So Called Great protector

[Zak]

Well…..so…., I’m making another comic... The story is that in the cities left over after the great maverick wars and blah blah blah, and the so called Great protector of the remaining cities is piloting a full fledged down fall of all human life because he is a sick Bastard. So some employees of the Great protector have found out his plane to harness of the models and power this huge maverick who well, isn’t that huge….-.-;

That’s a short summery of the story line.

I need

Name:
Model: Don't have to have one.
Age:
Gender:
Good or Evil:
Bio:
Model Bio:
Attacks:

The first comic will be up soon….I kind of lost everything on my comp so that’s why that one comic never got updated plus this dude was flaming me for takeing his idea or what not….
:o

Please do not beg for updates and whatnot, it kind of bugs me.

People in the comic.
Good:
Zeno
J Takahashi


Evil
Orion


Comics:
Not yet...:eek:

[RyuReiatsu]

I Better finish my new or old characters quickly o.O...
It sounds not bad..
And also hm... what about your old comics, dead?

[Zak]

The one with the online game really got flamed by this one dude who thought I stole his idea and he wouldn't shut up, so I really wasn't able to continue it, and M.O.D might be going through a remake(Or not, that comic was one of my best) so ya pretty much dead. o_O

[RyuReiatsu]

Why did you let yourself get punched in the balls -_-? (If you know what I mean)

You shouldn't let him win like that..
I really liked that comic, meh...

[Zak]

So did I, but he sent me friggen hate mail and crap like that.
I'll be posting the first comic soon.

[crimson hammer]

Here is my character P.S. if you need more poses for human just tell me ill give them.
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/1787/oxzoh0.png
Edit2: His bio
Name: Zeno
Evil or Good: good
Type: sword/buster/average speed/average-low in between defense/High attack
Bio:OXZ (omega/x/zero)
Zeno is a pervert and is proud of it. He does get serious when it comes to a battle or danger. He is loud and energetic and gets violent when impatient. He is a guardian who had once to do recon on a mysterious area where he found Pandora and Prometheus searching for something. When they saw Zeno they were about to attack but he was saved by the biometal OXZ.
OXZ was supposed to be dead but due to the maverick virus still residing in the real body of zero he was infected and given a mind. However was this a curse or a gift. The catch was he was so broken up that he only had the power to help a chosen one or just stay alive with no purpose. So he helped Zeno to give himself a purpose and have the ability to fight again.
Edit:ATTACKS
Buster
regular three small shots
charge: one big shot
OIS
regular three big shots
charge: big laser
Sword:
regular; one slash
charge slash and create a wave (the kinds that harpuia makes just cant find a good one)
OIS
regular when he slashes rocks fall
charge: crimson fang. slashes upward and creates one wave then slashes while falling creating another wave.

[Zak]

Alright your in. Love your bio by the way.

[crimson hammer]

I know you have been bowing down and praising it ever since I made the standing pose XD. Love the priases though.

[Zak]

A little Q and A for ya, What’s that pure red pose for?

[crimson hammer]

that was nothing it was just there for the human when he is transforming in case if someone needed the completely white version they could find that and recolor.
Edit: Hey PK I added his attacks to my submission post.

[Zak]

Alright just wanted to know if it was something important to do with his attacks and such.

[crimson hammer]

Hey PK I have another attack disregard the darkish wave at the upper right page
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/9324/slashchargest5.png

[RyuReiatsu]

Just to know..
Where did you take that slashing shot from?

[crimson hammer]

Took from an original sprite and edited and stuff.

[Hzer0]

Hey PKitty is that the comic that you was announce in your signature?
Because I send you my characters xD.
But if you doesn't have say me I send you again.

[Zak]

Sorry everyone but I've goton grounded so, there want be any updates for who knows, my bad.
~posting from school.

[GearDragon]

Well, I'll submit my chracter, hopefully you survive being grounded. ^_^

Name: J Takahashi

Model: WF(Wildfire) (Sprite Soon)

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Good or Evil: Good, (tries to be neutral, and avoid fighting, but it usually doesn't work out...)

Bio: J is easygoing, laid back, and kinda lazy. He often is found goofing around with his friends, making jokes or hitting on girls(usually fruitlessly). He is quick-tempered and will jump in to fights, only if he is insulted or if he feels that it is a justified cause(example: protecting innocent people or friends).

Model Bio: Whe in model WF J is mildly crazy, and an extreme pyromaniac. WF is very pompous and full of ego, but is loyal to J's friends and allies.

Attacks:
-Buster(Fire Element) (WIP-Almost Done)
-Flamethrower(WIP-Is an edit of buster, won't take long)
-Flare Fist(Sprite Soon)
-Flame Sword(Name may vary, and not sure if I'm going to keep it, but we'll see if I can sprite it to my liking...)

Sprites:
http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/4828/comicsheetss9.png

[Zak]

Ya it's just 2 weeks, and your in.

