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A Bn comic about Max ((you can tell by the title))
so far i have an intro
http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=137322
i will accept cameos
tell me what you think of the intro
Lord Wraith
13-01-07, 16:17
New concept, though you may want to improve on spelling and grammar.
sorry about that ,i type really fast and something i don't notice some mistakes
Lord Wraith
13-01-07, 16:26
hmm, I think I'll make a new bn character just for this comic...
SHAMAN! I will do it just wait.
oh and wraith,then mite be some thime i need to use some of the maps you made,is that ok
The Sian Random Man
13-01-07, 16:30
I Might enter my netwrok guardians character here with Copy X...
Lord Wraith
13-01-07, 16:31
Sure if you need anything just ask
cool,so i may have the first update today,dependes if the get the sprites done or not
The Sian Random Man
13-01-07, 17:31
Yeah, ill enter Copy X. and his area. ill need some walking poses though, o give me few minutes.
Lord Wraith
14-01-07, 19:30
Hey Spored here's the first glimps of Shaman.EXE, I need ideas for a head and what do you think so far?
crimson hammer
14-01-07, 19:32
hey can crimson enter in this comic
sure crimson
wraith i was thinking like a hood with the face of a vodo person,but so far its good,but i think i'll keep the vodo look for a navi i'm making for this comic
and wraith shaman has a netop right,if so i was thinking they'd be friends with max and necro,i think the navi ideas just... work together,i mean shaman and spirit it just works
oh and heres a list of some of some of the navi's that will apper,not all just a preveiw and its not their names you got to guess their names
the spirit remover
doll of manipulation
the holy healer
Lord Wraith
15-01-07, 12:29
lets see an exorist, a voodoo shaman and a Priest?
anyway here's the update to Shaman's sheet, and sorry I made him some voodoo attacks, ignore Judgeman's books, I'm still editing those and the skulls stay at the back of his battle field and blow fire.
and yes he has an op
NetSaver.exe
15-01-07, 13:23
That is awesome.
cool wraith ,well i was going to make voodooman be the voodoo doll himself
and he's one of the main bad navi, how bout shaman gets that voodoo move from him
AndromedaMan
15-01-07, 17:21
I was thinking about submitting Aeris and Elpizo, they could be navi and Op, but they would be good of course...
sure,submit whoever you want
Fluttershy
15-01-07, 18:02
Cool. I'm gonna submit Jace and Ectoman K? I even have a cool story behind them. I'll submit them when I have more poses done K?
crimson hammer
15-01-07, 18:10
http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/5245/crimsonsheet1rr9.png
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/1569/crimsonsheet2oe3.png
personalties:
Both of them are perverts big ones. Both are crazy about boobs
riv is well, what it says above and he is mostly negative about others like he says negative things but in a comical way. He also is very impatient and gets violent just like ichigo when Quincy was telling his story.
Crimson as it says in above a perv. He loves action and gets serious when fighting he also will fool around with riv when riv is staring at a girl.
The Sian Random Man
15-01-07, 18:44
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/311/hmmphjz9.png
Talking about ichigo... MY character, Ichigo Kurosaki.
Yes, i till dont have a good name, sue me.
Perv in disguise, unlike his counterpart... More like Kon, though hides it. also, a brilliant master mind(like Light to anyone who see death note) and can think of brilliantly evil ideas.
His navi? sheet incomplete, he is a powerfull summoner, and controls water chips(yes, that means his charge=randomly selected water chip in his chip folder!)
Yam.EXE(Yam=Sea in hebrew...)
Fluttershy
15-01-07, 18:46
I'm sorry but Ichigo Kurosaki? Please, let me help you come up with a NON ripped off name. I'm REALLY good at that. How about Hiro Mizu. Hiro is a cool name and Mizu means water in Japanese.
crimson hammer
15-01-07, 18:47
You need to complete it and for the name how about yuruchi hanataro i dont know just made a random name.
The Sian Random Man
15-01-07, 18:57
Not Hiro. Mizu maybe. NOT hiro...
Yam personality: likes eating(Famous quote: "Yum!"), very cute("ho about a huggie for Mr.Buggie?"),Sometimes acts stupid("How about a huggie for Mr.Buggie?"), Intelligent and strong("ROAR AND-No, stuff would be stupid..."), and evil when he sees evil navis("OMGZLIKELETS KILL THAT POOR NAVI").
anyway,i'll have the first comic when i'm done the map
Lord Wraith
16-01-07, 17:20
Cool can't wait
Starmanfan
16-01-07, 17:25
Shiftman and his op are going in... and you already have the sprite of shiftman.
