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T3h_Waffleman
01-07-06, 19:39
Aside from being what would be a good name for an actual webcomic, Turnabout Webcomic is my MBT-exclusive story in the Phoenix Wright universe. The first chapter is currently in progress, and it will deal with members of the actual MBT. I'll try to use real names whenever I can, but for those that I just don't know, I'll try to give y'all names Capcom would be proud of.
Ace Nock has been murdered and Gaga's the prime suspect! Can Phoenix Wright, along with otaku Jeff, solve this case and save Manga-Gaga?
No.....NO!.....NOOOoooOOoOoOOo! NOT ACE!
T3h_Waffleman
23-07-06, 18:13
Little bit of a snag on my part...My computer got fried by lightning and I had to get a new one, which is also why I haven't been on the past 2 weeks. As it turns out, with great crashes comes great un-backed-up progress on the first chapper getting deleted-ness. But I can rebuild it. I have the WordPad.
You know...just because your not writting another random you know who story, I salute you good sir! this could be funny if done right, but if its a webcomic, then whats it doing here, but then your talking about Wordpad, so what is it?
T3h_Waffleman
23-07-06, 21:32
It's a fanfiction with characters based on the MBT, hence the name Webcomic. I just mentioned that that would be a good name for a Phoenix Wright-based webcomic. And sorry for the double post. As you can probably guess, it was accidental. Delete one away!
Ah I see, well as long as your not going to involve the blue bomber in your fan fiction, I'll be happy. Care to give us a taster by any chance?
T3h_Waffleman
24-07-06, 22:19
Well, my progress got lost in the lightning, but I can give you the first part I've wirtten so far.
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Two silhouettes face each other.
"You! I thought I told you to get out of here!"
"Hehehehehehehehehehehe..."
One figure raises his arm.
"What the hell?!"
"Disrespect ends..."
BANG! The other shadow falls.
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Fan Episode
TURNABOUT WEBCOMIC
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T3h_Waffleman
01-08-06, 22:08
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Two silhouettes face each other.
"You! I thought I told you to get out of here!"
"Hehehehehehehehehehehe..."
One figure raises his arm.
"What the hell?!"
"Your comics are history..."
BANG! The other shadow falls.
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Fan Episode
TURNABOUT WEBCOMIC
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July 13th
11:23 AM
Wright & Co. Law Offices
Phoenix Wright sat at his desk surfing the Internet. He hadn't had a big case ever since State v. Skye, just few misdemeanor cases, and he had nothing else to do. Of course, those cases were made challenging by the "help" of Dick Gumshoe, who had become his assistant after being fired from the police force.
Gumshoe: Hey, Boss! Your 11:25's here!
Phoenix: (An appointment? How come I didn't find out about this til now?) Let him in.
Gumshoe: Alright, Boss! You can enter now.
Phoenix: ...(Where are they?)
???: Aah! VG Cats! A personal favorite of mine.
Phoenix: WAAUGH!!! Don't scare me like that!!
???: Sorry, Mr. Wright...
A young man in his late teens stood behind the startled attorney. A mop of dark hair adorned his head and a pair of round glasses sat on the lower bridge of his nose.
???: I didn't mean to startle you. I'm Jeff. Jeff Krull. And it's appropriate that you were reading a webcomic, because that's why I'm here!
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PROFILE ADDED TO COURT RECORD
Jeff Krull
Gender: Male
Age: 16
The self-appointed "ultimate non-otaku otaku." As T3h_waffleman, he goes around the internet preaching "Nerd Power."
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Phoenix: What do you mean by that?
Jeff: I came here because I wanted you to defend a friend of mine. A webcomic author.
Phoenix: What's he on trial for? Copyright infringement, slander, libel?
Jeff: None of those. He's being accused...of a murder.
Phoenix: A murder?! This may be just the case to get out of my rut!
Jeff: Erm...sure...He's being held at the detention center. I think it's best you talk to him first. I'll come with you.
July 16th
12:02 PM
Detention Center
Visitor's Room
Phoenix and Jeff sat down at the visitation booth. Phoenix thought about how many times he had been in this booth, either visiting or being held. As Phoenix was reminiscing, the guards has escorted in a man who looked to be a few years older than Jeff and had similar hair and glasses, only this person was a blonde.
Jeff: Gaga! I told you I'd help you!
???: Hey there, Waffleman. I'm amazed...most people would have given up on me in this situation.
