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I kinda decide to make one of these. I notice that some of my work don't look so well,but i can't tell. Mostly cause i'm not good with it. I will be updating from time to time. I would actually like a few feed back on what should be fixed and what should be improve. Note: Please, before you go all out and say I suck nuts because I didn't do this or that or because it's a somewhat recolor, I.AM.NOT.A.GOOD.SPRITER AND I F%$@ING HATE SHADING AND I SUCK AT IT !!!!!!!! If u want to see awsome stuff,go to SC page or someone else. Other then that enjoy :P
I will tell which one is PD(Not that any1 would even use them -.-) and which is not.
Long Haired Aile is PD
Django is NOT PD
And Derreka and Kendra...Well, ask me if u want to use them.I made them for my friend's story anyway.U can use as long as u give credit to me :P
These are the ones i made for my friends. This is absolutely not PD and I really hope that no one will use them.Most of them are from DeviantArt
Adrouv and Adrieus By Zionzap(edited by Keoke)
Blade and Hannah made for Swordman16
A Model that i created for my friend Swordman16 from DeviantArt. This is suppose to be the BioElf Form of Sir Pent.Note:A BioElf is not a Biometal, It is an Elf that can Use Elf Fusion(or Cyber On)
THIS IS NOT PD!!! DO NOT EVEN TOUCH IT!! I ONLY PUT IT HERE SO I CAN SEE IF PEOPLE WILL COME BY AND POINT OUT MY MISTAKE OR WAT I NEED TO FIX!!!!
This Sheet is Completed
Credit to Zionzap for making Hannah's Cyber-On
Also credit for SC, mostly cause i used his Femine version alittle.the legs and stuff.
Renegadier
18-02-09, 00:45
My, Keoke, you must remove that white space in some of the gaps.
But, really, it still confuses me why Hannah doesn't do the Serpent attacks.
ToaTakanuva6
18-02-09, 02:27
So...Great! Keep up the good work...
Zero James Magnion
18-02-09, 02:31
But, really, it still confuses me why Hannah doesn't do the Serpent attacks.
Same principle as model OX for Vent and Aile: Vent is skiled at physical combat while Aile excels as a marksman.
Aside from the fact that you need to learn to mange your empty space, you do quite well. I especially Like Model SP's mode with the claws you don't see that a lot period in the MM series.
Same principle as model OX for Vent and Aile: Vent is skiled at physical combat while Aile excels as a marksman.
Aside from the fact that you need to learn to mange your empty space, you do quite well. I especially Like Model SP's mode with the claws you don't see that a lot period in the MM series.
Thank you.I'm glad you liked it.And like u said,yes, Blade is suppose to be physically strong and use close range attacks and Hannah is far range.The reason i did that is if I put both of them with claws,it would be like a copy and a bit less intresting.I also have to say,I'm a bit(okay,alot) sexist,as i believe guys are more for hand to hand,and girls with range/distance attacks.The empty space is incase i need to add more and I use white because i hate to turn the picture back to white,when ever i need to use.I actually hate the other colors cause it is a pain to recolor and stuff :P
Also,The reason Hannah does a different Serpent attack is beacuse she has a different weapon,that's kinda all.
Django Face Fixed.Also fixed the Sabata shoe,only slightly
Also Added Black/Dark Django
Zero James Magnion
19-02-09, 00:51
The aura is very sloppily done. it should only be a 1 or two pixel layer around your character, evenly mirroring his form.
The fire attacks are very nice I must say. They are very fluid looking.
Your charged shot needs more shading, as well as that big laser he fires. Use some official sprites with charged shots as a reference.
The Big Bang Blazer is a pretty cool concept, however, this is my opinion mind you, you should have him flare that aura, and then have it dissipate before he charges the ball. The way you have it now looks very clustered and sloppy. Something that needs to be fixed on that attack is the aura needs to be on the same level as the feet. attacks should not go through floors unless they are meant to (cheap ass bosses).
Once again, tighten up your sheets, too much negative space. For some people, it actually lags the page.
The aura is very sloppily done. it should only be a 1 or two pixel layer around your character, evenly mirroring his form.
The fire attacks are very nice I must say. They are very fluid looking.
Your charged shot needs more shading, as well as that big laser he fires. Use some official sprites with charged shots as a reference.
The Big Bang Blazer is a pretty cool concept, however, this is my opinion mind you, you should have him flare that aura, and then have it dissipate before he charges the ball. The way you have it now looks very clustered and sloppy. Something that needs to be fixed on that attack is the aura needs to be on the same level as the feet. attacks should not go through floors unless they are meant to (cheap ass bosses).
Once again, tighten up your sheets, too much negative space. For some people, it actually lags the page.
