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Ray Hirruko
15-09-07, 00:33
Well, I'm gonna show off the sprites I've made so far. Please bear in mind that I'm still pretty new with this style.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/Chaos_Ray/Geodude.png
First off is a character I want to create for a game. The users name is Geon; but since the game isn't really based off of ZX, I didn't initially give his model a name, now I just settled on "Model F(inal) U(ltimatum)" which is really only supposed to sound intimidating.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/Chaos_Ray/RayV.2human.png
He's just a simple persona I use as an author character in some comics I make.

If there's any way I can improve, let me know.
Zyros
15-09-07, 00:36
The first human sprite's head is too small, try making it a little bigger. As for Model FU, it seems like a recolor with a new head, try adding more custom parts into the mix.

The second human character seems fine overall, he's way better than my first Zx human. >.>
Aen
15-09-07, 00:46
The human's skin looks like it doesn't have enough shading...
MechaEmperor7000
15-09-07, 00:54
The lightest shade on the blue pants looks a bit dark. And The limbs on the guy in the trunks are too thick(they look like popeye arms and legs). Try to thin them down a bit. Other than that, they look very good. Tell me, how long have you been spriting?
Ray Hirruko
15-09-07, 01:05
Thanks for the comment, I'll try to work on all of that durring the weekend.

And Mecha Emperor; I've been spriting casually for a few years now, but like I said, I only just stared using megaman sprites a few months ago.
Advent Axl
15-09-07, 01:36
Alright I don't know if anyone said this nor do I care

The pants need a different shade of blue *don't use the direct blue color use a color between light blue and blue)

the sprites need more shading, show a light source

other than that they are fine
rickysio
15-09-07, 02:50
Don't pillow shade.
Advent Axl
15-09-07, 03:44
*hrk* er-that too! =P
Ray Hirruko
18-09-07, 23:56
Well, that took a bit longer than I thought...

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/Chaos_Ray/rasta.png
I kind of like the last two but I'll get someone elses opinion on it as well. Which one of the models looks the best?
Aen
18-09-07, 23:58
You should put the second one's head on the last one's body. Then it would look... better.
Foozdude
18-09-07, 23:59
Well, that took a bit longer than I thought...

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/Chaos_Ray/rasta.png
I kind of like the last two but I'll get someone elses opinion on it as well. Which one of the models looks the best?
First one, closest to the human.

I like the different shoulder pads, but the wings just make it look even more recolour-y.

EDIT: Aen's right, it would look better. :D

DOUBLE EDIT: Wait... what did I say...? Oh, right. Maybe stick the second's head on the first's body?
MechaEmperor7000
19-09-07, 00:07
Aen's right, but I would like to see the first one's shoulder pad on the last one, along with the head from the second one.
Aen
19-09-07, 00:08
Yeah, that would look better.
Ray Hirruko
19-09-07, 00:19
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y63/Chaos_Ray/FU.png
Somthing like that?
Aen
19-09-07, 00:22
...Better. Tell you what, how about I try to make it look a little spiffier? What do you say?
Ray Hirruko
19-09-07, 00:26
Sure, any help is welcomed. : D
Aen
19-09-07, 00:30
Alright! I'll get to work.
Saigo
19-09-07, 10:44
uggh I dont see them!