Navi Trivia (don't ask) : 98% of navi's and ops go together. so why is Shiftman's op a magician? (it's not too easy...) [this is just for fun to see if people can get it. and respored can't answer]
i'm having trouble though,
i need it making like a painting that the pic on it looks like max,but older,longer hair,hair red,and i scar across his right eye
cause max live in like a mansion and they normaly have a big painting
and the painting is of max's dad who is dead
Wow, what a great comic. You could atleast try an different font, some images. But just black on white?
It's ment to be like that,look at the intro in BNC ,its just black and white
NetSaver.exe
17-01-07, 01:38
When will the next update be?
i said,once i'm done the map
Lord Wraith
17-01-07, 13:30
Do you still need help with that portrait Spored?
yes please,i'm having trouble with the whole map
Lord Wraith
17-01-07, 13:33
I see, if you send me what you have I can work on it
I see, if you send me what you have I can work on it
well i'll try but i can't on the comp i'm on now
Lord Wraith
17-01-07, 13:37
don't worry I couldn't work on it right now anyway
here is a look at voodooman,he's the voodoo doll himself ,here it is
Lord Wraith
17-01-07, 22:23
I see you used my needles
yep ,they look good so i decided not to make my own sorry
Lord Wraith
17-01-07, 22:30
Oh I don't care I consider it a good thing you thought they were good
ok i'm working on the map now
RyuReiatsu
18-01-07, 19:27
Hm... ReSpored, that comic "sounds" or I should say "look" interesting, I'll keep an eye on it :P
I'm sorry but Ichigo Kurosaki? Please, let me help you come up with a NON ripped off name. I'm REALLY good at that. How about Hiro Mizu. Hiro is a cool name and Mizu means water in Japanese.
There! Somebody's who has enough inspiration to freaking not rip off a name!
You need to complete it and for the name how about yuruchi hanataro i dont know just made a random name.
Wow give me a break, that's another name rip, look at that...
Yuruchi? It it being written Yoruichi, and "hanataro" should be Hanatarou
Plus, these are 2 Last names or First names, it makes no sense.
crimson hammer
18-01-07, 21:25
Look I just said some names off the top of my head ok. NOw that was a rather pointless post and a dead topic.
darn,i can make the map look right no mater how hard i try
Lord Wraith
19-01-07, 01:09
I'm resending those sprites to you right now ReSpored
RyuReiatsu
19-01-07, 01:17
darn,i can make the map look right no mater how hard i try
Did you mean can't?
And hm... you could maybe ask Netsaver for help, he's great in EXE Overworld maps.
NetSaver.exe
19-01-07, 01:23
Not as good as Wraith. I am just getting used to it.
Lord Wraith
19-01-07, 01:35
Wow I feel like I'm skilled...
Pizza making I'm skilled at that too, drop into Pizza Pizza in Bancroft, and I might make your pie...
you'll know who I am by my name,
anyways anything with the map I can help?
NetSaver.exe
19-01-07, 01:38
I guess being recommended is pretty good.
Long way from the states isn't it?
Wow I feel like I'm skilled...
Pizza making I'm skilled at that too, drop into Pizza Pizza in Bancroft, and I might make your pie...
you'll know who I am by my name,
anyways anything with the map I can help?
well i was taking your entry hall,remove the doors
the most trouble i'm having is i have to make like one of those elegent red and gold carpets to go from where the front door would be,up the stairs and ending at the wall,that is were that painting of max's dad will be,((still need someone to make that for me from the descripion i gave on the past pages))
then i have to recolour and chage some of it to make it look like an classic haunted manstion
AndromedaMan
19-01-07, 02:36
I CAN TRY!!! *JUMPING* CHOOSE ME! CHOOSE ME!
go ahead,i'll take any help i can get
((great,i just remembered,i need to make a map of max's city called DeadNet City, a gloomy city on the outscirts of netopia,other then max and a cople other that i plan to make later its uninhabited,the grass is all dead,the trees are dead so they have no leave,and other then max's mansion all the houses are falling apart))
AndromedaMan
19-01-07, 02:47
Could you give me a base?
right for the mansion i was going to use wraith entry hall
here
i changed my mind about the door,keep them but make them like old fasion((like in haunted house movies))
heres the details for the painting
i need it making like a painting that the pic on it looks like max,but older,longer hair,hair red,and i scar across his right eye
cause max live in like a mansion and they normaly have a big painting
and the painting is of max's dad who is dead
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/552/entryhallbmpxq1.png (http://imageshack.us)
AndromedaMan
19-01-07, 02:54
Ha! Too easy, but I'll have to finish it tomorrow. I'm gonna sleep. g'night.
well thats good,i don't need it till tomorrow
and wraith,are you going to make a net op for shaman
I'll submit Soul and MAssimo (If I don't get Saberman done.)
