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Saigo
11-03-07, 18:38
These are the genocide raids. The time in which the years have been forgotten and the mavericks have taken over. Some unknown Foe has found remnants of Neo Arcadia’s
“X-clones” and redesigned there “minds.” They have also taken control of mechaniloids and creating havoc with them too. we know only one thing about this threat, and that’s
that the creator must be smart. Very smart. And powerful as well. With these two dangerous
attributes, the power could become unstoppable. Luckily the new Law, The M.D.S., and there
leader, Proctor, are trying to avoid war, which at this point seems to be already happening, and
at the same time attempting to save as many reploid and human lives as possible. Humans and
reploids have stopped fighting each other, and have come to an agreement, and that is that my
enemies enemy, is my friend. At least for now, there bickering has stopped. Ever since Zero
disappeared, there alliance has seemed...uneasy. The M.D.S., the common law as they’re known,
are the warriors who have stepped up to try to halt the upcoming wars. Now, the reploids have
created new ways to fight there wars, the Armors. The armors are designed for anyone who is
ready to fight the mavericks. When one turns 15, they will receive an Armor unless they are...
“unfit.” Even though there is an army at Proctors disposal, he has decided that it is best to hide
out for a little while, so there are bases around the continent, each with its own power source
and communication. While each base can communicate with each other at will, it is only done
in extremely harsh situations. Each base, while still allies, act like they do not need help from
one another. Each base is like its own country in itself this way. The bases each have names
like “Blacksoot” or “Whirlpool.” The names have definite significance too, like Whirlpool,
the base is in a water cavern, and Blacksoot, the base is at the foot of a volcano. there are only
a few bases, but they all differentiate and have different ways of fighting.

Prologue Script
Panel One: Black screen, white words; Those who fight, are called warriors...Those who wait, are called prey...
Panel Two: Zero‘s helmet in the sand, words; It has been...13 years after The hero Zero, has vanished amidst the darkness...Never to be seen again...
Panel Three: Black screen, white words; There was one problem though...he never did his job...He did not eliminate all of his foe...for one lives...amongst us...
Panel four: zooms out of a forest at dusk, with a mossy zero statue; people walking, looking up at an obvious cultural icon in front of the statue..
Panel 5: Black screen, white words; “Hero...what a waste of a word!”
Panel six: Two kids, squatting down around another covered in blood, appears to be dead.
Panel Eight: One stands up and says; “If Zero was so great, why didn’t he destroy ALL of those damned machines?!”
Panel Nine: The angry boy walks away as the other stands up and says; “Keigo! This is our problem, don’t get anyone else involved, okay? OKAY Keigo? Other boy mutters under his breath; “whatever dude...”
Panel ten: (angry boy off screen) Other boy mutters under his breath; “Tai...i wish I could avenge you...but...i think...i think I'm too weak, Tai...”
Panel eleven: Black screen, white words; Pain...Suffering...these have become the feelings that regularly envelope the hearts of the world ...

Characters I will be needing for this story:
Good: 12
Bad: 10
Neutral: 5
Character List: 1 good: 1 bad: 0 neutral: 0
1)Jenova(splice&Renik)good
2)tDoD(Disaster&Mario)evil
3)
4)


GUIDELINES
-You are aloud one model per character cameo submission. if you would like to submit another model, make sure it has a human counterpart, unless it is a bad guy.
-If you are going to submit a cameo, make sure to include a mugshot and a sheet, name, age, sex, good or evil, model name, personality, metal personality, bio and any other information i might need.
-If you would like to submit an unfinished character that is fine as well. As long as you know it will be finished in a short while. And your character must have a mugshot, as long as it looks like the character it will be accepted.
-if you submit a bad guy, it does not have to have a human counterpart, bad guys in this comic are sealed with the fate of being permanently fused with their models, unless you want your character to change into a good/neutral character before the seal is lit.
-By submitting your character, (unless otherwise noted) you are permitting me to use it however I want in this comic. If you would like a specific part, ask for it, and unless it is already taken, I will probably permit you to have the spot. And if you would like your character to do something specific or have something done to him/her just ask and i will see what i can do.