Hmm...thnx,i'll see what i can do,lol :D
I'm going to leave Derrek's charge shot and aura as it is,since i'm too lazy to actually make it look good.But'll take ur advice on Model B's attack
Ryo Hazaki
19-02-09, 15:40
A lot of the models need better contrast and shading.
Well,this is suppose to be like,my nonmegaman section i guess.Not sure if it's allowed,that's for sure,but i don't really care.
These are my Yggdra union Sprites(i love that game,lol.almost as much as i love megaman and Fire emblem :D)
Please do not say anything about the portriats.YES,I KNOW,THE F%@#ING COLORS AND STUFF DON'T WORK!!BUT U TRY COLORING ABOUT A TOTAL OF 20 DIFFERENT COLOR PER BODY PARTS OR SO!!!!! SO SHUT UP!!!!!!
Note:most of them are pretty much in deviantArt :P
okay,now that we got that out of my system,here's the links:
http://keoke-kun.deviantart.com/art/Yggdra-Union-Masteria-Cards-104625660?submitted=1 (renamed and changed abilities)
http://keoke-kun.deviantart.com/art/Masteria-L-O-D-Characters-104705793 (my characters :P)
http://keoke-kun.deviantart.com/art/Masteria-L-O-D-Portraits-104765103 (most of their portraits)
Their Sprites Sheets
A lot of the models need better contrast and shading.
Please read my first post on top. I think i putted in like big bold letters say how much i hate shading and how i suck ass at it.
Lord Wraith
19-02-09, 18:28
But if you suck at something, you should want to improve at it. Develop your skills, take pride in your work. Saying you hate it and suck is just being lazy.
Just ask for help, plenty of people around here would have no problem teaching you how to shade properly.
But if you suck at something, you should want to improve at it. Develop your skills, take pride in your work. Saying you hate it and suck is just being lazy.
Just ask for help, plenty of people around here would have no problem teaching you how to shade properly.
I would love too...but the thing is..I'm just a very stubborn jackass and i never really like to get help from people.Also,i don't really wanna be a bother.And most of he time,i hardly understand :P
And i'm lazy....
But thnx for advice
Ryo Hazaki
19-02-09, 19:18
Oh, wow that sounds familiar...
*waits for the eventual Drei and Tuna rant*
Oh, wow that sounds familiar...
*waits for the eventual Drei and Tuna rant*
????????
Yeah,it's 1 of those excuse u hear from those wannbe and really lazy people.
Made this awhile ago. Bored,and wanted to try out my model with a friend's :P
Zero James Magnion
19-02-09, 19:38
I would love too...but the thing is..I'm just a very stubborn jackass
Then use that inherant stubborness and learn yourself. Read a guide to learn or have someone help you a little bit (say, shade one pose the official way), and proceed to fill it to the rest of the sheet. That would be tottaly acceptable.
The animation looks pretty good. Though when the rock on, it seems a little choppy. Use an official rock-on and determine where to go from there.
Then use that inherant stubborness and learn yourself. Read a guide to learn or have someone help you a little bit (say, shade one pose the official way), and proceed to fill it to the rest of the sheet. That would be tottaly acceptable.
The animation looks pretty good. Though when the rock on, it seems a little choppy. Use an official rock-on and determine where to go from there.
okay,thnx :D
Choppy? What u mean by that? Oh,it must be cause i didn't use the "normal" rock on where this thing engulfs the person and transform them right?
I don't know how to do that...Yet...
Also,i made this cause i was bored,like everything i made up there in this post.
Oh, wow that sounds familiar...
*waits for the eventual Drei and Tuna rant*
Shush you. I was gone for a while.
You have two sprite threads. You only need one.
Please type more coherently. You also have no excuse for being bad at shading other than not trying.
The mugshots are really conflicting. The hair is not anti-aliased, thus it doesn't blend like the eyes and mouths do. Kendra and Derraka are pretty much recolours of each other, and are just headswaps of Aile with a terribly contrasted purple/red. Blade and Hanna suffer from similar problems. All four of them have terribly shaped hair, except for Blade. Blade's model uses horrible MSPaint lime green, instead of an official palette. The claws are nice, though all of the effects look terribly done with the MSPaint shape tools. Django doesn't seem to be holding his weapons and has wide yet short boots.
Oh boy. Another kid who thinks that changing something in a "bad" word will make it acceptable. This "Hot Ass Fire Model" looks like Model F with two shades of red, one shade for the visor, but no horns. Derrek is another basic edit.
I have no idea what is or isn't yours when you talk about Deviant Art. The recent images look like official sprites. I skipped Andrieus and Androuv because it seemed like someone else made them.
Tl;Dr for whatever reason, this wasn't as long as expected.