[crimson hammer]

PK change in plans my new model will be crimson
Hey dudeman I have a new model this will be the one he uses more often.
http://www.media-convert.com/convert/?xid=tzuubn
Here is the link, click the link wait a few seconds then you will see the download button click that I will have his bio in a minute.
Name: Zeno
Evil or Good: good
Type: sword/buster/average speed/average-low in between defense/High attack
Bio:CRIMSON
Zeno is a pervert and is proud of it. He does get serious when it comes to a battle or danger. He is loud and energetic and gets violent when impatient. He is a guardian who had once to do recon on a mysterious area where he found Pandora and Prometheus searching for something. When they saw Zeno they were about to attack but he was saved by the biometal C.
Crimson is a mysterious biometal that seemed to have evolved many times to survive. Now he has been turn into a biometal after his life force had finally depleted. Now he still wants to help the humans and now use the help of Zeno to accomplish this mission.
Attacks
normal: stab
Charge: Flaming Thrust
Charge while grounded: Pyro Rage
Charge: jumps in the air then does a dash with a flaming spear leaving a flame trail. (Dragon Charge)
Shield:
Blocks: fires back the same element it absorbs
Charge: fires a laser (fires a laser also when it hits a attack that is niether Ice, fire, or thunder.

Edit: I will have his walking sprites soon.
He will now only use OXZ when in a really bad situation like when he is at the brink of death.

[Dead Panda]

Yeah... you might want to fix that link.

[crimson hammer]

GOD HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU GUYS!!!! first click the link then wait a few seconds. Then it will show to wait a few seconds. Then it will have a download button click that with ms paint or whatever. That is it.

[Zak]

Can you put it into image shake link or something, my comp just shows a shrinked image.

[crimson hammer]

Did you try to open it in paint.

[Hzer0]

went you go to update?

[Zak]

As soon as I'm ungrounded.

[Orion Zaal]

I'll post for a shot
Name: Orion
Model: S(Spider)
Age: about 26
Gender: Male
Side: Evil..(sort of free-lancer I would say..but evil has hired him. Can just be evil if need be.)
Bio:
Created as a Pyro-technic Humanoid, he escaped his creator's lab.He doesn't like to be order about unless there is something in it for him. He will destroy if it is directly preventing him in a mission. He is very serious in his work also.
Model Bio:
Pretty much the same as Orion's. However is more consious of the surroundings and the consiquences of their actions
Human Attacks:
Orion has his plasma whip with its fire chip. much like Zero's chain rod.
Model Attack:
Rapid fire. Fires cards rapidly at the enemy
Poker Hand. Swiftly fires a column of five cards at his opponent.

I'll get some mug shots done now...notify me of any other sprites you need....if your accepting

Edit: It's a good idea to put the sprites on
Orion (http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/5589/orionek5.png)
Model S (http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/3972/modelssheetad8.png)

[Iblis Trigger]

well I've got a character thouh not a real original model but i'll try my luck...
Name:Chris Kunsoki

Model: Model X and super Form XX
Age: 18

Gender: Male

Good or Evil: good

Bio: a bit of a hot-head he despises all who would use him becuse of his Bio-Metal and maveriks, he loves to fight any strong person with a Bio-Matal to mosty see thair skills for is own use in battle. he is almost never serious and usually makes fun of people who take the smal things seriously.

Model Bio: more of a pacifist then chris and only want peace of all (never the case) but when push come to shove he allows chris to use his full power (Model XX) to pertect the ones most who can't pertect them-selfs.

Attacks: Buster Shot-Normal attacks
Charge Shot-I'm sure you know
Charge Spread-Fires mutiple beams at enemies
Weopen assimilation a.k.a weopen get or still-absorbs one or more ability of an enemy or from a model chris touches
XX Beam- attack of ModalXX fires concentrated energy.
Final Shot- Fires large beam of energy leaves chris drained so it's a do or die.

I'm not sure how to post stuff so if you pic my charactor I could E-mail you if you want.

[Kairos]

Add one more X to your models,and it'll be a party,WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Once I see a comic,I'll cameo.

[Iblis Trigger]

uh...no? i'd rather not even think of that model...*Cringes in fear* hey Pie!

[Zak]

I'm ungrounded now, but my compy has some bugs in it so my dads fixing it.

Posting from school.

[crimson hammer]

Hey Pkitty you do remember I have a model change. It is crimson now. Zeno still has OXz but when he uses it he will only have it for a while as it drain his hp or he goes maverick after tranforming needing to be knocked to his senses canceling the transformation.

[Zak]

I know now, and knowing is half the battle.

[crimson hammer]

I have an updated sheet in my thread so if you dont have it check it out.

[GearDragon]

I know now, and knowing is half the battle.

GI Joe!
Anyways, cant wait for the first update.

[Zak]

It should be up at around 3:30-5:00 central when I get home from HS.