This comic is not carved in stone. Therefore if you would like something to happen feel free to pm me and ask about it. or if you would like to be a co-writer for the story post it in the thread, i will have up to 2 co-writers, no more, but you can ask me to put something in the story as many times as you want. But that's not guaranteeing it will be in the story. Your ideas will probably be held above someone else's if you are a co-writer.

Personalities I am Looking for:
good guy, pervert
neutral guy, very smart + semi strong + hates rebellion and mavericks
bad guy, insane
good guy, dark + keeps to himself
good guy, turns evil
good guy, arrogant + doesn’t like to lose arguments
neutral guy, turns evil + betrays bad guys + turns neutral again
bad guy, siblings with good guy
bad guy, doesn’t fight + good at analyzing people strengths
bad guy, pretending to be good to get on the inside with information + considerable strong

(they do not have to have these personalities, these are just some that i am looking for, if your cameo has one of these personalities, just state it in the submission)

Bi-Q
12-03-07, 00:52
okay, since I wanna be in this comic (Story sounds good allready) I wanna introduce: Mario (I am remaking mario, could you change his style when I am done with the new one?) With Model Disaster (Is going to be resprited too...)

Name: Sean-Mario "Silence"
Age: 15
BioMetal: Model Disaster
Gender: Male
Side: EVIL!
Personality: Mysterious, Holding Back, Relaxed, inteligent
BioMetals Personality: Agressiv, Destructive, Crazy, Hotheaded
Bios: He grew up in the underground, playing in a Punk Rock Band, his Family got eliminated when he was at the age of five, since then he never said a word (But this might change >8D ) He wants only revenge... on the ones who killed his Family...

The Mario with the black cloak is going to be the new mario, the other disaster is going to be scratched, so... I hope you could change it during the comic^^! By the way, IŽll fix up the mugs, i saved it to JPEG by accident...

Lord Wraith
12-03-07, 18:19
It is against my better judgement to cameo for a comic, that not only does not have any proof of being made, but has numerous spelling mistakes in the description and script. As well you have already asked for specific character type which, may not be harmful to you, but chances are you know who you want to have cameod. Instead of hoping those people cameo why not just PM them and ask?

Boilman
12-03-07, 18:25
As well you have already asked for specific character type which, may not be harmful to you, but chances are you know who you want to have cameod. Instead of hoping those people cameo why not just PM them and ask?

Me says he just need this character, but doesn't have the will-power to go trough with making the sheets. There is a quote for that somewhere. I'll dig t up in a minute.

[edit] here it is.
This is a note to everyone outthere - Cameo Comics also don't work.

They just don't. One or two Cameo issues yes.. even one or two cameo characters, yes, but when you can't come up with characters to start the comic off, it's a bad sign.

Saigo
13-03-07, 01:01
:P guilty as charged, but ive seen plenty of other cameo comics on here besides just mine. and thos character personalities are just ones that would work in my comic, im not looking for someone specific. tDoD, excepted

Bi-Q
13-03-07, 02:38
expected?? donŽt you mean accepted if you want me in your comic'?

RyuReiatsu
13-03-07, 02:47
You're coming back again with your Pantheons >_>?
God, can't you understand they don't exist anymore?

Bi-Q
13-03-07, 03:36
Jenova, IŽd use some other enemies, instead of the Pantheons *goes work on some* Hehehehehehe...

Zyros
13-03-07, 03:47
So what I can see is, you've changed the title of the comic, asked peopel for cameos, got someone to cameo and have a non-existant soldier (pantheon) all without even releasing one issue.

Am I right?

Bi-Q
13-03-07, 04:09
he got an existant soldier.... which is not finished... MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH MAY I PRESENT! PANTHEON OMEGA! I still got to fix it up completely and sheet it...

Saigo
13-03-07, 10:13
okay, well, heres the deal. i will(have not yet) create some different enemies, and it looks like i could use some help as well. but i dont want to get into this right now. and to make my first comic, i need at least two cameos. and because i couldnt show you the comic for that fact, i typed out what it will be. the names "tai" and the "angry boy" are the two needed cameos. and im figuring that the angry boy could be "Mario" at this point. and from this point on, I'dd really appreciate you not telling me what i have already heard from you. i did hear you the first time, and if i do it wrong, I'll know next time.i know your trying to help me, but let me make my oiwn mistakes please.