Okay, generic newbie who is spriting in ZX. Needs to use official palettes and make his sprite non-lolgenericmaincharacteredit.
Let's see...
The claw-blur is Model P's throwing attack, rotated many times, the resizing on some of the effects are...bleck...You used MSPaint circles for the "Cyber On!" and the Flamethrower looks insanely familiar. The claws are familiar too, perhaps from a snake boss from MMZ? I dunno.
Shush you. I was gone for a while.
You have two sprite threads. You only need one.
Please type more coherently. You also have no excuse for being bad at shading other than not trying.
The mugshots are really conflicting. The hair is not anti-aliased, thus it doesn't blend like the eyes and mouths do. Kendra and Derraka are pretty much recolours of each other, and are just headswaps of Aile with a terribly contrasted purple/red. Blade and Hanna suffer from similar problems. All four of them have terribly shaped hair, except for Blade. Blade's model uses horrible MSPaint lime green, instead of an official palette. The claws are nice, though all of the effects look terribly done with the MSPaint shape tools. Django doesn't seem to be holding his weapons and has wide yet short boots.
Oh boy. Another kid who thinks that changing something in a "bad" word will make it acceptable. This "Hot Ass Fire Model" looks like Model F with two shades of red, one shade for the visor, but no horns. Derrek is another basic edit.
I have no idea what is or isn't yours when you talk about Deviant Art. The recent images look like official sprites. I skipped Andrieus and Androuv because it seemed like someone else made them.
Tl;Dr for whatever reason, this wasn't as long as expected.
Okay, generic newbie who is spriting in ZX. Needs to use official palettes and make his sprite non-lolgenericmaincharacteredit.
Actually,Django's Thread if for Django's sprite only.This 1 is random stuff i made and feel like posting and getting people to point out stuff i messed up on.Let's see..where should i start...
I have never really actually pay attention to where light's shine,and that is my fault.I have tried shading,but when i try,it never look right to me.My eyes are not really good with all those color going darker or light,so yes,u got a point there.I also type like like this because i got use to typing in short way(i know,it's bad) and I am not Exactly(?) the best speller in the world.
Yes,Kendra and Derreka are notthing but recolor or each.WhY? I didn't feel like making them look different and Didn't feel like doing to much work changing them.Why? Well..too lazy,not enough time,and a jackass.I also don't see much point,Since they both only sid characters i made When i was bored and had notthing else to do,like Django.Also,Aile was based off both the girls.I created Long hair Aile AFTER I made those 2,then I went and randomally made Hannah.They just random color i just use.Since I'm more of a black and white person,I never got use to color.Actually,i don't even like black and white at all..Blade's hair was based of an NPC and Well,pretty much that's all.Yes,I used MSPaint to actually make everysingle one of these.Why would I do that? I never got use to using photoshop or anything too advance.I never said that Blade was made with offcial color and he isn't.I gave him a Random color because my friend says his clothes look to much like grey's so I picked a color that i could find,pretty much :P.Django is actually holding his weapon,but due to the fact i made the Gun Del Sol into a copy of battle net work,he actually don't,and I have never really seen how the gun del sol look like outside of BN.I'm still planing out how to change it(still looking for a good buster)His wide and Short boots is because I based him off the original Django from(u guessed it!!) Battle network.I did my best to "change" it but mantain it too look like Django's original shoes.If it gets any bigger,u won't really see Django's leg much.
And Thnk u, I hate that phrase too.I should have cutted it out.I think I was really bored when i made that phase.As hot as fire huh?hmm..should make a new one.Think it's been used...oh well! I also love how you can just tell by looking,you are good :D, Yes,i had no idea what I should do for the mug.At first,i tried Model Ox's helmet,but it was no use,so i had to randomally make a mug.I had no idea what to do,and just decided to make something weird.Most of my stuff,I made it cause I was bored..or just have notthing to do.It is basically model F,but mostly the white part cause I couldn't find anything else.The Visor was made(okay okay!!I cuted and pasted then edited) based on Giro's when he was in model Z.Reason why model B has 2 shade of red?Just go up there and read the color section,I don't feel like repeating,And It was not suppose to have horns.Hmm..Where do you see horns?Gotta check on that.Yes,Derrek was a basic Edit,just like Kosuke(my other person) I made him for fun,like all my stuff.Actually,I just randomally found a NPC I thought looks funny and just edit it,lol.Also,did you know that Blade was based off Derrek? :D
What is mine in Devaint Art would be the recolor,and Random edits of portraits and I think thats all.The images ARE suppose to be official Sprites.I just edited it,like what all useless people that can;t really do much do.Adrouv and Adriues is actually by my friend,so of course they would look better.I only edited alittle,notthing more.