Jeff: I'm not just a fan, you know. I'm your friend. And I haven't asked to be in the comic once, even though it's my one burning desire.
Phoenix: I feel a bit left out here...
Jeff: Oh! I'm sorry! Gaga, this is Phoenix Wright, the attorney I hired to defend you.
???: Nice to meet you, Mr. Wright. I'm Aaron Foster, but most people know me as Gagaman.
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PROFILE ADDED TO COURT RECORD
Aaron Foster
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Author of the popular Manga Gaga webcomic and tea aficionado. Likes Osaka.....yeah.
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Aaron: I warn you, Mr. Wright, this case won't be easy. With all the evidence against me, it would take a miracle to keep me out of prison.
Phoenix: Don't worry, Mr. Foster, I'm an expert on miracles. Why don't you tell me about the crime?
Aaron: Sure. Well, my good friend Ace Nock, the creator of my comic's sister site, Cosmic Hero, was shot in the chest last week at the Rocky Light Convention Center. I entered the room right after the crime occurred, and someone saw me there and called the police.
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PROFILE ADDED TO COURT RECORD
Ace Nock
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Webmaster of Cosmic Hero and Sprites INC. The victim in this case.
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Phoenix: I see. Your accent is distinctly British. Why are you here in America, and why were you at the convention center?
Aaron: Yes, I am from England. However, I came across the pond with Ace for Komix Kon, the annual comic, game, and animation show.
Jeff: Some say it's the biggest gathering of nerds in the country, and one of the biggest in the world!
Aaron: Me, Ace, and some of the members of the comic's message board, like Jeff here, were going to have a booth and participate in a panel.
Jeff: And I was gonna debut my new comic!
Aaron: Well, That's really all the information I can give you. You'll have to go to the center for more information. The trial is tomorrow, so you better get ready.
Jeff: I promise we'll get you free! Right, Phoenix?
Phoenix: Right! Well, we'll be seeing you tomorrow.
July 13th
1:00 PM
Rocky Light Convention Center
Jeff: Here we are!
Phoenix: There sure are a lot of police officers here.
Detective: Hey! This is a restriced area! Authorized personnel only!
A woman about a few years older than Phoenix stood in front of the two. Her red hair was tied in a ponytail and she was wearing a detective's jacket and had a stern look on her face.
Jeff: Pretty....girl...*drool*
Phoenix: Ummm...it's okay. I'm defending the suspect.
Detective: Oh, sorry then. My name's Shirley Locke, and I'm the head detective of this case!
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PROFILE ADDED TO COURT RECORD
Shirley Locke
Gender: Female
Age: 27
A police officer who was recently promoted to Detective. This is the first investigation that she is leading.
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Phoenix: I'm Phoenix Wright, and....this...is...
Jeff: *drool* I'm Jeff.....
Locke: Heh, no worries, I get that reaction a lot. I know you good, Mr. Wright! You're famous around the Police Department! "Turnabout Wright," that's what they call you!
Phoenix: Thanks...Do you have an autopsy report for the victim yet?
Locke: Sure! New protocols require autopsy reports for the defense and the prosecution.
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EVIDENCE ADDED TO COURT RECORD
Ace's Autopsy Report
Type: Documents
Recieved from Detective Shirley Locke
VICTIM: Ace Nock
TIME OF DEATH: July 9, between 7:30-8:30 AM
LOCATION OF DEATH: Rocky Light Convention Center, Room 12
MANNER OF DEATH: Single gunshot wound to chest. Victim lived for a few minutes after being shot.
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Jeff: I still can't believe Ace is dead...
Locke: A friend of the victim?
Phoenix: Yeah. Can we look around a bit?
Locke: Sure. Just don't get in our way.
Jeff: Alright! Let's look around out here first...Hey! I found something!
Phoenix: A flyer?
Jeff: It's a flyer for Komix Kon! You never know when it could come in handy!
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EVIDENCE ADDED TO COURT RECORD
Komix Kon Flyer
Type: Documents
Retrieved outside convention center
KOMIX KON
THE ULTIMATE DESTINATION
FOR ALL YOUR COMIC NEEDS!
July 8-11, 9AM-12PM
Rocky Light Convention Center
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Jeff: Komix Kon had to be postponed to next month...which means I won't be able to attend...What a disappointment...
Phoenix: (Jeff was really hoping to attend...I feel for him...) Don't worry, Jeff. There's always next year.
