Custom Sprites Rating Thread

[Zero20XD6]

Great job Jace 10/10

[tuckur21]

What are those kneeling poses for. *Smirks* But its probaly not what I'm thinking. 10/10

[Jace]

Ha ha. Funny. Though I wouldn't mind that...

[crimson hammer]

hey jace you should make the crouch that aile does *smirk* also 10/10

[turpinator]

I was wondering if anyone could critique this, I made the mugshot, front pose, and battle headshot. This sprite was made MMBN style as you can see and I didn't complete it entirely because I need a second opinion on the concept before I continue:

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/MysteryMan.png

Keep in mind this is only my first time creating something on my own. Hit me with your best shot, I take criticism very well.:g-winky:

[Boja]

Well...it needs better shading, and it doesn't look BN style at all to me

[crimson hammer]

yeah it looks like some power ranger thing in that stance try to make it bn style

[Judge Dredd]

Ha ha, not a custom sprite, just a little joke I made.

[turpinator]

Heh, heh, uhhhhh....... :g-drop: Well I did say "hit me with your best shot", didn't I? Is it possible someone could help me with it, I feel like I took a bit too big of a step out of my normal expertise. Was the mug and battle headshot decent at least?

[Valkus]

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/1787/kenzanrv2.png

New Op. Mug.

[Judge Dredd]

My bad turnupinator, I didn't read your entry, I just put in my picture. However, your sprite was good, but you might want to not use the original sprites/headshots for you sprites, because then its just an edit, not an actual original sprite, like my Fonzie sprite is just a recolor with a caption. Same for you Valkus. However, I have no right to say that; I haven't made a completely custom sprite ever.

[Valkus]

My bad turnupinator, I didn't read your entry, I just put in my picture. However, your sprite was good, but you might want to not use the original sprites/headshots for you sprites, because then its just an edit, not an actual original sprite, like my Fonzie sprite is just a recolor with a caption. Same for you Valkus. However, I have no right to say that; I haven't made a completely custom sprite ever.
I know but most operators I see are just C+P recolors aswell. plus the hat is custom, It's sort of a work in Progress thing.

[turpinator]

Ah, uh, well TECHNICALLY I didn't recolour as the only thing that is the same is the head's outline, but yeah I see your point. Could someone help me MMBN style the overhead sprite? I feel like I could finish the whole spritesheet by myself If I could get around that little hurdle.

BTW I forgot to ask, what did you think of the colour/names concepts?

[crimson hammer]

okay SC said it and now I am saying it a sprite is custom if you even make an edit. You also cant make something totally original because you are using the capcam style of sprite making.

[Judge Dredd]

Ok. Here's the superhero sprites I am using in my comic I have not started on (will eventually) Hope you like them.

[Guardman.EXE]

The man in the red could use a tad more shading, the orange robot is cool though.I also like how you sprited the cloak. I'd show them as normal sprite sized, instead of zoomed in though.

[Judge Dredd]

I don't know who the white masked guy was suppsed to be, but I love that cape. By the way, I made the green cape on the grey guy, and got the brown cape from a website. Did you get the insignia on the red guys shirt? If you didn't, take 8th grade science again.

[Judge Dredd]

I will make more sprites for all of them, but I doubt the brown cape guy will need too many, I intended for him to be kind of like V.

[Jace]

Please don't DP.

[turpinator]

Doesn't the equation mean Force = Mass x Acceleration?

[Judge Dredd]

Yes it does, and my bad Jace. It kind of fit my speed theme of the character, and I will have a name for him by this friday evening. I am having the friend I made it for over.

[crimson hammer]

I think the m stands for momentum

[turpinator]

No the mass part I'm certain of, it's the Acceleration I'm not so sure of. >.>

[Judge Dredd]

I'm nearly certain that it's force= mass x acceleration. I'll go look up newton's laws on google.

Okay, I'm back, and its force= mass x acceleration. NASA said so.