Wow,You're right.It really is not as long as I thought..oh well.Generic Newbie..such a nice word.I could go for useless wannabe more you know,lol.
To tell the truth..I have no idea what a "official palette" is and I have no idea what "non-lolgenericmaincharacteredit" is. But you know,You really pointed out alot for me.I don't ever really look at my work at all so this is a great help.Thanks :D
Let's see...
The claw-blur is Model P's throwing attack, rotated many times, the resizing on some of the effects are...bleck...You used MSPaint circles for the "Cyber On!" and the Flamethrower looks insanely familiar. The claws are familiar too, perhaps from a snake boss from MMZ? I dunno.
Let's see...I wish what you said about the claw Blur was true..but i actually made that my self and...well...Why do you think it looks weird,I made it myself of course.
I actually don't really...make such good effect.The Cyber on is yes,made from MSpaint.Everything is actually made from MSpaint.The flame thrower's from a boss.Well,the flame anyway.The weapon's from Marksman.The sprite was made by this guy..I forgot his name through...crap...And yes,:D, I like how you have such sharp eyes and memorie.He was made based on Sir pent,something my friend,Swordman16,made.The boss is the snake boss,Ummm..He's from MMZ 2.I forgot his name.Here's link to my friend who made pent.That was pretty much the person i based off.
http://swordman16.deviantart.com/art/Sir-Pent-sprites-111511608
Like the title said..Please,do not ask what this is...I did not know why i post this or anything.I guess i ran out of stuff to do.Please,please,please,please,PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! don't ask or say too much.
I made this when I was testing out my photoshop and decided to make a few animation and testing the diagloue thing.It usually loads slow,so i tried it.Who knew it would take about like....15 or so frames?!
man you got skills
maybe i'll put mine up...oneday
man you got skills
maybe i'll put mine up...oneday
Na.I'm just a wanna be.I saw your sprites too.It's nice.You should put yours up.
i'm thinking about it i'll send you a pm to explain what planing
Okay...Sorry for thinking that was Model P's swipe.(should have looked at the sprite for Model P first :/) Other than the fact that the shading isn't too good, which you've explained, the Axl thing is kinda neat.
Okay...Sorry for thinking that was Model P's swipe.(should have looked at the sprite for Model P first :/) Other than the fact that the shading isn't too good, which you've explained, the Axl thing is kinda neat.
Heh,Thanks. Didn't think any one could tell that it was actually Axl.Maybe I made it too obvious? ^^;
It don't matter. much...
These are pretty much all the people and models that's in/going to be in my comic, Megaman SPK
I made most of them EXCEPT:
Model Marksman, Made by DNZ.Exe
Model F(lame) S(tag) Model V(ile)X and Model G(ate), Made by Darx
Adrouv and His model G(ate) mug is By Zionzap/Renegadier
Pandora is made by Capcom
Also Credits to Soviet Commendo of course,because most of them I based off his sprites,alittle( like Hannah's model SP,the femine one)
I'm still working on a few of them,Like Hecate's model. I'll either make one,or just find a PD sprite( IF ANYONE HAS A ICE TYPE MODEL/SPRITE THAT THEY DON'T MIND ME USING,PLEASE TELL ME.I WILL GIVE CREDIT,EVEN IF IT IS PD AND THANK YOU!!!)
And Also, I DIDN'T CARE MUCH ABOUT THE GOD OF GUN'S MUG,SO DON'T ASK TOO MUCH OR SAY TOO MUCH.I DON'T CARE ABOUT IT,SO PISS OFF YOU FREAKEN ASSHOLES THAT COMPLAIN ABOUT EVEN THE SLIGHTIST THINGS!!!!!
Okay,with that out of the way, I edit more and stuff. Until then, Enjoy :P
And Also, I DIDN'T CARE MUCH ABOUT THE GOD OF GUN'S MUG,SO DON'T ASK TOO MUCH OR SAY TOO MUCH.I DON'T CARE ABOUT IT,SO PISS OFF YOU FREAKEN ASSHOLES THAT COMPLAIN ABOUT EVEN THE SLIGHTIST THINGS!!!!!
My ears… are bleeding… x_x
No, seriously, I beg you : calm down before somebody hands you a warning.
Anyway...
Out of curiosity... who's Model V wielder? Surprise?
My ears… are bleeding… x_x
No, seriously, I beg you : calm down before somebody hands you a warning.
Anyway...
Out of curiosity... who's Model V wielder? Surprise?
Heh..I can't really tell yet,sorry. If i tell,i pretty much ruin my story. If you want,you can save it to your computer the go to it and use white tranparancy on it. But you don't have to.