[GearDragon]

Oh, PKitty!
I got an updated sheet for you;
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/8361/comicsheetvp3.png

Don't use his armor sprites yet, just use his street clothes for now please. ^^

[Iblis Trigger]

Hey GearDragon how do you use Imageshack to post sprite sheets? if you could tell me here or by Pm that'd be great!
Ps. i'm new at posting images on Forums.

[GearDragon]

Umm... sure?
OK, I'll send you a guide tonight, I'm just a bit lazy and dont want to write it up yet, if someoneelse wants to tell him whatever.

[Zak]

Sorry guys, somethings came up, homework and I'm kinda got the urge to go out side to play and stuff, It's one of the nicest day this month. Sorry..;>_<

[Zak]

DP Due to news! The first comic will be up today, If it is not, you may all....hurt me in some way.

[tuckur21]

My type of hurt isn't physical its mental.
Anyway hope to see it soon.

[Iblis Trigger]

It really isn't your fault, It's not like your being lazy stuff happens.

[GaiaX2]

OK.

*Koopa Shells PKitty*

[Zak]

@CH: I'm goan need more poses for your Human dude.
@Everybodyels: If any more people want to join are have any Ideas, tell me.

[crimson hammer]

Which poses you need

[Zak]

Runnning/Walking and Thats preety much it, or I could make them, It shouldn't be to hard.

[Iblis Trigger]

are Mug shots needed cause I've seen some with and without what about your comic?

[crimson hammer]

Yeah I didn't bother making the animations for the human as he is kind of a vent recolor. If you could do it for me it would be appreciated also can you post it if you actually do it.

[Zak]

Sure, The update will be up soon.

[Zak]

Sorry I couldn't get the update done, my lil' sis wouldn't shut up becuse she wanted on the comp and my mom made me let here on the comp. I'll get it done when I get home. I promous.

[tuckur21]

You better or the mental images will start getting burned into your mind.

[Zak]

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/6444/c1ns6.png
Wee! First comic, yes CH, I've taken your text boxes!

[crimson hammer]

I could tell you and me could make good friends with our personalities.Xd

[Zak]

Comic Numba 2 will be up when I get home from High School.

[Zak]

http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/6675/c2iz7.png
Update 2.

[NetSaver.exe]

I like the last frame the best.

[Hotenshu Shogun]

This is really off topic but, ZX is like Mobile Suit Gundam meets Megaman X.

On topic I'm not sure if it was intended but the word "Eyes" is mispelled in the first one, and when it shows both of them I think a vertical slash would be more effective. Awesome comic though, keep up the good work.

[RyuReiatsu]

I like the comic already :)...
And I'd like to submit my new char, but I need model PX for it's model..

[crimson hammer]

Wait I am a fire type cant I kick that golems ass

[Zak]

Yes but I realy didn't realy think of that....<.<....>.>
Mr. AzB, were can I locate your sprites?

[Zak]

http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/1249/c3le9.png
And heres the 3rd one!

[RyuReiatsu]

Yes but I realy didn't realy think of that....<.<....>.>
Mr. AzB, were can I locate your sprites?

Yo, well hm...
Actually, you can only get Syuusuke (only standing)
And I don't have a model, since I need PX to make it..

EDIT: Just saw the update, it rocks :)

[crimson hammer]

You mean I ROCk YAAAAAH XD

[Iblis Trigger]

burn baby BURN!

[crimson hammer]

Hehe I just noticed I made his arm fall off. Yay. I got your arm mr Ice Golem.

[RyuReiatsu]

Hehe I just noticed I made his arm fall off. Yay. I got your arm mr Ice Golem.

You just noticed? ahh, I noticed and found that funny xD

[Zak]

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/9192/c4ag7.png
I'm on something today.

[NetSaver.exe]

You are on a roll.

[Zak]

With butter on top? No more updates today, my head hurts.

[Fluttershy]

I noticed some thing. In the second to last update, shouldn't it be "Target Acquired" not required?

[RyuReiatsu]

I noticed some thing. In the second to last update, shouldn't it be "Target Acquired" not required?

Oh my, you are right, I didn't notice it o.o...
It though he wrote acquired o.o..

[Iblis Trigger]

well frist it acquired him then it required him at least thats what I'm thinking he did.

[RyuReiatsu]

Iblis, that doesn't make sense...

If he acquired his target, he won't required it...
In facts, if it just got created...it would require a target.
Which would be a bit more like...

Required a Target to Acquired ( Yeah doesn't make much sense )

[Iblis Trigger]

i must have been thinking of reacquired sorry

[Zak]

KAy...no more pot for the both of you.

Update soon. I hope.

[RyuReiatsu]

i must have been thinking of reacquired sorry

Uh, I don't get why you are apologizing o.o... just pointing out the flaws.
Anyways, reacquired DOES make sense :D