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coca_mola
16-07-06, 18:13
ive recent made a animation on deviantart http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/36404253/

this is my first flash animation ... its random i was hoping you could give me feedback about it so i now if my series will be any good or not:D
thanks people

gagaman
16-07-06, 18:51
1) Sort out your Mic, or get a better one.
2) When editing frames, make sure your character hasn't shifted slightly if he is supposed to be standing still. When your characters mouth moves, he shifts back and forth.
3) Hello new person.

coca_mola
16-07-06, 19:13
ill try ...
1 . atm i cant afford a mike (saving for new deck at N.A.S.S)
2. thanks teh the tips !!!!!!

megamagition
18-07-06, 07:26
Pretty good fora first flash .
Some tips:
Give atleast a bit better graphics...
Well that the general tip tho for a newbie ;) (IM KINDA A NEWBIE MYSELF THO).Kinda funny ,good job! Keep it up :)

Enigma
23-07-06, 05:42
Jelly....JELLY!!! yay!
1. funny, I like random c-r-a-p
2. liked the voice, made it more funny, in a good way
Pedofile
1. work on your graphics
2. try to keep it on the low with the Michael Jackson...scare the hell out of me and it was just one pic...