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Caeder
14-02-07, 08:20
Notice: Original post was erased because I now have a Deviant Art account.

To see my gallery there you can go here:
http://xenozeno.deviantart.com
Mako
14-02-07, 11:36
Dang, your good! Keep up the good work, Caeder!
Dead Panda
14-02-07, 11:52
Now that old baby, is true art. And so are the one-beacked two ducks.
Mikado
14-02-07, 15:42
Your characters are too thin. They look like their starving o.O. Maybe some muscles? They look realy weak.. how can he hold that sword? :P
Make the legs longer.. and read some guides about arms.. They are wrong.
Overall it's nice, but try making an other kind of face.. or you want make your main char look wannebe evil?
(No-offence, just crititism)
Mako
14-02-07, 17:04
The guy with the umbrella and the scimitar is my favorite one.
Random = Good
NetSaver.exe
14-02-07, 20:38
Nice art.
Caeder
15-02-07, 16:17
Your characters are too thin. They look like their starving o.O. Maybe some muscles? They look realy weak.. how can he hold that sword? :P
Make the legs longer.. and read some guides about arms.. They are wrong.
Overall it's nice, but try making an other kind of face.. or you want make your main char look wannebe evil?
(No-offence, just crititism)

I don't take offense, it's fine.
I would like to say though that Tri-Edge and Haseo are based directly from the actual characters in the series, so perhaps dot.hack produces a lot of skinny characters.
(Also, the series itself is about an online game, so the characters really are supposed to be "fantasy-ish", especially in wielding sometimes huge weapons with skinny arms).

For my originally created characters I seem to have an anorexic style sometimes, but most of my art tends to not be realistic.

Tri-Edge also always has a shadow over his face, save for a few shots in the series with his eye showing, or in the game where his entire face shows clearly.

Nice art.

Thank you.

Dang, your good! Keep up the good work, Caeder!

The guy with the umbrella and the scimitar is my favorite one.
Random = Good

Random = Win

Now that old baby, is true art. And so are the one-beacked two ducks.

It really is.
Rainbow Dash
15-02-07, 21:24
Skinny or not, the arms (and sometimes legs) are positioned very awkwardly and could use improvement. It's one thing to be proportioned oddly, but the positions should look more natural. Nice otherwise, but... yeah, what Mikado said, pretty much.
Caeder
15-02-07, 21:27
Skinny or not, the arms (and sometimes legs) are positioned very awkwardly and could use improvement. It's one thing to be proportioned oddly, but the positions should look more natural. Nice otherwise, but... yeah, what Mikado said, pretty much.

Thanks for the criticism. I realize I should work on positioning, but I still don't see what's wrong with the proportions...
Rainbow Dash
15-02-07, 22:09
The super-skinniness, 4 head tall bodies, etc. The point I was trying to make, though, was that said aspect is perfectly fine if implemented correctly.
Caeder
16-02-07, 04:59
The super-skinniness, 4 head tall bodies, etc. The point I was trying to make, though, was that said aspect is perfectly fine if implemented correctly.

I understand. Thanks for clarifying :) (not being sarcastic, it sounds like it when I re-read it X_x; )
Caeder
22-02-07, 08:18
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v61/HybridShard7/ProtoMan-MM9-smlcompare.jpg

Posting this for reference, and also to show that there was an update (since editing the main post doesnt do so.)

Anyway here is a new sketch. Any comments whatsoever would be appreciated. Thanks!
Caeder
27-02-07, 18:35
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v61/HybridShard7/caeder-halfbody-small.jpg

I was trying to come up with my own character and this is how it looks so far.
I'll add the rest of the body as soon as I get it right >.<
Saigo
27-02-07, 20:39
i like them, and as for the whole "skinny topic", ive watched .hack for a while, and thats just the style they are drawn in, and you said the swords are your own? i like there designs, very creative. above all, the randomness, keep it up!
Amo_Zero
28-02-07, 02:55
Wow, your really good. I like your style too! :)
RyuReiatsu
28-02-07, 03:10
It's totally awesome! Except for the mario, funny though...

Anyways, the only problem I see in your humans are that the arms are a bit too long and the higher part of the arms isn't big enough.
Caeder
01-03-07, 04:10
Thanks Amo Zero :D

It's totally awesome! Except for the mario, funny though...

Anyways, the only problem I see in your humans are that the arms are a bit too long and the higher part of the arms isn't big enough.

Thanks!
I do seem to draw long arms and have skinny proportions @_@;
I should keep saying it's "just my style" :D
Caeder
01-03-07, 07:50
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v61/HybridShard7/Caeder-fullbody-v2-small.jpg

Here's a design I made to add on to the upper body drawing.

(EDIT: I want to point out that this design is based in the classic series. I thinned out the bloated body parts, but the rest is intended to fit. This character is supposed to have a high-powered arm cannon also, which is why it has a handle even though it's attached to his body, it's to steady the shot anyway. To balance the high-powered shot it has a low firing rate, probably the speed of firing a sub-charge or full-charge shot from Rockman's arm. That's all!)

I had a weird time with his hand... I know it looks fucked up >_<; I'm tired though so I use that as an excuse. I'll fix it later, maybe.
Besides that I also drew him at a slant so that's why there is a black line at the bottom, I had to rotate the scanned image.

Anyway, please comment or critique if you want.
sodapop04
01-03-07, 14:31
I like your style. Especially that Unicorn. It's full of win.
Caeder
01-03-07, 16:33
I like your style. Especially that Unicorn. It's full of win.

Thanks a lot :D
I'll try and draw another original styled picture (non-megaman) soon
Caeder
04-03-07, 06:39
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v61/HybridShard7/Caeder-fullbody-v3-small.jpg

Sorry again for the double-post. Just posting for update status.

Anyway, I edited the original drawing of my character Caeder (which was in the Mega Man classic series style, or so I tried) and made him more complicated and stylized. I realize the legs may not really match the rest of the body, but I like it. Comments?
RyuReiatsu
05-03-07, 05:19
Well, I'm not too crazy about that one...
Caeder
07-03-07, 07:33
Perhaps being more specific would help me understand why?

EDIT:
Since this was recent I'm going to edit this post and make it an update. Here are some new additions.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v61/HybridShard7/schimitar-custom-sml.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v61/HybridShard7/2hsword-custom-sml.jpg
RyuReiatsu
09-03-07, 18:31
Oh god, dude I don't get your variation of skill o.o...

Like these swords and some other drawings were like almost perfect...

And mario was hell xD, but funny.
Anyways, I don't like that character up there because...
He doesn't seem too well made, but yeah you totally rock man.
Like he's too skinny, and his face is like...no I should say his eyes are odd, too round.
Caeder
09-03-07, 22:44
Thanks. Yeah I apparently just can't do character sketches well... Some are good like that Neverhood character, but anything based on actual humans or humanoids (since the Neverhood guy is very abstract) is quite off.

I really just want to take some art classes so I can use this potential and become a great artist all around instead of just with weapons and a few other things.
Amo_Zero
10-03-07, 02:34
I love the swords!!! They are really cool!:)
Caeder
12-03-07, 04:45
Thanks a lot :)
RyuReiatsu
16-03-07, 01:05
I love the swords!!! They are really cool!:)

I second that thought :)
Caeder
19-04-07, 18:24
I got a DeviantArt recently and added about 5 new drawings, so if you want to see them from now on please go there.

http://xenozeno.deviantart.com
rickysio
24-04-07, 11:40
Improve on the eyes of the drawings.

And your drawing style looks suspiciously like my doodling style. WERE YOU LOOKING AT ME?! XD Joking.