Or you can just make the screen very dark and squit ur eyes really hard and make out the letters i put in. Yes,i put it in a lighter blue then light blue :P.
And um, What do you mean by calm down before some 1 give me a warning? o.0?
[fish in space]
23-02-09, 01:03
And Also, I DIDN'T CARE MUCH ABOUT THE GOD OF GUN'S MUG,SO DON'T ASK TOO MUCH OR SAY TOO MUCH.I DON'T CARE ABOUT IT,SO PISS OFF YOU FREAKEN ASSHOLES THAT COMPLAIN ABOUT EVEN THE SLIGHTIST THINGS!!!!!
Okay,with that out of the way, I edit more and stuff. Until then, Enjoy :P
Haha, you think this forum complains about the slightest things? You've clearly never been to a forum dedicated to spriting. you would get ripped in two.
Haha, you think this forum complains about the slightest things? You've clearly never been to a forum dedicated to spriting. you would get ripped in two.
Ah yes, those forums. Personally, I have never been to one. It's amazing how people would even notice the most unnotice things to normal people. Pretty much,this place is almost like that,well kinda. I guess that's what they call a spriter's eyes or some crap. Personally, I don't even care one bit about what anybody says(like that gundam guy,Drei right?).Well,most of the time anyway(after reading his commet,i felt even felt like quitting spriter*laughs*that is some powerful stuff you people have :P) Oh well,even if i did,i get over it eventually,sooner or later. I actually just hope that you won't go all out and go *OMFG!! YOU COLOR IT WRONG!USE THE FREAKEN ORIGINAL COLOR PALLETS YOU NOOB@@@!!!LEARN TO DO *This crap,that crap*. *Laughs*
Fluttershy
23-02-09, 01:40
Ok, you really need to calm down. Sometimes the crit is harsh but you need to listen to it to get better as a spriter. I got the SAME stuff you're getting when I first started out and look at what I'm able to do now. You really do need to learn how to get shading right though. Hell, I'll try and help you if I can. It's really not that hard to do, just get an official sprite beside what you need to shade and try to replicate it. And if you're gonna act like what Darx quoted then everyone's going to pretty much just ignore you. Now, you just need to practice and LISTEN to what people say even if it's harsh, it's the only way you'll improve.
Ok, you really need to calm down. Sometimes the crit is harsh but you need to listen to it to get better as a spriter. I got the SAME stuff you're getting when I first started out and look at what I'm able to do now. You really do need to learn how to get shading right though. Hell, I'll try and help you if I can. It's really not that hard to do, just get an official sprite beside what you need to shade and try to replicate it. And if you're gonna act like what Darx quoted then everyone's going to pretty much just ignore you. Now, you just need to practice and LISTEN to what people say even if it's harsh, it's the only way you'll improve.
I know. Ijust choose to be a jackass some times. Actually,i never saw your sprites,*laughs* I'll go steal take rob I mean check it out sometimes,yeah that it...
Also,I got use to harsh words,alittle. I am calm,just overegsagerating,that's all :P
awsome stuff looks when I finish whith my sprites let's trade sometime.
MWAHAHAHAH!!! I HAVE CREATED THIS MY SELF AND I AM THE BEST!! MWAHAHAAH!! GET DOWN ON YOUR KNEES AND KISS MY FOOT YOU N00BS!!!
MWAHAHAHA!!!
*laughs* Just kidding!!(Gets glass bottle hurled at) OOF!!
Okay,i take it people here have really bad or no sense of humor at all and can't take a joke(*people from forum* STFU NOOB!!!!)...
Okay,either way, I pretty much took Darx's Model V(ile)x (Gets a brick thrown at by Darx) ouch, and took Soviet commendo's Feminine version of X (Gets a brick thrown at by SC) ow, and smashed them togther ( everyone at Sprites inc start throwing stuff at Keoke "BOO!! GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE YOU LOSER!!")DAME IT!! STOP THAT!! And yeah, That's kinda all. I didn't felt like doing too much either,so this is just like something I made for fun. I guess this would have to be PD since it actually belong to Darx and I just messed it up completely (IT'S RAINING BRICKS AND STEEL PIPES!!!) and credit to SC since I used his feminine design, *laughs*
Enjoy!(I guess ^^; )
Ah yes, those forums. Personally, I have never been to one. It's amazing how people would even notice the most unnotice things to normal people. Pretty much,this place is almost like that,well kinda. I guess that's what they call a spriter's eyes or some crap. Personally, I don't even care one bit about what anybody says(like that gundam guy,Drei right?).Well,most of the time anyway(after reading his commet,i felt even felt like quitting spriter*laughs*that is some powerful stuff you people have :P) Oh well,even if i did,i get over it eventually,sooner or later. I actually just hope that you won't go all out and go *OMFG!! YOU COLOR IT WRONG!USE THE FREAKEN ORIGINAL COLOR PALLETS YOU NOOB@@@!!!LEARN TO DO *This crap,that crap*. *Laughs*
Huh? Oh, you haven't, like most other spriters who insist on not taking critique. Well, right here in my sig is a link to the least respected spriting forum because of its seriousness. It is also in Tuna's signature. Also I stopped reading your reply to my post before the first few sentences, I knew how it was going to end.