[Jace]

You're right. It is. I took physics last year and remember that.

[turpinator]

I double checked google, I was right. W00t, I can't believe I remembered that since the last time I took science was like 6 years ago. Just goes to show my memory isn't as crappy as I always deem it to be. ^_^;

Oh ya, no one responded to my question yet (whether it be people missed it or not doesn't matter to me):

BTW I forgot to ask, what did you think of the colour/names concepts?

[Guardman.EXE]

I just had that in science...F=MA....Though I think it's Force=Mass x Area...Though we were learning about pressure and all that jazz.

[Jace]

No, A is Acceleration. Trust me on this.

[Judge Dredd]

There are probably many varients of the equation "F=MA" but this is Newton's second law of motion. Ok then, since no one is putting on their sprites, any suggestions for names? The first grey/green one is Silicon, though.

[turpinator]

Mime Char: Shadow Puppet

Yellow/Orange Char: Tex, TX-512, Metal Thing (Fantastic Four Style; you could also make it a nickname that he HATES with a burning passion because of the connotation)

Purple/Maroon Char: Charley (as in Charley Co. in a military division)

Red Char: Uhhhhhh…….. well you did say your friend was gonna come up with a name, right?

I would have to admit that my lacking an answer to this question is bugging me like crazy. If anyone could give me some closure it would be appretiated:

BTW I forgot to ask, what did you think of the colour/names concepts?

[DrHogan]

Maybe more people will post in my thread if they see some of my stuff here first.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v200/Kojitsuke/drock.gif
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v200/Kojitsuke/drock_mini.gif

[ForteBX.EXE]

Rate bump please for Biometals A, T, and B (Axl, Terra, Bass).

[Karmiininpuna]

To DrHogan: Whoa, those are really good! Did you scratch them, or?
To ForteBX.EXE: Hmm, those look nice, even though the fact is that I haven't seen too many Biometals :P

Then, my stuff. New I mean.
Model K, aka. Model Kraft
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f360/Okami901/Sprites/KraftModelbyokami.png
My comments: Well, it looks ok for me, I have some problems with the gun, so I didn't add it there. Might add it later.

Sailor Moon, ZX-styled
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f360/Okami901/Sprites/sailormoonbyokami.png
My comments: Best ideas come at the middle of midnight. :D
So that sprite was made yesterday, midnight. :P
Looks good to me, some parts of the body have some problems... Mainly feet and arms. And hair. I hate that hair.

[turpinator]

I redited my MysteryMan MMBN (hopefully >.<) styled sprite, added more shading, retouched the coulors, and reshaped his body a bit. What do you think? Better? Worse? Was the colours/names concepts cool (no I do not try to be a phychotic nut, bent on getting my questions answered. It's just implied :g-ninja:)?

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/MysteryManRedited.png

[SpeedReemix]

I made some new biometals -
Up to down - Model Kraft , Model Lumine , Model Galaxy And Model Ryuusei No Rokman ( or Model WarRock )
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/111/newbiometals2nu8.png
RATE PLEASE

[Jace]

Who's Galaxy? Just curious.

[ForteBX.EXE]

Galaxy? o_o Model Galaxy's Biometal shape reminds me of CosmoMan.

[The Walrus]

Yeah, same for me

[Kairos]

Ditto. Is it Cosmoman?

[SpeedReemix]

yeah , cosmoman but model galaxy is better for me . And rate them .
Edit - Sorry For Ryuusei's livemetal ,I tried make wolf head .
ForteBX - 9/10 for axl and terra , 7/10 for bass . Make it more like bass.And 8/10 for all .

[Kairos]

Kraft-Kinda looks like a bush with a mask,but,thats what I would expect-9/10.
Lumine-Looks NOTHING like a model Lumine biometal,I'd actually think it's a pink rabbit.-4/10,
Cosmoman-Best outta the bunch-10/10.
Warrock-No,just,no,It lloks like a depicated dog head,with a lase coming out of his mouth,2/10.