Bi-Q
13-03-07, 15:42
Jenova is right guys... And let him do his own story, even if it is complete wrong from the MMZ and MMZX Timeline, he knows what he does, so i say just F*CK IT! Let him do his stuff... since it is a Fan Comic! If it would be from capcom and they do such mistakes iŽd like to pwn em right away, but its from a FAN! A Fan Fiction!

Rave T-blade
13-03-07, 17:36
Hmmm... nice story, jenova, your a better comic maker then me:D
I suck at making comics, but oh well, I am trying to make better comic when I know what story I'm going to make...
Well I got a character with model E for you( If you want more models, just ask, and I'll try to make it if I can, its good for my custom spriting ability;))

Oh and this order is actually the same as the order of The Demon Of Disaster

Name: Zilver
Last name: The Last( this nickname of mine was the name of the character I wanted to make, but I changed it into Zilver, because Tuna Unleashed had a character named Zane before me, long before me)
Age: 17
BioMetal: Model Ekrail with wind/air power
Gender: Male
Side: Good
Personality: Cool, smart in battle, dumb in love sessions and always
training.
Pers. Biometal: Inteligent, relaxing and full with care.
Special Effect BioMetal: It can summon itself like a hologram.
Bios: He is one of the gang called "The Vengeance", but it was a gang that helps families out, but then a evil gang came up to them and killed almost all "The Vengeance" members, so he only got one member now and its his best friend... Together with his friend, he seeks the power of vengeance within his heart and mind, to become stronger and smarter to kill his opponent!

Edit:
I want to help you with making enemies if you want;)
Edit 2: forgot the sprites, because then the internet stopped... and Zilver's sprites is coming soon, one sprite of him here now. Mugshots will be worked in a minute, my first mugshots suck.
Edit 3: Sample of Mugshot, the hair is still in work. Mugshot Sample 2 here too.

Bi-Q
13-03-07, 17:46
Zane, stop double posting, use TEH ALMIGHTY EDIT BUTTON! Or I friggin report you for so much double posting

Rave T-blade
13-03-07, 19:26
Zane, stop double posting, use TEH ALMIGHTY EDIT BUTTON! Or I friggin report you for so much double posting

Hey, I didn't do it! My computer stopped the internet once(well, it stopped the internet explorer, and I couldn't get back on), and when I came back, It Double Posted itself! I'm going to delete it now. alright?

Bi-Q
13-03-07, 20:03
Good, dude... I never wanna report anyone, but dude, get it into your head... use the edit button

Matt_ModelB
13-03-07, 20:06
Well , in the model tipe , since it`s Ekrail , you forgot about thunder atacks :P.

RyuReiatsu
14-03-07, 00:01
Jenova is right guys... And let him do his own story, even if it is complete wrong from the MMZ and MMZX Timeline, he knows what he does, so i say just F*CK IT! Let him do his stuff... since it is a Fan Comic! If it would be from capcom and they do such mistakes iŽd like to pwn em right away, but its from a FAN! A Fan Fiction!



Good, dude... I never wanna report anyone, but dude, get it into your head... use the edit button


You are mini-modding without even posting something on-topic.
Seriously, that's pretty stupid.

Anyways, wether it IS a fan comic or not...

I seriously hate Pantheons, they are the most pathetic Henchmen I ever saw -.-....

Terry von Feledae
14-03-07, 00:17
True, Ps are even weaker than D&D-Orcs.
Unless they are... powered UP! Yeah, if the smart evil guy did reconstruct them almost from scratch, they possibly even are a tiny little threat.
I still say Valiants are better. Those V.Missiles were annoying as hell when placed conviently(For example in Ragnarok - you just climb up a ledge, and suddenly you get smacked in da face by a bunch O' missiles! Eeeevil, I say).
I don't think this rant has anything to do with the topic, huh?
Anyway, use Valiants. You will like them.