Right, second to latest post. Rebecca's model's mug is a recolour. As are the other two except for the middle one which lacks proper anti-aliasing. Everyone has the same boring stance with similar problems, mostly lying in the colours and the lack of originality. If you want colours, look on the main site's sheets. Especially the ZXA NPC's.
Latest. Copy and paste job of the head and the unique feature. Even though that is what SC's older PD models pretty much were...
Huh? Oh, you haven't, like most other spriters who insist on not taking critique. Well, right here in my sig is a link to the least respected spriting forum because of its seriousness. It is also in Tuna's signature. Also I stopped reading your reply to my post before the first few sentences, I knew how it was going to end.
Right, second to latest post. Rebecca's model's mug is a recolour. As are the other two except for the middle one which lacks proper anti-aliasing. Everyone has the same boring stance with similar problems, mostly lying in the colours and the lack of originality. If you want colours, look on the main site's sheets. Especially the ZXA NPC's.
Latest. Copy and paste job of the head and the unique feature. Even though that is what SC's older PD models pretty much were...
Yeah,i went there once.Never really went in too far through,thought it was some game site,*laughs*
Yay! I'm glad too! I kinda skipped to the part on the bottem to yours too :P
Don't worry,like how you thought,it's just some random crap all Noobs and wannabe spriters would say,What else would you expect? laughs*
Yeah,her's is pretty much a recolor. I made it a while ago and well..I was just looking for a character and randomally(okay,i flipped a coin too) found somebody. I'm not really going to change the mug, since it's been like...a month too late?
And yeah...I did say i hate colors right? Don't matter, I don't really care much about what happens anyway. It's a recolor,it's a recolor. Don't feel like being too much of a good spriter anyway. Me wannabe,not spriter :P
Ryo Hazaki
24-02-09, 10:54
Well, Drei, you forgot to add that that was all that Model VX was/is too.
But comparing it to the original Model VX, it's not that bad, and a good interpretation of a female user of Model VX, similar to SC's Model X Feminine design.
But comparing it to the original Model VX, it's not that bad, and a good interpretation of a female user of Model VX, similar to SC's Model X Feminine design.
Really? A good interpretation would have it more than just a headswap and recolour. The design itself should be changed, which is the problem with Keoke. Keoke isn't creating his own designs as much as he is using and slightly altering others.
[fish in space]
24-02-09, 21:19
Keoke, look at this tutorial (http://sheezyart.com/art/view/1806434/). Its not that great of a tutorial but pay the most attention to the first point. Design your character before you sprite them. This seems to be one of your biggest issues because not only are you editing the sprite off another character, which is okay when you're beginning, but it also looks like you are editing your character design off another character, which is a big nono, it guarantees that subconsciously you will be trying to make it as much like the character your basing it off of as possible. This rule is of course exempt when scratching.
Fluttershy
24-02-09, 21:50
Actually, This (http://themechanicalmaniacs.com/guides/spriteguide.php) is a much better spriting guide to go by.
[fish in space]
24-02-09, 22:19
I've really never liked gauntlet's much. i have to post some really good tutorials later. But anyway, I wasn't posting it for the tutorial anyway, I was just making a point.
Thanks guys. I appresiate the help. Tutorials always are the best,especially ones that explains really well and is funny :D
Also Drei, you are right about what I did with model Vx. But I wasn't really trying to do too much or anything. I only edited. Notthing more then that.
I was bored
I saw this in a video,having to do with megaman X, commend mission or watever and I thought it was cool. It's when the 3 heros combine their attacks to finish their enemy( X and Axl d0ing rapid fire shoots and Zero goes in and slashes them)
Notthing is better then seeing the 3 togther kicking butt like old time, Lol
Maybe I'll do their victory pose next
The video i saw in was from here,well pretty much:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5cSTuclz4r0
Song is "Life goes on"
by Mika Arisaka and is from Gundum Seed Destiny(or something like that)
The most Epic battle in the entire megaman worlds.....
The protecters vs the destroyers,
The lord of life,the lord of destruction,and the lord of guns
Vs
The Dark Messiah,Omega,The Dark Lord of guns,Delta, and the Dark hyperion copy,Copy X
Who will win? The light,or the darkness? Good,or evil? Copies,or originals?
