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Spenser Agnomu

27-12-07, 15:18

This is my first real spriting project. His name is Model I(nfection). I don't really have a reason for the name, I just liked it. Here's his sprite for right now.
http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o125/Sora_059/ModelInfection1.png
I still need to change his hair to black or gray. I haven't decided yet. I also need to add ModelPx's scarf re-color it and change his armor a bit.

Blackhook

27-12-07, 15:21

No..don´t change it a bit...change it completly! Now it´s just a recolor...

Ony

27-12-07, 15:22

It's just a recolor... it's a good start, but It needs more,
Maybe since it's infection, it can alter enemies, and other models?
Instead of a scarf, why not a tattered cape? and make some of the armor, Different (get rid of the rings, add/subtract armor)
and definitely change the hair, We can all tell it's model Z, you have to do more than recolor the hair.

Fuzion Phoenix

27-12-07, 15:23

A fricken Recolor, lowest work in spriting, Next to sprite stealing that is.
Edit the shoulders, the legs, almost everything.

Ony

27-12-07, 15:25

You know, I think he gets it, he's new, give him a break... or better yet, Real C+C. I'm sure we all started with something similar to this....

omega1237

27-12-07, 15:30

I have to agree with Ony.

Try and change the hairstyle at least though.

Spenser Agnomu

27-12-07, 16:10

Okay. Thanks for the advice. Ill start on it right away.

Spenser Agnomu

27-12-07, 16:57

http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o125/Sora_059/MiodelInfectionhairchoices.png
I came up with four hair colors I like. I'm still editing the hair style. but i need a color. I can't decide.

Ony

27-12-07, 17:21

3 or 1 seems fine to me, now work on his body,

Spenser Agnomu

27-12-07, 20:33

-Different hair
-longer earpiece
-More armor
-Lengthened the length of the gloves
-Purple-ish Visor
-sword on back
-added coils for "infection" ( He downloads enemy data enabling A-trans. This also re configures the enemy's data to become 'infected')

I'm still editing him. Also I'm working on 'Infected' versions of the real models, and some enemies.
EDIT- Here is the Biometal:http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o125/Sora_059/BioMetalInfection.png

DNZ.EXE

27-12-07, 20:41

Whoa,whoa,whoa; Don't want to put too much detail in, espceially if you're going to sheet it. It'll be a pain. ALso, Visor lacks shading(either that, or contrast).

Novacrash

27-12-07, 21:04

wo--woooow...

Now THAT is a great way to start spriting!

But hes right, theres a point where theres a bit too much detail.

That dudes gunna be a pin to sprite.

I like where your going, though.

Keep it up. ^_^

Zyros

27-12-07, 22:04

http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o125/Sora_059/Armor3.png
-Different hair
-longer earpiece
-More armor
-Lengthened the length of the gloves
-Purple-ish Visor
-sword on back
-added coils for "infection" ( He downloads enemy data enabling A-trans. This also re configures the enemy's data to become 'infected')

I'm still editing him. Also I'm working on 'Infected' versions of the real models, and some enemies.
EDIT- Here is the Biometal:http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o125/Sora_059/BioMetalInfection.png*Ahem*

Instead of telling you it's a god sprite like the others, I'll be honest.

Head: It's Model Z and Giro. Don't simply change the hair to a minimal degree, change the whole thing; longer earpieces and a slight change to the hair isn't good enough. Right now it isn't very well edited.

Torso: You added a few black lines to it; yay! <-sarcasm. Go edit it for real now.

Shoulders: Look at what I said for the torso.

Arms: I'm not sure what you did here, looks like an elbow guard or something. Edit it so people at least know what it is.

Boots: Look at what I said for the torso.

You've got your work cut out for you; good luck. But as for the Biometal, nicely done.

DNZ.EXE

27-12-07, 23:02

*Ahem*
Instead of telling you it's a god sprite like the others, I'll be honest.
Hey! I resent that. I merely pointed out flaws. The 3 "whoa"s were an expression of "stop".

DragonZero

27-12-07, 23:08

I've just zoomed in on this thing: The Black Lines make it a lot more Original-looking, but they aren't that creative, and they'd be extrememly hard to make into a Sprite Sheet.

As harsh as Zyros was, he/she/it was correct. She could have said it a lot nicer, but the core meaning of it was right: you just need to do more editing.

Spenser Agnomu

28-12-07, 03:03

DNZ was right. Those Lines are a pain to sprite. I removed most of them. Here's Whet it looks like now.http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o125/Sora_059/Armor3-1.png
I still have to edit the visor, and armor more.
Here is the actual user of Model I, My character Spenser: http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o125/Sora_059/SpenserAgnomu.png
I stil plan to edit his pants a lil but im happy with him for now. He is also going to have a diff. colored shiret under the Giro Express uniform jacket.

Spenser Agnomu

28-12-07, 03:33

Im finished with Spenser's Idle pose.
EDIT-Credtit to turpinator and Aen

turpinator

28-12-07, 03:56

Me and Aen. XD

EDIT: And it would look better if you coloured the arms the skin colour instead because from the looks of your character, he's human.

