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I did ALITTLE stuff to some zero/ZX sprites to bring you Fayt, in his normal outfit,and in Model T(wilight). (I might still tweak the model since its pretty plain.) Once I get enough sprites together I'll work on getting a new comic ready. Anyway, for your amusement, I give you Fayt's bio.
http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/750/faytmandpjd0.png (http://imageshack.us)
Name: Fayt LyraLyght
Age: 16
Race: Human
Hair: Bright Blonde
Model/s: Model T(wilight)
Model D(ark)
Model L(ight)
Weapons: In Model T give's him Duel sabers,and a GreatSaber (Both are a dark/light mix.) Model D gives him a energy whip and the ability to teleport, along with the normal things (Buster/Saber). Model L allows Fayt to use hyper dashs, Energy Fists,Spear,and Added Armor.
Bio: Fayt was brought up as a guardian, and has followed in the footsteps of his adoptive parents. Model T was given to him as a gift for all the hardships he had gone through in his life, and his adoptive father thought he could put it to better use then he could. When Fayt was just a baby, his parents were trying to defend him from a small group of mavericks. They sacrificed themsleves for him, by the time the guardians arrived it was to late to save his parents but were able to safely help Fayt. Fayt is logical,fair,and calm.
Go ahead and post what is good and bad about him,the more hes judged,the more I can fix him :P
Daemonseele
15-02-07, 21:55
Well, one thing you could do to improve him is to change the hair so he looks less like Vent.
Dead Panda
15-02-07, 21:56
Recolor and C+P. Try editing the hair and clothes more for his hume form. For his model form, change the face and armor, it resembles model Z too much.
Edit: Damn, outposted.
Try reshading both ones because they look too bright.
umm...yea...the human kinda looks like its wearin fishnets and a skirt...is that a dude? and you might want to edit the hair,sovietcommando is right, it looks too much like vent. and it is a slight bit bright.
Hes got baggy shorts (one longer then the other) with white X's on them,But I'll work on what u guys pointed out. But for a bit of help, anyone wanna suggest some ideas on the models look? I have a really hard time trying to design a unique armor that includes no helm :/
Dead Panda
16-02-07, 02:21
Well, change the hair first of all, and you could make a helmet that shows the hair, kinda like Terra from MM5 for gamboy.
if i were you...I'dd make a white line that seperates each pantleg, and if you want a design for some unique armor then...well, i'll tell you what I do. I think of the characters personality, then i draw there personality out on paper through a design, and THEN i put the design into a sprite format, where it can be easily made into a ZX armor.
Still working on a more unique ZX Model design, but I tryed a new hairstyle. Any better? I think it is but meh, I can't tell myself that unless others agree :P
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/6168/newhx0.png (http://imageshack.us)
Dead Panda
16-02-07, 17:05
Hair looks alot better now.
*sigh* Thanks, thats the first time I've gotten good feedback on ANY of my hair on sprites >.< (hair is my weakpoint >.<)
Dead Panda
16-02-07, 17:13
But the shorts look horrible, not trying to be offensive, just C+C. Instead of shorts, try doing pants, you can keep the design, but they'd be pants instead.
Or if your going to leve one leg long and the other short, at least get rid of the white designs.
Meh, instead of going for a unique normal outfit (Since most of the ones the people in the game wear r the same >_>)I did a tiny bit of editing and some recoloring to make his Human Outfit.
http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/5052/faytfinalneedhelmkp4.png (http://imageshack.us)
Unless its horrid, Im gonna work on his Models. First T(wilight) Then Probably L(ight)
Rainbow Dash
16-02-07, 22:24
Get rid of the puffy shoulders. They're easily identifiable as Vent's. And perhaps a modified pose for the arms would help?
k I made a helm for model T, I think it turned out ok. I also took toxics sugeestions on the human outfit (cept for the pose,I like the basic pose :P)
C+C?