Let the battle of all time...begin!
ENJOY!
*note, I made up of all the names(god of gun,etc)I don't care who is who so don't come out of no where and tell me I suck cock because I give them a different name from what you want.*
Bored,
Don't you just want to face palm whenever something like this happened?
In your last three posts, what certifies them being posted here and not in a comic thread?
In your last three posts, what certifies them being posted here and not in a comic thread?
They are actually not suppose to be my comics. They are pretty much just,well, kinda like sprites since i just smashed them togther. If it cause a problem,i can always make another thread on comics,but....
Besides that,I consider this thread here as something to...post anything i made on?
Tell me if it cause a problem and I'll fix it
Also,if i post on comics,it would be a waste of space as it is not really comics,just random stuff. I can't put on smug(well i could) because...just because.
A scratch,cut and paste that I made,with alittle help from others. I was bored,thought of it when i was listening to "Ali Eve Shinseiki" by Ali project. Well the story anyway. I just felt like spriting him,since spriting was easier than drawing.
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Supposingly, This guy's name is Silfaren,from the future of 4000 H.D(Homosaphien Diffusion) and is the some what main character. He is actually not human at all,but an artifical intellgence made for war,known as a M.E.C.H (Mechanical Engineering Created Homosaphien) Created by scientist to fight against hostle extraterrecrial beings(aliens,etc) but mostly are used as either servents or anything else a normal human being would want them to be.. M.E.C.H looks like humans,but are not. Each have a power and is consider a war machine,but M.E.C.H are not suppose to harm human unless told too by their owners,so they are actually more near androids then war machines.Each M.E.C.H have their own feelings,known to be able to reproduce,and personality but all of them are extremly loyal to their masters,or Mechalizers. A M.E.C.H makes an eternal pact with their masters through a process called Mechalization or just "Meced" which is made from either a simple kiss(or if the owner is of same gender,bloodtransfer or something like that would work but them too can just give a kiss). When Meced,the M.E.C.H will be granted extra power(mostly from want and love from masters,think of dogs). A normal non-meced M.E.C.H can use normal power(from psychic to controlling fire)
while a Meced one has the ability of Symbolicism(combining with owner,granting owners their ability and power) Mechalisim(ability to became a giant mech,would contolled by owner from inside,moves as owner's will) and would have powers they can't use when un-meced. [link] come in many forms and can transfrom to many forms too. From a ball to a human,or a dog to fish, and the way to tell us by their Serial number on their body.
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Silfaren(sil-fer-win)
Serial #: 0000-0001
Database:Name means silver wind ,ability use wind power,speed of a small whirlwind,and is a close hand-to-hand combat and swordman.
Mechalizer:unknown
Credit to Zionzap for help with a few things.
TL;DR, could you sum it up? Also, the hair is very pillowshaded. And large.
TL;DR, could you sum it up? Also, the hair is very pillowshaded. And large.
Oh yeah, I should fix the hair,but don't feel like it. His hair was suppose to be like that,well,in a drawing anyway. I'm still working on it. As for the color,not that good with shading or coloring,tryed to use "official pallets" or something. Guess i failed. I was bored,i made him in sprite because i can't draw and spriting is kinda easyer.
Please don't come up with excuses, pillow shading is never a good thing.
kosuke if you need a bit of help i'm here
Even through this should be in Feplanet instead of Spriter...I'll put it here anyway cause..well i like spriter more and i don't really feel that welcome in FEplanet(actually i don't feel welcome anywhere,but what ever)
A sprited and fire emblem version of my Characters from my story Maho To Sei. This is pretty much them..more or less. I'll be making a few more,so...pretty much. Of course, like usual, It may look really off and bad but......, forget it. Nevermind
I felt i had to sharped my Fire emblem skills alittle more(i've been spring megaman for a while now)
Notthing more to say. Enjoy :P
Boy:Seimei(codename:Sei)
Girl:Sayra(Codename:Yai)
http://fc36.deviantart.com/fs43/f/2009/099/b/0/Sei_X_Sayra_FE_version_by_Keoke_kun.jpg
WOAH! Sayra has GIGANTIC hair in sprite form!
The 2nd part of my Characters from Maho to Sei in Fire emblem style.
Girl:Zakura(Codename:Kyuu)
Boy:Flight(Codename:Shii)
Twin assassins. Zakura is Expert on Bow,hardly ever open her eyes and never miss her targets(which is kinda ironic isn't it?) and the battle freak, Flight.User of Chinese martial Arts, a complete bonehead and psychopath. A one trick pony,you could say. He only think about fighting.
WOAH! Sayra has GIGANTIC hair in sprite form!
actually, Sayra always have large hair. She has a Right side ponytail and long hair. I trust you saw how she looks like in picture right? She has really long hair.