Saigo
14-03-07, 10:07
valients....pantheons...the only zero enemies i know of are mechaniloids and mavericks. Zane the Last-wheres your sprite sheet?, and if you want, you can make more models and submit them, its totally p to you :P

edit: Terry F. and aznboii001, please, im asking you, i deleted that last thread for a reason, you guys babbling, so im asking please stop, idd llike to do things my way, not yours, or capcoms. so if you think its wrong, go show me up and make a better comic or something. but dont just post" those guys are weak" over and over again. oh, and everyone, i dunno how long i wont be on cause im moving, so it might be a while before i respond sorry

Bi-Q
14-03-07, 10:40
You are mini-modding without even posting something on-topic.
Seriously, that's pretty stupid.

Anyways, wether it IS a fan comic or not...

I seriously hate Pantheons, they are the most pathetic Henchmen I ever saw -.-....
defending someone is nothing bad...
and zane never uses the edit button...

Rave T-blade
14-03-07, 16:59
Both Off-Topic:

Good, dude... I never wanna report anyone, but dude, get it into your head... use the edit button

I am in my thread, but sometimes the computer stops the internet and then I need to click on and off on the internet thing to get back on the site(s). And I saw it double posted the same post...

Well , in the model tipe , since it`s Ekrail , you forgot about thunder atacks :P.

I did that, because I need a good thunder effect, but wind and thunder... sounds good. I'll try to make a some mix attacks and just a thunder attack, if that's what you want:)

On topic:
You can use my Fire/Flame Shooter as an enemy, there is only a little edit on it, but if you want a bit more edits, just ask.
Sample:

Matt_ModelB
14-03-07, 18:44
Cool!
Oh , i said thunder because is Ekrail`s main atacks...

Rave T-blade
14-03-07, 19:01
Cool!
Oh , i said thunder because is Ekrail`s main atacks...

Doesn't matter anymore, because I got myself a new idea:cool:

Matt_ModelB
14-03-07, 19:08
Cool , now ack on topic , can i do a enemy?
I have a idea on mind :D.
EDIT : i know it sucks but i`ll fix it.
EDIT2: Fixed!
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/6152/craptankte3.png (http://imageshack.us)

RyuReiatsu
16-03-07, 00:09
Actually, I like the concept.
It looks koo :)

And as for TDOD, yeah sure he doesn't follow the rules.
But still

Originally Posted by aznboii001
You are mini-modding without even posting something on-topic.
Seriously, that's pretty stupid.

You didn't post anything useful except the mini-modding.
Just click the report button -.-...

Rave T-blade
16-03-07, 19:07
Here's another one, but its a neutral robot in my comic(that I am just preparing for whenever) but you can use it as an enemy:)
Here:

Edit:
Its name is Knight of Ultima Weapon, but if you "save picture as..." it, it says Kngith of Ultima Weapon sprite sheet, I spelled it wrong.
And its not done yet... I need to make two more walking sprites.
You can see its animation on how its attack works at my Signature.

Edit: The animation doesn't move because I didn't longed the area like I did with model Ekrail's Rising Hurricane movement.

Saigo
19-03-07, 11:02
wel, the knight's head is from BN, is it not? and that tank is awesome i really like it. so yeah, im back and ready to start my comic hopefully!(still gots a busy schedule cause i just moved :P) and that fire thingy is pretty cool too.if you want to make an enemy just go for it and ill probably put it in the comic

Rave T-blade
20-03-07, 21:12
wel, the knight's head is from BN, is it not? and that tank is awesome i really like it. so yeah, im back and ready to start my comic hopefully!(still gots a busy schedule cause i just moved :P) and that fire thingy is pretty cool too.if you want to make an enemy just go for it and ill probably put it in the comic

yes, it is from BN, but then in MMZ 3 format, look in the zero section, MMZ 3's enemy section, you see that BN longsword robot that I used

Saigo
31-03-07, 13:26
is this topic dead? i moved so i couldnt go onto the internet onacounta my school has a firewall against this site. should i just start another one? cause its been dead for like ten days now.

Rave T-blade
01-04-07, 16:43
I think I should give a tip to you, since my own comic thread(that realy sucked) is now waiting for almost 15 days or more till its updated. You should make a comic, just 2 or 3 pages, then there will be post again. Here are some enemy's that I'll use for my comic, but you can use aswell(I'll make some others for my own):