Sorrow of the world

[Rave T-blade]

Alright, I'm going to put up the first four panels of my new comic that will be posted here... but FIRST, I want to give the rules here, then the story plot...

Rules of this thread:
-No offensive words
-Try to make your post nicer(if you can, if not, just say so) if something is wrong in my comic page or panel.
-Comment on each comic page or panel, if something is wrong, I'll can't promise to remake the wrong things in my comic, but I'll try.


My Front page like all the comic books has in reality:
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u267/Zil_ver/WallpaperSorrowoftheworld.png
I can update this picture if I got more enemy's and characters...

Ok, now here comes the plot, and then the first four panels, but I can UPDATE them every moment.


Story Plot:

In the year 30XX*(1), there was a battle between two knights. They are the biggest rivals and the strongest in that time, but they once summoned two Holy Beast, known as Greiga*(2) and Falzer*(3). When those two Holy Beasts fought each other, they made a big explosion, and the two knights were near death... and they went trough a portal to the future the two beasts made...

*(1)= Not a timeline of the Megaman Series, I can't think of a year name, thats why.
*(2)= A Beast from MMBN 6, or from the anime: Megaman EXE Beast. I made that beast a summoning monster, like the Final Fantasy series.
*(3)= Same as *(2), but its a Bird.

Now I'm going to post the first four panels, and its almost exact the same as the plot, cause each page has four panels... so its named page 1:D

And for fun, I'll make a comic movie out of it, one panel each frame(it doesn't move like in animations, but I can put some special effects that a comic can't). I too can put battle sound music in the comic movie with movie maker(don't got other things to make it with)

message to everyone: just like I said in my old Comic Thread(that sucked, but here's the title, Megaman ZX: War Chronicles), You can ask to cameo if you want, but not needed, just for fun.

Edit: page(s) done: 1 & 2...

[Dead Panda]

Style mixing a sprite. IT BURNS!!!!

[Rave T-blade]

Style mixing a sprite. IT BURNS!!!!

What you mean by that?

[GaiaX2]

Gregar and Falzar are BN style..the BG and the two warriors are in Zero Style..Look in the sprite dicitonary..

[Rave T-blade]

Gregar and Falzar are BN style..the BG and the two warriors are in Zero Style..Look in the sprite dicitonary..

Eh heh... Ok... I know I did style mixed, but I tried to make that Greiga and Falzer into a MMZ form, but it's too big, so I only made the shadow of Greiga disapear and put both his legs on the ground so it almost looks like a MMZ, which is, mostly of it, not. And I did the same with Falzers leg... with those little parts that were in the sprite dicitonary. And I take this post as no excuse.

Anyways, does it suit the story plot? Cause I think it is.

Edit: No wait, its not style mixed! I didn't took the Longsword robot from BN, but from MMZ3. look in MMZ3 and in enemy section.
Edit 2: I've read it wrong, sorry GaiaX2, your right

[Kairos]

I could fix that. Just Tell me whose Legs you used.

[Rave T-blade]

I could fix that. Just Tell me whose Legs you used.

I used the legs of that enemy robot from MMZ4, the purple one, don't know its name though... or did you meant Greiga and Falzer?
I'll post Greiga and Falzer on my sprite thread for awhile, so you can see what I've done if you meant those two beast.

Edit: post it on my sprite thread. But I'll go further with my comic now. I'll post it on the first post if I posted one.

[Rave T-blade]

Alright Folks, read up or read this post for page 2!
One thing... I am feeling uneasy now, cause the last comic Thread sucked, so its harder to make a story then I usualy used to do...
Not too be used as an excuse, but oh well...

Edit: I'm going to try to make an MMZ format Greiga and Falzer later, then I'll post the new first page of the comic...