[turpinator]

I redited my MysteryMan MMBN (hopefully >.<) styled sprite, added more shading, retouched the coulors, and reshaped his body a bit. What do you think? Better? Worse? Was the colours/names concepts cool (no I do not try to be a phychotic nut, bent on getting my questions answered. It's just implied :g-ninja:)?

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/MysteryManRedited.png


Sometimes I dislike being completely missed and skipped over, I don't feel the love.:g-winky: This, however, is not one of those times.

[SpeedReemix]

Kraft-Kinda looks like a bush with a mask,but,thats what I would expect-9/10.
Lumine-Looks NOTHING like a model Lumine biometal,I'd actually think it's a pink rabbit.-4/10,
Cosmoman-Best outta the bunch-10/10.
Warrock-No,just,no,It lloks like a depicated dog head,with a lase coming out of his mouth,2/10.
HEy , they are fully sratch sprites , you cant give negative or low point . Did you saw rating rules post of ACE_spark . I'm not too good at biometals.

[Kairos]

Yes,I did,I read Ace rating sheet. An I'm following it,I gavve C+C on what to fix. Ok. Nothing was negative,and I can give low ratings

Now,you etiher A.Take the critasim,and stop being a whiney bitch,and fix the sprites or B.Belive what ever you want,and leave your sprites as is. Ok,I'm not gonna lie,and give good ratings to bad sprites.

[tuckur21]

First time scratching a entire sprite. I know Jace is gonna like it. And don't comment on his hair I'm still working on it.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/tuckur21-T/Bleach.png

[turpinator]

I like it, but there's something wrong about the hair, I can't quite put my finger on it though......

[tuckur21]

Thats exactly why I said don't comment on the hair because I didn't finish it yet and I wanted to see how the body was first.

[Guardman.EXE]

the body's cool...I don't know if I should comment the rest since you hid the sprite...Are you hiding it from Jace or something?

[turpinator]

:g-drop: I'm really sorry, I missed that. Ok! Uh, other than the hair (please don't kill me ^_^; ) the hands could use just a little teensy weensy touch up.

Edit: Is someone gonna notice my posts?

[tuckur21]

Its a surprise. You can comment on it just don't say his/her name.
Edit:Ya I think I'm gonna change them they look too much like claws.

[Guardman.EXE]

Oh! It's that guy! I've only seen a couple eps of that so I didn't realize who it was...(probably the hair)

[tuckur21]

God damn it!
And don't comment on his hair I'm still working on it.
Can any of you fucking read?!

[turpinator]

I did say I was sorry -_-;

[tuckur21]

No not you Guardman.

[turpinator]

Ok, ok. Anyways, what do you think of mine?

[tuckur21]

Ok I'll rate yours.
It doesn't really look like a BN it should look more like these.
http://www.sprites-inc.co.uk/files/EXE/Megaman/MM_EXE4+_overw.gif
http://www.sprites-inc.co.uk/files/EXE/Megaman/MM_EXE4_b_reg.png

[turpinator]

I'm not debating what you said, but what about it makes it NOT look like an MMBN sprite? If all it is is because he has spaces between his appendages, well it wasn't made to look like mega, also I've seen other char sprites with a free-er stance, such as Gyroman and Magnetman. If it's just about the shadow underneath, I'm not at that step yet. Again not trying to fight, just raising valid points.

[tuckur21]

No its the fact that hes facing towards the screen and not the other angle. And if that is an OW than in battle it would be twice as tall as mega.

[NetSaver.exe]

Tuckur he can have it towards the screen. He could be making full overworlds of his character. I give him a 9/10. Just add the shadow.

[Valkus]

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/3088/harleexenh7.png

Harle exe. improved used a different head. guess who it is. lol Anyway tell me if i need to edit/add anything.

[tuckur21]

Not as an In-battle sprite because thats the style and as an overworld it is huge.
@Valkus- You obviously used Roll as a base so thats not good and the hat looks too big. 7/10

[NetSaver.exe]

He will just have to make the In-Battle sprite huge. No big deal.