Lord Wraith
19-01-07, 21:49
I'm am planing on making an op for Shaman, though I'm not sure what age you'd like him to be, see I could do like a friend and have it be a kid, or it could be more like a mentor and be an older character...
then there's the question of male or female...
You should so have Miyu and Skullman in this story they fit right in.
i am having them in
miyus his mentor
and your op,i was thinking of it being a girl,and friends with max
Lord Wraith
19-01-07, 22:02
Okay will do...how old are they?
wait I get to make a hot goth-like girl now....
yep,and they are both like 13-14
((max is as tall as lan from bn 4))
crimson hammer
19-01-07, 22:10
SoOOoo... will max by any chance hook up with his so called friend. Also isnt myu like in bn 1-3 style
that why i'm changing miyus sprite to fit the 4-6 style
NetSaver.exe
19-01-07, 22:12
You do know that me and Cesar did convert the sprite to 4-6 style, right?
crimson hammer
19-01-07, 22:12
what about my other question hmmmmm XD
You do know that me and Cesar did convert the sprite to 4-6 style, right?
really well i also have to make walking sprites for miyu
Lord Wraith
19-01-07, 22:17
now what fun would it be if he answered that...so here I am thinking Max's friend is going to be 16, and goth....with a red streak in her hair...
cool ,sounds cool
oh and what colour if miyus hair exactly,and changing her mug to have bn 4-6 colour so i need to know what colour her hair is so i can find someones colour to use
Lord Wraith
19-01-07, 22:26
I can't remember Miyu's hair colour...is it purple or green...
anyways here's that portrait of Max's Dad tell me what you think
that looks awsome!!!!!! ,and i thought it was green,just making sure
miyus mugshot edited to have bn 4-6 colours
also,both of max's parents are dead so he sorta find miyu to be kind of like a parent to him since his parents dead,kind of
Lord Wraith
20-01-07, 00:16
That's good... now all we need is that map and an update
Cesar said he'd have it done today,but he hasn't really been on
your goth girl may be needed for the first or second update
Lord Wraith
20-01-07, 00:26
...reallyO_o... I'd better start working on her, what poses will she need?
at the moment just walking
Lord Wraith
20-01-07, 00:32
...wow well then off to the sketch pad...
anyway,i mostly need the map
Lord Wraith
20-01-07, 00:39
Yeah I guess that'd help but on the plus side you have your portrait.
yeah thats true,well i'm making more sprites for miyu right now anyway or atleast i'm trying to
The Sian Random Man
20-01-07, 15:11
Damn,Forgot to tell:
Yam's current sprites are basically...Recolored and slightly edited bass sprites with an actual BODY(HOLY $#!7 A BODY FOR BASS! SHOCK AND AWE!).
So, i thought of him having an actuall battle form and normal form...
Oh, and he has a cape in my one, not a cloak. Yeah, no wonder you can see his body...
Oh, and i have something planned out for poor Mizu...Heh...Heh...Heh.
Lord Wraith
20-01-07, 16:34
...Bass with a body isn't overly surprising, anyone can do that with 4.5 sprites as there is an unlockable of Bass with out a cloak...
The Sian Random Man
20-01-07, 17:16
Well i made my own version...
And it isnt finnished anyways... Thats teh base.
well...still waiting on Cesar,everytime he's been on he just logs of like 5 mins later
Lord Wraith
22-01-07, 01:16
...lynch mob him...
That always works for me...
crimson hammer
22-01-07, 01:39
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/7762/room9sd.png
Hey if you need it here is riv's room
Lord Wraith
23-01-07, 18:40
I like that room,
But still waiting for the update
Starmanfan
23-01-07, 20:33
*picks up a torch*
i can't wait for the update when it comes
WOOOOOOOOO! A mob about a comic,and it's not directed at me!
*Picks up Giant Sword* MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOB!
crimson hammer
23-01-07, 21:15
hunting calypso could wait *joins mob with a big sword and buster* MOOOOOOOOOOOOOB!!!!!!!!
calm down guys...... your thinking to small *pulled out flaming flamethrower sword and goes looking for Cesar*
Lord Wraith
24-01-07, 01:37
"Wraith rides in with a charged Death Star Super Laser" Show me where he is!