Advent Axl

28-12-07, 04:02

kinda reminds me of that guy from Pokemon Collesuem. . .that one guy witht the white hair and red eyes (not the main character)

Spenser Agnomu

28-12-07, 14:37

Me and Aen. XD

EDIT: And it would look better if you coloured the arms the skin colour instead because from the looks of your character, he's human.
Like this?
http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o125/Sora_059/Spenser.png

Aen

28-12-07, 14:40

Like this?
http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o125/Sora_059/Spenser.png
That's really good for starting off!

Although, let me explain some things.

1. You should take the pockets off of the pants, as they seem to resemble Vent and Giro's pants too much. :l

2. You should also edit the vest some more, take away the collar, edit the shoulder pads, etc, etc.

But it is a good start!

EDIT:
Me and Aen. XD
Actually, it's really just turpinator. I came up with the idea, but he does all the work. :l

Fuzion Phoenix

28-12-07, 14:41

For Model I's tentical things, You might want to consider useing Grey's Cables.
Edit:Oh, and Spencer looks cool. Just chage the shoulders.

Spenser Agnomu

28-12-07, 18:58

For Model I's tentical things, You might want to consider useing Grey's Cables.
Edit:Oh, and Spencer looks cool. Just chage the shoulders.
Actually they are Grey's cables. I edited them a bit to look like the armor.

Fuzion Phoenix

28-12-07, 19:23

They seem positioned oddly though, you might wat to fix that.

Spenser Agnomu

29-12-07, 16:49

xavir

29-12-07, 16:53

That looks great.

Aen

29-12-07, 16:56

I fianlly finished Spenser.
http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o125/Sora_059/Spenser-1.png
-made the red shirt brighter
-longer sleeve on one arm
-black ring around sleeve
-Black glove, fingerless; on left hand
- removed pant-leg pockets
Okay. Looks good, though you should add more contrast to his red shirt.
Also, you should make his pants the same color as his hair, to reduce the number of colors you use.

But good work!

Spenser Agnomu

30-12-07, 16:48

Here we go.
I fixed the shading on Spenser's Shirt:http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o125/Sora_059/Avi.png

DNZ.EXE

30-12-07, 16:59

Why do they all have visors, and not helmets?

Spenser Agnomu

30-12-07, 17:09

I like the Visor idea.. i don't know why. I was going to use helmets, but I didn't feel like spriting the hair coming out of them. I might add helmets at a later time.

SpeedReemix

31-12-07, 12:31

Spenser Agnomu

31-12-07, 13:24

For plot-wise : Vent cant have visors, do you want to know why ? Because Giro had a eye problem that is why he was wearing glasses, so if Model Z used helmet after fused with Giro, he wont able to see so well. Because of that Model Z used helmet datas on glasses so by the way he is able too see. Vent doesnt have this problem.

ONTOPIC : Good sprites, not so bad but not so good. But why Model F is different than others ?
Well I found the sprite on someones Sheezy Art gallery, and since i don't have Advent, I thought it was the official sprite.... I was wrong :D
so thats why.
So My character doesnt have glasses..... does that mean he can't use a visor???:confused:

K_kip515

31-12-07, 13:33

if it's for the purpose of concealing his identity. Anime characters tend to have a blind spot when a character puts on a disguise.

then again it's your character, so it doesn't matter,

Spenser Agnomu

31-12-07, 14:38

Hmmm, Time to come up with Spenser's story then......
* begins writing*

Spenser Agnomu

31-12-07, 15:42

http://i119.photobucket.com/albums/o125/Sora_059/Armor3.png
Click the spoiler for my half-way near half done ( I think ???) sheet for model I

Ony

31-12-07, 16:17

Why is there so much white space??? ANd all I see is the dashing.
What is that move he's doing?

Xterra

31-12-07, 16:52

Model I looks great (what's the I stand for?).

I was just wondering though, was that sheet resized? It looks small.

(not as in "how many sprites", but that actual size of Model I looks tiny)

Ony

31-12-07, 17:13

It was probably resized by the computer cause of the size.

Spenser Agnomu

31-12-07, 17:43

Ony: I'm no where near done, I gave myself space for moving and spriting parts. His Dashing is actually what he's going to do for is Infection attack. I need to animate it so you know what I mean.

Xterra: He may have been rezized because of photobucket, or maybe because its in a spoiler box, Idk. The I stands for Infection. Model I was a copy of Z, (actually O). I'm still progressing with a background story for Spenser.

Fuzion Phoenix

31-12-07, 17:45

I only see a standing sprite.

K_kip515

31-12-07, 17:47

@ Fuzion: hit refresh on your browser while on this page

@Spenser: What ever happened to Visored Vent?

Spenser Agnomu

31-12-07, 17:49

Fuzion: Like I said, Im no where near done. I rarely get the computer without being disturbed making it hard for me to sprite quickly.
K kip515: My brother went and deleted a bunch of my photos on photobucket. He thought I had uploaded them on his. Theyre no longer on my computer either so I might delete the posts.

Spenser Agnomu

02-01-08, 01:09

Sorry about all the images that got deleted everybody. My brother went and deleted them off my photobucket. He thought I was using his account.