[tuckur21]

Ya but if its huge its going to look out of place especially because hes like one and a half megas.
Edit:First time scratching a entire sprite. I know Jace is gonna like it. And don't comment on his hair I'm still working on it.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/tuckur21-T/Bleach.png
Rating bump.

[Valkus]

How can i make is so that it will be more distingised? In Chrono cross Harle stands not floats so i guess i should make her stand...

[Jace]

You could also add a little more designs. And just outa curriosity, you do know why her names Harle right?

[tuckur21]

Female clown I watched enough Batman TAS to know that but I still think that it is too big.

[Jace]

Yea, I was just saying cause alot of people don't know what a Harlequinn is. (at least the people that I know don't)

[tuckur21]

Ya not many people I know know that either. So anyone else wanna rate my sprite?

[Valkus]

Yeah, i'll just make her stand and then make her back things(Some sort of wierd costume thing for CC) and then do any other type of stuff.

[turpinator]

Ok, I see your size point, I'll see what I can do about it. I agree that he's got a bad size proportion when standing beside mega. It's kinda hard to see it when just looking at it normally. ^_^; Sorry for being so defensive.

[NetSaver.exe]

Could someone rate this ZX character, please?
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/958/jackservekn5.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Guardman.EXE]

The head is just missing something...and you should probably edit the body a little so it doesn't look as much like roll.

[tuckur21]

Can someone else rate my sprite?

[NetSaver.exe]

First rate mine Tucker.

[tuckur21]

Its good just edit the pants a tiny bit more to look less like Vents. 9/10

[NetSaver.exe]

Okay on yours tat is pretty good for a scratch. I like it. 10/10.

[tuckur21]

Thanks I just need to add the hair now.

[NetSaver.exe]

I edited the pants. Don't mind the Zero sprite.
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/9512/jackserveuy1.png (http://imageshack.us)

[tuckur21]

Ya that looks better. 10/10
And I added hair I don't think its that good but whatever.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/tuckur21-T/Bleach-1.png

[NetSaver.exe]

It looks like a mohawk. Bad mohawk.

[tuckur21]

Ya I'm gonna edit the hands and think of a new way to do the hair.

[turpinator]

LMAO! Ok, I hope this is my final redit (I'm sure it's not though ;D), but I think I fixed the size issue, and I also finally added the shadow. What do you think?

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/MysteryManRedited-1.png

[Valkus]

I think it's good, but yeah it looks like a mohawk.

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/7396/harleexestandcg1.png

There. She wears transparent light blue silk jeans in Chrono cross. She's taller then any other navi(Except like....some other tall navi...) I might make her shorter. i'll fix the hat later.

[tuckur21]

Well I edited the hands the one on the left is the new one.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/tuckur21-T/Bleach-2.png

[turpinator]

Do you mind if I take a stab at it? What do you think of this?

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/Bleach.png

[Valkus]

Do you mind if I take a stab at it? What do you think of this?

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/Bleach.png

Hm..it doesn't really look any better. I think it actually look like he's goin bald. i give it a 7/10

[Guardman.EXE]

The hands are too bright and take too much attention from the rest of the sprite. You should have the sleeves covering more of them...

[turpinator]

Guardman.exe, have you even seen Bleach before? That's the way his clothes are in the series.

Edit: Uh, nevermind. I think someone's been slipping me my stupid pills again today. ;>.>

[NetSaver.exe]

Could someone rate my ZX character with his model M(Mega)
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/4395/jackservegc3.png (http://imageshack.us)

[turpinator]

Looks good to me, except you should keep the fingers blue, too.

[Valkus]

Could someone rate my ZX character with his model M(Mega)
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/4395/jackservegc3.png (http://imageshack.us)
I like it but you could probally make the hair black because none of Aile or vents hair color changes when its in model. But the Reploids didn't have hair except zero. Meh

9/10

[NetSaver.exe]

The hair is black and there are reploids in ZX with hair.