The Sian Random Man
24-01-07, 11:55
Is that the best you can do?
*builds a new ragnarok which pours large amounts of oil around the worl and a third one which is a flamethrower, then activates the second and charges the third. the first will stun Cesar so we can hit directly with the third*
Great minds think alike. none of you are great minds!
Lord Wraith
24-01-07, 21:33
...the Death Star destroys Planets... Ragnorak fully charged only destroyed Neo Arcadia if that...so I believe this is when I say
OH SNAP!
I'll join later, my new Navi is almost done.
The Sian Random Man
25-01-07, 10:55
alright... i equipp the death sar with ragnarok!
howd you like them apples?
anyway i got a reply from him saying in need someone else to make the map so..........any volenteers
The Sian Random Man
25-01-07, 18:36
OH OH! I WANNA TRY!
though, its gonna be made tomorrow.
and, one warning: this is going to be my first try at scratching/making maps.
*silence*
Right, who cares?!
NetSaver.exe
25-01-07, 20:47
Just a tip when making the map.
Use other maps as reference.
go back to page three i have the map i want it to be made from and a discription
The Sian Random Man
26-01-07, 13:36
so basically, you want a haunted mansion?
Right. Off to editing!
(AND recoloring. there is no haunted house with grey floor, brown doors and random colored rugs...and normal walls. theyve got to be BLACK and BLUE and BROWN!)
well yeah, the the rug is gold and red((like elegent rugs in rich peoples mansions
The Sian Random Man
26-01-07, 13:59
yup.
Can you give me a reference though?
Lord Wraith
26-01-07, 17:46
if he fails I'll try, and how many rooms are you making anyway?
GearDragon
26-01-07, 19:01
I might cameo J and Wildfire after I finish a few of the sprites I'm working on.
I might be able to help out with this a bit, but not too much...
Lord Wraith
26-01-07, 19:41
Gear Dragon's back huzzah!
if he fails I'll try, and how many rooms are you making anyway?
,well the house i need max's bedroom,a room for miyu to do fortune telling,a place that kinda look like a dungen with a spooky netbattle thing in the middel,then a room the has some creepy stacues on each side of a long hall that leads to a painting of max's mom who had long black hair with a skull pin in it
and then i have to make deadnet city ,this souldn't be to hard,just basicly have to make some old broken down houses ,ever tree and grass dead,make it look like night and make max's mansion on the top of a hill
Hooray for GD
bios of the two mian character to make up for the fact of no updates
http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=144589
and wraith,just go ahead and make the map yourself,if roar makes one two i'll just use what one i think is better
sorry again for no update
Edit: also can someone make the bushes and tree in this part of this map dead
((like with no leaves and the branches hanging limb)) and the grass look dead ((well one of yous make the inside of max's masion map i'm going to start deadnet city's map))
Lord Wraith
29-01-07, 00:52
sure thing I'll try my hand at it
k thanks,i hope to be able to update next weekend
The Sian Random Man
29-01-07, 17:55
Really... I cant make it. Sorry.
Lord Wraith
29-01-07, 18:32
And that is why I'm here...though this may take time between hopefully updating BNC, creating characters for CR and updating CR, I should be able to it though, however if you want a really good map quick ask Forte Bx or whatever his name is, he's the best out there.
Fluttershy
29-01-07, 19:22
Too bad he left here due to personel reasons.
Lord Wraith
29-01-07, 20:03
agh not him too....
NetSaver.exe
29-01-07, 20:54
A lot of members are leaving.
Feh,I might be next. Can't stand some of these N00bs.
Lord Wraith
29-01-07, 23:02
No Soul don't leave! and great song you're listening too there in your sig, I have that CD
Rainbow Dash
29-01-07, 23:31
Feh,I might be next. Can't stand some of these N00bs.
Have complaints about a member? Compile what they've done wrong and tell a mod'. Or hit the report button. I'd be glad to ban a member that's caused nothing but trouble and hasn't been noticed. Otherwise, you have no cause to complain, 'specially in a random thread. You have to help do your part if you want the forum to improve.
Oh, and there are spaces after commas. You know, like what I did just now.
people people back on topic
well i hope you can make the map wraith,i'm i middel of making Deadnet City's map and Net
Lord Wraith
30-01-07, 15:39
I might make the map, but some guy name Zero of the Death PMed me, and was asking about BNC, he said he was good a real world maps, so I told him you needed a haunted mansion and he said he would do it, or at least try...
actually come to think of it I don't know if it's a he or not...