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Zerake,(Code name) Shino,
Also known as Ninja boy.
The son and the last remaining person of The Lunar Clan Ninja, a clan of ninja that is said to have the power of the moon it self. He used to be the guardian of the forest where his tribe use to be,a protecter from all those that try to destory it. He lives with Seimei after the incident and is a consent fighter with Flight(Shia).
He is the master of Tsuki No Jutsu, hence his Right eye being Silver or grayish( it is normally green,but it becomes silver when ever he use a Ninpo) and inherits the Lunar Blade, a weapon passed down from generations to generation from the TsuKunshu(Moon Lord) to his son or the one worthy of it. The blade is a rundown rusty looking sword,but depending on the will and or the power of the moon, it becomes a powerful blade that can split apart a mountain.
He is a 5th rank ninja from his tribe(out of 7).
His specialty if swords,Ninpo and speed.
The Ninja sprite is made by Darkmatter122 from deviantArt so credit to him of course
Mask is not shaded in style.
Mask is not shaded in style.
I know,and i didn't care. I made it to look as like the normal as possible,but didn't want to work too hard on it. So yeah,it's messed up. Must be the shading again.
*Note: Because Feplanet is down(April 10,2009) for now,i had to manually make the stat sheet. It may not be the best one,but this pretty much would work. Until FEplanet is back up again,This would have to do. Please forgive me for the messy work on statsheet*
*Edit:FIXED*
Sasaki(codename:Shia)
Sasaki is a really happy go lucky person and is always found with a smile. She is the most optimistic person and is always happy, Hence her nick name,Shia(short for Shiawasa,which means happy)
She is a witch,a curse witch to be procise, and despite her dimwitted look,she is actually really powerful. She hardly ever open her eyes also(she is like the sun and moon with Zakura(Kyuu) ) but she does.
She hold the Eye of destruction, on her right eye, and as the name says, it destroy all she wants and gives her immense power so that is the reason Why she always have her eyes close(a spell is placed on her eye so when ever she close it,the eye of Destruction is prevented from activating)
Kind,careing, and always happy, she is the most helpful of the team.
More of a sprite then comic.
When all hell breaks loose.
This is what we call...
A ragnarok...
Zero James Magnion
27-04-09, 06:21
Hacked stats much? The screens, sprites, and mugs themselves are good, but you need to take a look at proper stat caps for certain classes. Even if they are custom, a clothie should not have 30 Def.
So any way, I tried to recolor some of my Y-U Characters, but it didn't turn out too well. I think i colored it wrong, and i think i'm going to need a little hand here. If anyone here can help me recolor her better, please feel free to do it. You will be doing me a great favor,and thank you :D
Recolors. Seriously? Well, whatever. The whole thing seems very rough.
Recolors. Seriously? Well, whatever. The whole thing seems very rough.
Well, Actually, Recolor is almost the best i can do. I know the recolor is a bit off, so i kinda need some help here. And also, the thing is that there is a total of over 40 or so colors in Y-U Sprites. That,and Scratching them would be just Hell. Recoloring is already bad enough, i don't really wanna think about scratching them now.
Keoke, I'm sorry in advance if I'm speaking out of turn, because I'm very much new meat around here and whatnot but you seem to not care and prefer being "lazy" a lot... I don't know half as much about the harnessing of pixels as the rest of the people on here but looking at your stuff it seems to me like you wouldn't even have to spend that much time rejigging a few bits and bobs to make your sprites look so much better. I think they look pretty damn good at the moment but at the same time I can still see areas that would benefit from a bit of extra work. Even if you spent 15 mins cleaning up that pillow shading on Silfaren's hair or something.
Once again, sorry if I'm a bit above my station but your work has the potential to be really, really awesome and it would be a massive shame if you just left it.
Keoke, I'm sorry in advance if I'm speaking out of turn, because I'm very much new meat around here and whatnot but you seem to not care and prefer being "lazy" a lot... I don't know half as much about the harnessing of pixels as the rest of the people on here but looking at your stuff it seems to me like you wouldn't even have to spend that much time rejigging a few bits and bobs to make your sprites look so much better. I think they look pretty damn good at the moment but at the same time I can still see areas that would benefit from a bit of extra work. Even if you spent 15 mins cleaning up that pillow shading on Silfaren's hair or something.
Once again, sorry if I'm a bit above my station but your work has the potential to be really, really awesome and it would be a massive shame if you just left it.
No,no,no. You're right. I'm more of lazy and not too care. I guess I'm the only one to blame and I should spend more time fixing them then just randomly make it. I'm glad you took it out of your time to tell me that, I appreciate it.
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