[Kairos]

Mind of I use that Helmet NS?

[NetSaver.exe]

Nope I don't mind.

[Kairos]

Thanks,oh and by the way,10/10 for the sprite.

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/9064/rocketandmodeljunoap2.png (http://imageshack.us)


Model J(uno) and A no-named user,anyone got any ideas.

Cred goes to NEtsaver.exe for the helmet.

[The Walrus]

8/10- The no-named guy's face looks really weird. Ryouga?

[Boja]

Thanks,oh and by the way,10/10 for the sprite.

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/9064/rocketandmodeljunoap2.png (http://imageshack.us)


Model J(uno) and A no-named user,anyone got any ideas.

Cred goes to NEtsaver.exe for the helmet.
His face looks flat, as for a nmae...Alaric? Zelig?

[Valkus]

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/6607/harleexestandva6.png

Modified the hat.

[DrHogan]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v200/Kojitsuke/drock2.gif

Fixed some stuff Oakes pointed out. C+C?

Scratch, btw

[TarkarisZX]

Here is Aile in Ox form on the ground. Rate away.:)

[NetSaver.exe]

That looks good Tark. 10/10.

[DrHogan]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v200/Kojitsuke/drock2.gif

Fixed some stuff Oakes pointed out. C+C?

Scratch, btw

I don't understand why everyone is ignoring me. Just telling me it's "ok" or "a pile of shit" would be nice. Anyways, made him in RPG style.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v200/Kojitsuke/drock_rpg.gif

[ike202`]

2157 100 percent scratch Dr.Light sprite's.

[megajosh2]

Since when did Dr. Light warp? Nevertheless, cool!

[turpinator]

LMAO! Ok, I hope this is my final redit (I'm sure it's not though ;D), but I think I fixed the size issue, and I also finally added the shadow. What do you think?

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/MysteryManRedited-1.png

I hear ya DrHogan! Nobody's listening to me either, it must be because we're only regulars/newbies and we're not worth their precious little time. BTW I think your sprites are amazing, what do you think of mine?

[DrHogan]

I hear ya DrHogan! Nobody's listening to me either, it must be because we're only regulars/newbies and we're not worth their precious little time. BTW I think your sprites are amazing, what do you think of mine?

Well, I'm just a hatchling. I barely post at all, and only in this forum.

Anyways, I think that the sprite is fine. But the shading on the torso and head looks flat, along with the neck being either not there or too skinny. And the eyes on the mugshot are wonky, while the ones on the normal sprite look pretty normal.

[Judge Dredd]

DrHogan, your sprites are excellent, even better considering they are totally original, but i would darken the grey shirt colors, and you already know what I think about yours, turnupinator.

[Valkus]

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/6607/harleexestandva6.png

Modified the hat.
Rating bump. She's alittle tall.

[AndromedaMan]

The legs are strange, and you obviosly took them from Medi and ShadowMan, try to change them a bit.

[turpinator]

Well after a long and hard 4th reditting job and upgrade, I can finally show the almost finalized overhead sprite, finished mugshot, and base battle image (I'm almost positive I'll need touch-ups for it here and there........ maybe :g-winky:)!!!! What do you guys think?

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/MysteryManRedited-2.png

[RyuReiatsu]

Here is Aile in Ox form on the ground. Rate away.:)
Just too great? 10/10


Well after a long and hard 4th reditting job and upgrade, I can finally show the almost finalized overhead sprite, finished mugshot, and base battle image (I'm almost positive I'll need touch-ups for it here and there........ maybe :g-winky:)!!!! What do you guys think?

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/MysteryManRedited-2.png

Not bad, 7.5/10.
He looks a bit like Ultraman lol.

[turpinator]

Yeah but this ultraman's been pumping some serious iron!!!!!! ;D

[Kairos]

Thanks,oh and by the way,10/10 for the sprite.