The Sian Random Man
30-01-07, 16:07
Have complaints about a member? Compile what they've done wrong and tell a mod'. Or hit the report button. I'd be glad to ban a member that's caused nothing but trouble and hasn't been noticed. Otherwise, you have no cause to complain, 'specially in a random thread. You have to help do your part if you want the forum to improve.
Oh, and there are spaces after commas. You know, like what I did just now.
X Axl Zero, PLEASE dont read this.
[Spoiler Deleted] NO. Don't post these things about a member in a public topic. Tell a mod, as in personally.
Yeah. On Topic: Erhh... i think im going to change my old character to trace. read his starforce/kage no bunshin profile. ill make his sprites later...
ok so i PM'd someone who might help with the maps and if they do then i can update
Almost done, you'll be able to update soon.
(And maybe I should actually read this comic.)
Lord Wraith
14-02-07, 22:12
Cool an update soon... you mean this comic is still alive?
yes, that mean you still have to make the goth girl that owns Shaman,and i don't belive you made a mug for Shaman
Lord Wraith
14-02-07, 22:29
Heh...yep that's what that means...
Time to sprite...maybe after I play some more Ultimate Alliance on my Wii...
Cool an update soon... you mean this comic is still alive?
I should hope so, if not, all my work will have been in vain!
of coruse there will be an update,don't you worry
Lord Wraith
15-02-07, 17:17
Is the map made?
yep,update tonight,i'm just having trouble making what max is going to say seem like how you make him talk wraith
That's funny because isn't Max your character?
yes he is my character but i made him for wraiths comic,this is the first time i'v try'd writing for him,and wraith nailed how he talk perfectly
Can't wait to see it the update.
update soon,sorry i couldn't get it done yesterday,i wasn't feeling well and went to bed early
Lord Wraith
17-02-07, 17:34
Look an update to Shaman's sheet!
the mugs are there and a very bad OW, as well as his hot op
I know she's tall but she is older.
Her name and profile hmm...
Name: Ashley Darkinara
Age:16
Gender: Female
Personality: Very sassy and out spoken, she doesn't like being told what to do and would prefer to always be in control. She can be mystical and ellusive when talking. Very flirty she likes to be noticed especially by older guys. Ashley's friendship to Max is that they've been next door neighbours.
Name: Shaman.EXE
Age: Endless
Gender: Male
Personality: Shaman is always ellusive when talking and never makes a direct point or statement. Shaman is very powerful and only uses a portion of his power to fight. Shaman can control other navis and does so when needed.
Shaman is very loyal to Ashley and would die before letting her be hurt.
Now for the UPDATE!
i agree with the op being hot,and shamans mug look awsome, edited from shadowman?
Lord Wraith
17-02-07, 17:45
Yep heavy edit on the shadow, so when's the update?
just finishing it now,shamans personality will be easy for me to write for, Ashley's i might have rouble writing for,but i'll work around it
the update should be up in like 5 mins
DragonZero
17-02-07, 17:49
*Ahem!*
Nice sprites there, Wraith. *Wipes Off Drool*
Did I cameo Darrel here yet?
Lord Wraith
17-02-07, 17:52
Pig tails, mini skirt, corsette, what's not to like eh guys?
Can't wait to see the update!
no you didn't cameo Darrel
uploading the update now
edit: update
not sure if the titles spelt right,but if its not i'll edit it
http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=155665
DragonZero
17-02-07, 18:03
Well, the spelling is awful, but it has a good plot.
Though it would help if Max had a running pose or two.
i'v been trying since i first made his sheet,but his running never looks right
Lord Wraith
17-02-07, 18:10
Interesting...Max is creepy.
So not to be pushy but when's the next update?
I want to see Ashley and Shaman...
whenever i get a chance,writing more then two panals for max is harder then you would think
i can blam you for being pushy,i'm always being pushy to see more max in BNC
DragonZero
17-02-07, 18:14
i'v been trying since i first made his sheet,but his running never looks right
Ah. I know how that feels. Anyway, I guess I'll submit Darrel. For his personality, just think of what I would do or how I would act in his situation.
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/7852/devon6kz3.png
Drago: The same as Darrel, pretty much. Just a fair bit more brave, and a tad more violent and fiery.
ok,like the new added black part,before when it was all green looked...werid,
edit:anyway g2g,be back on later
Double post for an update
http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=155779
sorry if i didn't get ashleys personality right,like i said,it was hard writing for her. i might have one more update today,if not then tomorrow
Think that I can cameo ZoD for a villain?
