Vile's attempet [Archive]

Vile

05-02-08, 00:47

OK I'm going to try to do a full sheet for Helios Atlas and the others but I'm starting with Helios, what do you all think of this as a start.

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/4922/darkmodelafc4.png (http://imageshack.us)

Elec Met

13-02-08, 00:10

Pretty good. But the he looks just a little to dark. but still, 7.5/10!

DragonZero

13-02-08, 00:14

Yeah, he needs more Shine.

And crap! I wanted to do that! XD

Elec Met

13-02-08, 00:24

hey i know it's pd anyways, but when u finish can i use the sheet's?

13-02-08, 04:29

No, you cant, Because PD stands for "Phore not use, Duh.

Yes you can use them.

DragonZero

13-02-08, 04:58

Actually, now that I've zoomed in on the Sprite, I can tell it actually could use a bit of work.

Firstly, those Colors are wrong. Try taking them from the ones in the ZXA Rip Thread (Deus). Also, his arm is shaped kinda weird. The Shading and Shape of his Chest could use a bit of work, which includes that little Golden Belt thing. The Coat doesn't really look like Aeolus/Helios' Coat... And it needs to be shaded more like it, too... Pretty much everything you need to correct can be fixed by looking at the Official Sprite.

Also, usually Aeolus/Helios stands with his Sword Sheathed in his Hands, the Handle facing forward and the Scabbard facing behind him.

All in all, I think it's at about a... 6.5-7/10. If you correct everything I said, it should get up to an 8.5-9/10, at least from me.

On the plus side, you made the pants and the boots very well, and the stance is quite good (If a bit Ventish). This is a good start here, and I hope to see you continue this, since Aeolus is a Cool Character, and many people may want/need/have use for a full Sheet of him, including myself.

EDIT: Dude... I totally feel like BBD now. (>_<)

Just so you know Vile, I wasn't trying to be harsh at all. I really like the Sprite, actually. :D

Vile

14-02-08, 02:43

If you must know hte right side of his man skirt is from the real sheet and I used the colors from the real sheet. As for the sword it would make better sence for him to carry it on his back while running and jumping. I plan on giving him some slash attack for the heck of it as well.

P.S. that black line is the string on the sword, but if you will all now excuse me, off to the MS paint cave! :D

DragonZero

14-02-08, 02:45

Alright! Good luck, Vile! I hope to see a thoroughly epic sheet! :D