Jeff: Not if Gaga gets the chair! Which is why we gotta help him!
Phoenix: Maybe we can find some clues at the scene of the crime.
Jeff: Okay!
July 13th
1:15 PM
Rocky Light Convention Center
Room 12
Phoenix and Jeff stepped into one of the rooms used for private meetings and discussion panels. There was a bloodstain on the carpet and some of the furniture was knocked over.
Jeff: Looks like there was a scuffle here...
Phoenix: Yeah, and look at this bloodstain...And there's blood splattered on the walls...
Jeff: Oh god! Ace! *sniff* I hope they find the real killer and fry him!
Phoenix: I've lost a friend before...I understand how you feel...What's this?
Jeff: A piece of fabric? Must have been dropped by one of the detectives...
Phoenix: No, it's got a little blood on it...It had to have been here at the time of the murder.
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EVIDENCE ADDED TO COURT RECORD
Piece of Cloth
Type: Evidence
Retrieved at Rocky Light CC Room 12
A ripped piece of fabric with some dried blood on it. Of unknown origin.
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Jeff: Hey! there's something under this overturned table! A bullet!
Phoenix: It must have been fired by the murderer!
Jeff: There isn't really any blood on it...it must have been going too fast...
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EVIDENCE ADDED TO COURT RECORD
Bullet
Type: Weapons
Retrieved at Rocky Light CC Room 12
Most likely the bullet that killed the victim. Suspicously clean of blood or any bodily fluid.
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Jeff: There's nothing else here I can see...let's go see the booths! A lot of them haven't been taken down yet!
Phoenix: (I guess he was REALLY looking forward to this....I guess we could find someone who knows about the crime...)
July 13th
11:21 PM
Rocky Light Convention Center
Main Hall
Jeff: WOW! Look at all the cool stuff! Arachnid Dude! The Cobalt Cannoneer! During the con, these halls would be filled with fat middle-aged men dressing up as Sailor Moon and crap! Just like the last time Gaga went to a convention!
Phoenix: (I'm not even gonna ask...)
???: Hey! Waffleman! Wassap!
Jeff: GG! Good to see ya, bro!
A man a few years younger than Phoenix stood in front of them. He was wearing loose black jeans and a Jimi Hendrix shirt. He also had a real big afro. Typical rocker garb.
???: Yeah, I'm Rick Henderson, but everyone calls me GG Hendrix!
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PROFILE ADDED TO COURT RECORD
Rick Henderson
Gender: Male
Age: 21
One of the members of the MBT who came to Komix Kon. Prefers to be called GG Hendrix.
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Jeff: Why are you here, GG?
GG: Oh, just paying my respects to Ace. So, is this the lawyer you said you'd get?
Phoenix: Phoenix Wright. Nice to meet you.
GG: Likewise. The situation doesn't look too good for ol' Gaga, that's for sure. Did you hear? They've already got a couple witnesses.
Jeff: WHAT?! Witnesses?! WHO?!
GG: I don't know, but you definitely have you work cut out for you, Phoenix.
Phoenix: I've been up against worse odds. We should probably be getting back. I need to prepare my case.
Jeff: Will you come to the trial, GG?
GG: Sure! Gotta help a friend in need, you know?
Phoenix: Well, the trial is tomorrow. I can't lose this case. I have to win, not only for Aaron, but for Jeff and his friends. Little did I know, it would be harder than I thought to bring this killer to justice...
TO BE CONTINUED.
Save cleared stage data up to this point?
[YES] NO
Saving....
Game saved.
NEXT TIME ON TURNABOUT WEBCOMIC:
Jeff: It's the first day of the trial and there's surprises in store for everyone! This new prosecutor looks like a pushover, but he's vicious! And one of the witnesses testifies! Who could it be? Find out next time!
Nicely done, though knowing Hendrix, I dont think he'd act like that XD
Looking nice as of now, like to see what you'd come up with for the next chapter.
T3h_Waffleman
02-08-06, 22:14
Well, it's called creative license. I'm actually gonna take some time to brainstorm before I start on the next chapter. I was basically pulling evidence out of my arse, and during the process of finishing the first chapter, I changed the killer.
Haha, interesting! Aki-at pointed this out to me, as i rarely peep into this section of the forum. It's techniqully not a webcomic though, is it? =P
T3h_Waffleman
08-08-06, 22:03
It's just a name, okay? A name!
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