Lord Wraith
17-02-07, 21:43
The One and Only Wraith.EXE, I like the sound of that. But I can’t wait to see a sweet net battle between Shaman and Necro.
he's a knight right,so it would work along how i want the villens,but i still don't like his name,it just seem unoriginal
edit:yeah,if i can i'm going to make the fight a three parter
you are the one and only
But... but... his name was... Oh well, Can I submit Zyros then? He's themed after a Dark-Knight. Of course, he's sheet is incomplete but I can finidsh it within a couple days.
Just incase you want to see Zyros:
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k27/ZeroOfDeath/ZyrosSpriteFinalv2.png
And for the record, the name "ZoD" has only beenused once before, and that was General Zod, a villain from Superman.
i was meaning the whole zerocause its stands for zero of death doesn't it, part
that navi look cool,but needs lots of shading
crimson hammer
17-02-07, 22:54
Love the scenery and the tank top the girl is wear. It show alot of definition if you know what I mean.
DragonZero
17-02-07, 22:56
*High Fives Crimson*
So. Can Darrel be in here soon?
As a Vampire (That Would TOTALLY Fit With Max's Decor.)?
crimson hammer
17-02-07, 22:59
I dont wanna submit my navi because I wanna change my human to the one I used for the Zx series since he looks alot better.
DragonZero
17-02-07, 23:03
Well, actually, he looks a LOT like one of the Guardia-*Shot By Crimson*!
crimson hammer
17-02-07, 23:26
Yes he does and he is but I really liked how he lookes and stuff and could see he has the ability of being a bigass pervert like me. However even though that is kinda lazy I made up for by giving him his own model with his face instead of a vent add on.
i was meaning the whole zerocause its stands for zero of death doesn't it, part
that navi look cool,but needs lots of shading
My bad, I posted his incomplete sprite, anyways...ZoD doesn't actually stand for ZeroOfDeath, it doesn't stand for anything. In reality the name ZoD and my user name ZeroOfDeath ended being an abbreviation completly by accident. Anyways, if you do want to use ZoD then I'll make his name Zyros.
I'm not sure how much sense my post just made, I'm sickand can't even see stright, sorry.
Just pm me when you get the chance.
*High Fives Crimson*
So. Can Darrel be in here soon?
As a Vampire (That Would TOTALLY Fit With Max's Decor.)?
back off you two
and i'm planing to have darrel as sorta like the dex of this comic
like max is lan ((main character))
ashley's mayl ((female person))
darrel's dex ((rivel type guy))
and no.... darrel can't be a vamp,cause i'm making shademan make a reapperence, this time with a net op !?!?!!? ,i think i reviled to much
*Sniff* You ignored my post...
i was getting to your post,cameo him if you want to,i always like cameos
DragonZero
18-02-07, 02:39
back off you two
and i'm planing to have darrel as sorta like the dex of this comic
like max is lan ((main character))
ashley's mayl ((female person))
darrel's dex ((rivel type guy))
Rival Type Guy I can live with. Fat, Stupid, Couch Potato Guy with a Navi who can't speak English and who's specialty is breaking rocks and hitting things, I CANNOT.
Darrel should be like Dex as a Rival, but smarter. A lot. Skinnier, and actually be able to help the hero (Max), as opposed to just getting PWNed by every WWW Navi who talks to him. Since Drago is OBVIOUSLY not a weakling like GutsMan, I don't think that'll be a problem at all, though.
RIGHT?!
do you really think i'd make drago as much of a weakling as gutsman,what do you think i am
max is the main character and ashley and darrel are like sorta the role of like baryl or chaud if you know what i mean
DragonZero
18-02-07, 02:47
Oh, good. I was a little worried there, for a second.
Chaud is cool, and Dex isn't. :D
ok i'm working on Necroman VS Shaman part 1 and will have it up by tomorrow
I guess I'll cameo ZoD (or Zyros, since I'll call him that) anyways... I'll send his sheet to you in a pm, that ok?
*hopes that you still needa main villain*
well the main villen is the net op of a navi i made called exorsist.exe, that works cause necros a spirit
Zyros can be like his second in comand i guess,but that spot was for voodooman...i guess theey can both have that spot
DragonZero
18-02-07, 03:06
Yeah. Two Sub-Commanders. Cool!
Yay!
*Does really weird dance that freaks people out so much that they all shoot me until I stop*
*Cries because I'm dead*
but voodoomans alittle more important to the story line
be glad i was even able to work you guy in
Sure, 'tis your comic afterall...
