ReSpored's PD Submissons

[ReSpored]

Ok I'm Going to Start of with my infamous Noddleman.exe
i thought i mite as well submit them here
any coments

ps. i wouldn't let me put the whole thing on one sheet
broth wave sucks i know


Note:i'm just submiting it as a BMP.untill i find a way to change it to a PNG. cause my computer won't let me for some reson,so sorry,if someone could change it to a Png i'd be greatful?

[spriticus]

PNG'd and uh...put together'd?
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/3787/noodleman4bs.png
To change them into PNG's I used GIMPshop's save as function,and to put them together I used MSpaint.

[Blackbeltdude]

I do belive it says no fan characters in the rules...

[Kairos]

He was in the animie-he's not a fan char.

[Blackbeltdude]

He was in the animie-he's not a fan char.

Huh, well in that case... I'm pretty boarder line... which means ACE has to decide. :P

However, I'll definitly approve them if you fix a few things.

There's a contrast issue in the white shades. Try useing Skullman's or something. The rest of the shading is "ok" but the bowl probably should be shades closer to the ref pic. And you lazily made the slashing and... noodle smack? Er, see what you did was just make one pose for the arm, and then rotated it. That makes it choppy and unattractive.

So, if you can fix that, I can approve this. :)

[ReSpored]

ok i'll try

[Rakia]

Umm...that twister thing needs more animations, I think.

[ReSpored]

no i ues'd the same amout mof frames that tenguman uses for his wind tornadow

[Rakia]

I know, but it looks odd still. It's probably because of the lines in yours.

[Fuzion]

Nice. But I do agree on the tornado...

[Skull Master]

Ya, the tornadow looks like its eating something. I think the rest looks good. (though, Noodle Man HIMSELF is complietly retarded.)

[garethfurbank]

(though, Noodle Man HIMSELF is complietly retarded.)

Agreed. However, the sprites are damn good, and if you sort out the twister with a few more frames then you'll have a fantastic sheet here.

[ReSpored]

yeah even i myself thing the first frame looks pretty good,the second look werid

[mega rock.exe]

They look good. The mugshot needs to show more face. Everything else is fine.

[ReSpored]

i know i going to actuly make a good mugshot

[ReSpored]

ok so i try'd adding frames to the noodle twister,but none of them looked right,and i'm not that good at making EXE Mugshots

[DragonZero]

So you're going to ask me to do it? Better not. Everyone here hates my sprites.:g-twitch: :g-twitch: :g-twitch:

[Skull Master]

So you're going to ask me to do it? Better not. Everyone here hates my sprites.:g-twitch: :g-twitch: :g-twitch:

Holy carap, calm down, you just need to improove on your shading! :g-twitch:

@ReSpored: Dubble posting may be hasardus to you'r helth.

[DragonZero]

Ok, ok, ok.

[Skull Master]

Thanks...:g-Gaga:

[Rakia]

Woah, random outburst.
You don't have to get Emo on us.
It's called Constructive Critisism! To quote Blackbelt dude,
C+C means, "Constructive Critisizm." Of course, some people might say it stands for something else, but it's usally all the same in terms of the meaning. Basically, when you C+C something, you want to do 2 things:
1) Point out the positives of the sprite. What you liked and why, what the spriter did well, ect.

2) Point out the negitives of the sprite. What you didn't like and why, how they could improve, ect.

Anyways, this topic isn't about you.

ReSpored,
All you havta do is try. Maybe you should look at other MMBN mugshots, study their shading and their outlines. You'll get the hang of it eventually.

[ReSpored]

i have try'd it alway looks werid,mostly the eyes or the mouth

[Repliroid20XX]

Just a quick note: "NoodleMan.EXE" is actually SanukiMan.EXE, after Sanuki, the noodle restaurant he promotes in the Anime

[ReSpored]

his name still basicly means noodleman in the end anyway,but yeah i couldn't remember how to spell that version of his name so i use'd the one more commonly use't,atleast when ever i hear him being talked about