Comic: The battle against Finall

[Tenguman]

i will update this topic

this is a comic i made at the site megaman battle network online.(mmbnonline)
here is the first line:
UltraX Captured
http://www.maj.com/gallery/Tenguman/megaman/continue_1-3.bmp

the Four battle members.
http://www.maj.com/gallery/Tenguman/megaman/continue_4.bmp

the battle against Megabat.
http://www.maj.com/gallery/Tenguman/megaman/continue_5.bmp
http://www.maj.com/gallery/Tenguman/megaman/continue_5_2.bmp

Burn Burns trough it.
http://www.maj.com/gallery/Tenguman/megaman/continue_6.bmp

[lordmetroid]

1) They're in .BMP format. Change it to .PNG or .GIF.
2) The speach bubbles need work. I can't tell who's saying what at some points.
3) Don't mix sprite styles. MMZ doesn't go with MMBN.
4) Make them look less like the original base sprite.
5) Is that Megaman N from Crash & Bass?
6) Forte.EXE is badly resized.
7) Why are the panels in 5.2 and 6 inverted?

[Mikado]

I won't even read them, if they are BMP.

[Don Kalypso]

The files are huge, the story is messed up, and they are BMP. I read the first one, and felt alienated. Remake them, preferably in PNG, and get a better storyline.

[Kairos]

No,just no,BMP's are bad,and the invertion hur my eyes. You have two coices

1-remake them
2-stop making comics.

And are yo mixing mmbn with mmx?

[Doogles]

I tried reading them. The story is screwed up and hard to follow.

[Don Kalypso]

I finally got to reading all of them, and my eyes exploded after the first four, they then began to bleed, profusely, after I read the rest. Bad grammar, style and bittage mixing, and a dis-jointed storyline are the makings of this comic. I suggest starting over, and learn to spell correctly.

[Kairos]

There's
-Sprite mixing.
-Reclors
-Bad Grammar
-Eye-bleeding inverts.

Rate-10000000000000/10

Never agin will I come here EVER.

[Mikado]

Well, I tried to read them...
You messed up my pc...