The Sian Random Man
18-02-07, 11:56
Hmm...
Yam.EXE and his op wont cameo. I'll cameo Trace and his Navi instead. Keheh.EXE EXECUTE!
Keheh=Darker in hebrew...
update...
i kinda made up attacks for shaman
http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=156071
DragonZero
18-02-07, 17:27
Again, comic and plot=good, spelling an grammar=BAD.
you=stfu you don't have to say that every update,i think we got it the first time
I like it but things seem too peaceful, chaos, me need chaos to start!!!
Lord Wraith
18-02-07, 18:00
Dz's going to like my BNC update, but anyways about your comic, you should consider getting an assistant to do your text and stuff, that way you'll have correct spelling and grammer no offensive.
As for Shaman's attacks, fairly close, I was more thinking he could use the ring to summon stuff. Oh and he should have two skulls at the back of his battle field when he fights, just FYI there.
now you tell me that.....
I can help if you want me too.
cool,ok i can't update till next weekend sorry
Alright, just remember, I'm always at your disposal.
ok i'm working on the next update right now
double post for the update
http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=167767
sorry for making shaman seem weak wraith,i just didn't want it to take to long,plus it is only the first battle
AndromedaMan
11-03-07, 04:18
WTFSIT?
I have one question?
How come you used my Miyu without giving me credit?
netsaver said i could use it but i couldn't remember if it was you or netsaver who made it,so i was going to fix it once i found out,and i will now change it
Edit: ok look at the first comic page,it now has credit to you for the Miyu sprite ^^............don't hurt me forgetting
AndromedaMan
11-03-07, 04:24
Oh!! I'm sorry, really sorry!! It's PD, and I forgot...
You don't need to give credit...
my bad.
don't worry,i like giving credit,i changed the first page so it gave credit to you
now i won't have another update till most likely next weekend,depends on if ZoD make me that net map i requested or not
Request? What request? I've received no request.
*looks around suspiciously*
But seriously, what request?
i asked if you could make a netarea for me after you finished my first request and you said you would
I did?
*checks pms*
Nope, not such request...
hmmmmmm,i rember requesting it to you....... oh well,i'll get someone else then,or try myself
It's all good, I made room for it. You can expect it within a 1-4 days work days.
Joking, I'll have it to you within 3 days.
i can't get on here till next friday anyway
Ok then, just send me a pm explaining the area in detail please.
ok so no update till ZoD is done that request,hwe said something about his comp being slow so it might take some time
ok,so heres an update,but i will defenetly need the net area for the next update
http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=172357
Yup, I'll be done sometime tomorrow. (hopefully)
EDIT: Is that a pokemon background?
and no,its bn style
and i need the net area if your done
Sorry no, getting back into my scholl schedule has thrown things off in terms of distributing my time between homework and spritng and everything else really.
No idea when I'll be abe to finish it.
well ,since he said to me in a pm that he'll mostlikely have it done tonight,then i should have an update tonight or tomorrow
ok heres an update
Page 006: A Strange Rumor (http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=178872)
let me know what you think
NetSaver.exe
30-03-07, 22:12
I saw it on DD when I was just on. I am so confused. SO is he evil or not?
you'll just have to wait and find out now won't you,if i revel that it might wreck it for you
Zack In? I thought it was Jack In..
Hehe..Shadow the Hedgehog reference..
oh sorry,i was going kinda fast to make this and must not of noticed
Edit: i fixed it
There are a lot of typos but it doesn't really matter, just check the spelling next time.
Other than that, ok update. Nice background choice.
well i will have another one or two updates tomorrow
ok heres any update
Page 007: A Nightmare of a battle Part1 (http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=179484)
NetSaver.exe
31-03-07, 20:40
Another update, Yay.
DragonZero
31-03-07, 20:41
Wuh-oh. Nightmare Viruses. They're like BN6 Shadows, right? Immune to anything except Blade Type Chips?
NetSaver.exe
31-03-07, 20:47
I hated those viruses a lot.
yep,thats the reson i used them,the only thing necroman has close to a sword attack is shadow claw,but claw attacks((like falzar beast outs slash)) count as normal attack
well my spriting comp is a peice of cra,so its not working,so no more updates till i get it working again
DragonZero
31-03-07, 21:47
I hated those viruses a lot.
I have All-Sword folders, so I never have anything to worry about.
