Android 18 (http://www.comicbookmovie.com/images/users/uploads/17982/android18.jpg)from Dragonball Z, which I doubt you were going for. They're also awfully flat, why aren't they shaded? Even as is they're way too many colors deep to even try to pretend to be 8-bit styled, so why not try for 16-bit?
I'm not trying to be 8-bit
I can't shade, I've tried and failed (http://i39.servimg.com/u/f39/15/49/57/86/igam_g11.png)
I was trying to give them long hair, so that was what I was going for.
Question
What's so terrible on the last sprite?
This one?
http://i39.servimg.com/u/f39/15/49/57/86/igam_g11.png
It's not shaded well...
Don Kalypso
09-08-10, 15:35
You're kidding, right? That's some pretty good shading you got there.
Really? Wow... I didn't think so...
I am working on a project... To color (and possibly shade) some of the original GameBoy sprites. Here's what I have so far:
http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/8793/theheroes.png
I do plan on coloring all the areas in Pokemon Blue/Red/Green, and the Pokemon, and even some things from other games.
Mind if I bump this? I'm just gunna bump it.
You already have a sprite thread. And you shouldn't bump this without an update.
Don Kalypso
17-08-10, 03:09
Zone, you already have a sprite thread here. (http://www.sprites-inc.co.uk/forum/showthread.php?t=8999) Please use that from now on for all of your sprites. You are only allowed one sprite thread. Please keep this in mind the next time you wish to post up some of your sprites.
Oh, so sorry. I was unfamiliar with the rules. Would it be possible to merge this topic with the other one?
SC Edit: Lucky I was just crossing through, eh?
100% custom? well most ,if not all, are edits of the work of the LSW spriters over at DBZ vortex(most likely edits of someone's "base").
I'm not too sure you did any thing to the this one at all http://i39.servimg.com/u/f39/15/49/57/86/igam_g11.png.
That being said, they are sorta good edits.
Keep working at it and give credit.
-Hyper
Rangda Bangda
01-09-10, 20:37
bradleybrown1198, it took you long enough to get here. [Ozar Midrashim]
on topic: excellent shading & palette on that last one. secondly, i'm agreeing on the whole Jimmy=Joshua thing. but i like these. keep 'em up.
His name is Green, and he's my Megaman style custom:
http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/8691/greenm.png
100% custom? well most ,if not all, are edits of the work of the LSW spriters over at DBZ vortex(most likely edits of someone's "base").
I'm not too sure you did any thing to the this one at all http://i39.servimg.com/u/f39/15/49/57/86/igam_g11.png.
That being said, they are sorta good edits.
Keep working at it and give credit.
-Hyper
Igam IS mine. Never say he's not.
You used a public domain base, am I correct?
For some of them, yes. Could you tell me who made it? I'd like to give proper credit.
I don't know thier name, but I know it was someone on this forum.
On to critique.
I like what you did for the hair, but everything else is kinda dull/boring looking. He doesn't realy have any features that make him unique. I don't know how to explain how to fix that, its all personal preferance.
Would shoulder pads make him look more unique?
Possibly, but don't stop at just shoulder pads.
Alright.
Maybe a symbol on his chest?
That could work too. try it and see how it looks.
How about if I keep that design as his main form and use this as his casual form?
http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/4474/greencasual.png
What does his main form look like?
Rangda Bangda
07-09-10, 20:45
Instead of having everyone link to imageshack, just put image brackets in, PLEASE. Since I've already critiqued over on Spriter's Block, There's not much I need to say here.
What does his main form look like?
Remember?
Green and Gray?
http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/8691/greenm.png
UPDATE:
http://img811.imageshack.us/img811/3531/greens.png
His armor is still boring, you didn't update the armor.
Mmm... I'll brainstorm about what to put on it...
BAM!
Doughnut, that lovable, edible little devil:
http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/5659/doughnut.png
Bud Caldwell, a small one-shot I did of the main character from the book, Bud, Not Buddy:
http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/3641/budcaldwell.png
Ban Hammer, my very own ban hammer I named The Disintegrator:
http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/2103/banhammerdeluxe.png
Green, a MegaMan sprite:
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/4142/greenk.png
Coffee Cup, Doughnut's arch nemesis:
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/1248/coffeecup.png
Doughnuts shoop de whoop was nice
that is the only relevant thing I can say without sounding like a major douche.
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