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3356/withhelmkh8.png (http://imageshack.us)
It kinda looks like you just copy-and-pasted Model PX's helmet onto the left one's head, and it really sticks out because of that outline. (At least I think it's PX's helmet...)
crimson hammer
16-02-07, 23:30
Yeah the problem I feel that is most important is the color and shading of the white. Try getting colors from other sprites...official ones. However don't use the white from ZX because they use pure white.
Honestly, I prefered the old one (the who with no helmet) becasue it really does look like you just C+P Px's head.
K, and Genux,I did use part of model px's helm,but I edited it alot,made it shorter,a bit wider,did more coloring of the red on top,small things like that. And if I didn't use pxs helm,then I would of just made it from nothin,and would probably look the same :/. Crimson,any sprites u can reccommand to use the light colors of?
NetSaver.exe
16-02-07, 23:36
Use the pallete off of the pants on your human character. You don't have any shading on the white right now.
Finding colors is really easy, I suggest looking at alll the towns people, they usually have good colors to use.
Well this is what I have done so far.
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/6707/faytmodelpandtincomplethp2.th.png (http://img179.imageshack.us/my.php?image=faytmodelpandtincomplethp2.png)
Gonna get some basic Sprites for the human form then work on some dash, jump, wall climb, etc. for model T.
i like it, it seems original yet i feel I've seen the human before...oh well, good job :)
Well this is what I have done so far.
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/6707/faytmodelpandtincomplethp2.th.png (http://img179.imageshack.us/my.php?image=faytmodelpandtincomplethp2.png)
Gonna get some basic Sprites for the human form then work on some dash, jump, wall climb, etc. for model T.
It's very cool, except that my only problem is the outline. In some places it's either too dark or the wrong color. Make the outling lighter and a more pleasing color that matches the other hues on his armor.
Then it'd be perfect, Okay?
yeah, what xterra said...xterra, doesn't that character look firmiliar?
off topic-im on a posting spree!!!
It looks likes Pkitty ZX human.
zing, thats who, thanks zero20xd6, how did you know that?
Cause I remember things like that.
aha...so yeah, fayt, whens the whole sheet comin to town?
When I get off my lazy ass :/ got the dash sprites done. Gonna do 1-2 jumping ones, then whatever basic poses I am missing.
okay, what ones are you workin on, model or human?
Model, human is easy to do, because its a small edit of the pants shoulders and some recoloring :/
cool, post your updates, even if they are small
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3128/faytmodelpandtincompletnj7.th.png (http://img502.imageshack.us/my.php?image=faytmodelpandtincompletnj7.png)
Just a tiny update. But I'll probably only have time to work n 1-2 more before I have to go to bed.
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3128/faytmodelpandtincompletnj7.th.png (http://img502.imageshack.us/my.php?image=faytmodelpandtincompletnj7.png)
Just a tiny update. But I'll probably only have time to work n 1-2 more before I have to go to bed.
Looking much, much better already. I like it.
Since I've got a hour to spare, I'm going to attempt to try and make a VERY unique attack for Fayt. Im going to edit this sprite http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/7316/duelwielddarklevitatebx8.png (http://imageshack.us) to make an attack where he has two sabers (the black and white one) the black one is going to be whipping around his hand like levitation. Will be tough just hope I can pull it off :/
hey nice i like the idea, but what about the white one?
It Stays in his other hand >_> and I didnt get enough time to eve try it,its alot of editting because on the back of his helmet on the bottom of it his hair comes out,so I need to firstmake a editted helm,and then edit the rest of the body cause its Zero :P
wow, work work and more work. but it will come out good i think
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/1580/levitationnv0.png (http://imageshack.us)
Yeah, sabers were just quickly made so they suck :P If I can get a good free editting program to make faded effects and such. Once I do, I can make faded versions of the dark saber and make it apeear to constantly twirl around his hand.
And Credit to N-Mario for making his body, I did knee pads hair and Sabers :/
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