By the Way, ReSpored. Make sure you keep up to date on DragoMan's sheets (There's a new one in my thread).
well i don't need the full sheet now because,your only going to see necro fightting
NetSaver.exe
31-03-07, 21:52
The only swords I have are sword, widesword, and longsword so I can do the Program Advance, but I can never get them all at the right time.
lucky you for even having that, i'm a cannon/bomb/navi type
but enogh about that
Lord Wraith
31-03-07, 23:00
Y'know what's funny, Ashley would turn in Necroman for the reward then, break him out just cause they're friends.
i thought as much,buteven if i did do that theres still kinda of the fact of the six other navis that all want the reward
DragonZero
31-03-07, 23:07
Yeah. The other six Navis RIGHT BEHIND THEM.
ok so i plan on having an update today,,but i'm not promising anything
Page 008: A Nightmare of a Battle Part 2 (http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=192434)
yeah......update......... like anyone cares.....
NetSaver.exe
22-04-07, 21:37
It's about time. I know who that navi is....
i think everyone should,if they were reading all the comics that is
Lord Wraith
25-04-07, 18:25
Keep'em coming ReSpored.
ok not an update,will have an update tommorrow but this is the cover of chapter 2,alittle bland i know
the first chapter was more of a opening
Second Arc: Wandering Spirit : Reminders of the Past (http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/index.php?p=195840)
Heres that update i mentioned earlier
Page 009: A New Comrade (http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=196172)
update ((does anyone even care anymore))
Page 010:Gathering Information (http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=209339)
DragonZero
21-05-07, 22:25
I care! :D By the way, not a bad update!
and it would apper your the only one who cares
anyway,i'm doing an update right now,but i'm running into trouble putting the BN6 Undernet map together,could someone help me out
Lord Wraith
05-07-07, 23:55
How exactly do you need help?
I could tell you where everything goes, except INC has Undernet Zero which was left out of the English version so, I'm not too good with that one.
yeah i want to get it to look almost exactly the same,but as you see on INC,all the side stuff and upperlevels are on the sides of the map
and wait,i'v been in undernet zero in my bn 6 falzar,thats where you can fight bass
Lord Wraith
06-07-07, 00:17
Whoops, I meant Undernet Zero 2, and it's pretty easy to make the maps, just move the top pieces back in place by matching it up, I'm pretty sure the Inc people made it quite clear where to re-attach the top and bottom pieces,
the upper levels are easy to reattach,its more of where the fire is supossed to go thats annoying me
here an update for any who care
i will most likely have 4 or 5 more updates this week,and i also plan on updating ZXE
Page 011: Hollow Grave (http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=246168)
DragonZero
19-07-07, 01:03
Very nice, RS. The Grammar still needs some work, but I like you focusing on Drago a bit. :D
well he is the only one who hasn't really been shown fightting
DragonZero
19-07-07, 01:06
That's true, I guess. He did help fight those Cloaked Navis, didn't he?
he basiclly only did like one or two attacks
DragonZero
19-07-07, 01:09
That's true, too.
k,i'm working on an update now for all those who'd like to know,should have it done in and hour or so
update,well not that good an update,but its an update
Page 012:Hollowman endsssss thisssss battle (http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=266676)
Sorry for taking so long to update, but seeing BNC's Return has motivated me to update
Page 013: The Past Back to Haunt (http://www.drunkduck.com/Battle_Network_Child_Of_Fate/?p=303608)
Lord Wraith
03-11-07, 02:42
Yep I have that effect on people somedays....
I like this comic it's pretty good (I don't know how many times I've said that...)
Yep I have that effect on people somedays....
I like this comic it's pretty good (I don't know how many times I've said that...)
And that is the effect Max and Necro have on people:D
Lord Wraith
03-11-07, 02:54
True dat, anyways I hope you keep updating to encourage me to keep updating, deal?
Deal!,i actully know for sure i'll have another tommorrow
Battle Network comics seem to revive one by one. Actually, I was planning on reviving mine too, either tomorrow or in two days.
But yeah, I can't post here without looking at your comic, can I? Let's see.
Well, a few slips of the grammar, but I've seen worse.
What you lack, tough, is a dynamic camera. It stays put. Always. It needs to zoom in, have split-screen, rotating views, at least in the net (Real World is harder to do).
It looks just too plain and boring without, and this is what pretty much every BN comic lacks. I'd like to see otherwise by someone.
(PS: If my post sounds weird, or ended abrubtly, or whatever, I'm sorry. If that happened, then that's my cue not to stay up till 4:07 anymore.)
Lord Wraith
03-11-07, 03:18
Hmm...(keeps that in mind for own comic)
Those are interesting points, time to step it up a notch if we want to be better than some of these noobs eh ReSpored?
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