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/9064/rocketandmodeljunoap2.png (http://imageshack.us)


Model J(uno) and A no-named user,anyone got any ideas.

Cred goes to NEtsaver.exe for the helmet.


Rating bump. And,I got a name!

[turpinator]

Oh, oops forgot to rate! I'll rate yours if you rate mine? 8/10 I think it looks really cool, but I have to agree with everyone else that there's something wrong with the face. What I won't agree on is that it's too thin. I think the type of eyes you're using are affecting the face more than people think, try changing it up and show it to me to see if that isn't the problem.

[Kairos]

Well,I'm not good with OW and mugs I'll just rate in-battle,is that ok?

Anyways,8/10 It's aliitle pillow shaded,but you'd have to zoom in tos ee that.And other than thatit's pretty good.

[SpeedReemix]

I made a new boss for mmz/mmzx fangames ( but I'm planned to make it for mmz 5 fangame , not my game ) . Here referance picture -
http://www.atomic-fire.com/gallery/albums/zero/concept/normal_bossconcept-electricjellyfish.jpg
NOTE - This is different from original picture .
Sprites - Her name is Jella Electram ,original name is electricty jellyfish . But Bosses have different names -
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/7607/electricyjellfishyt0.png
RATE PLEASE and which mugshot is good ?

[Kairos]

It's really a frakenstien,with a lot of recongazible parts, and the mug,is really a reclor,so I'd chose the second one, als,thet thing on her head,is unshaded,fix that. ANd make the parts,unrecongniazablr,if possible. 6/10.

I don't understand why everyone is ignoring me. Just telling me it's "ok" or "a pile of shit" would be nice. Anyways, made him in RPG style.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v200/Kojitsuke/drock_rpg.gif

There both pretty good,nothing *I* can see wrong,10/10.for both.

[The Walrus]

8/10- Make the mugshot more unique as the base is recognizeable
The blue section of the head looks odd on the sprites, give it better shading and make it fit onto the sprite better

@Rags- What'ja decide to name 'im?

[Kairos]

Ryouga,why?

[The Walrus]

Just curious as to what name you chose

[Kairos]

Ok,cool. Also,IExpect a new model in about 20.min.

[DrHogan]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v200/Kojitsuke/wrestler_mmbn.gif
Ok, I made a Megaman-styled sprite this time. Ratings/C+C/whatever plz~

And anyone who can guess who it is rocks.

[Kairos]

It's pretty good,It may be me,but the shoulders look kinda stiff. 9.9/10.

[TarkarisZX]

Heres some Aile Ox poses AND a Mug. C+C.
EDIT: Ratings anyone? It would be nice to know.

[tuckur21]

Those look really good. 10/10

Edit:

I know I posted this before but I fixed some shading and want to know if anyone has any ideas how to make the hair because ever time I try it doesn't come out right.

http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/tuckur21-T/Bleach.png
C+C would be greatly appreciated.

[TarkarisZX]

Those look really good. 10/10
THANKS! P.S. you double posted.:eek:

[NetSaver.exe]

I have some more models for my character Jack. Please rate.
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/6572/jackmodelsuu1.png (http://imageshack.us)

[tuckur21]

THANKS! P.S. you double posted.:eek:
Aren't I allowed to if I'm postinga new sprite?
And nice job NS 8/10. Because the shading is weird on their legs.

[turpinator]

Aren't you lucky today, I tried to do it a second time and I think I got it this time! Tell me what you think of my modifications. I hope I didn't go too far.

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/Bleach.png

[Rainbow Dash]

The left foot (my left) needs to be smaller, as the right foot should be closer to us in that stance. Also, the two parts of the sword don't align.

[ManticoreJim]

Here's my Model Quint. right now its just a model x recolor with a new head. Rate and C+C.

NetSaver- those are good, but something seems....off about them. 9.5/10

[turpinator]

Uh, toxic? He only wanted help with the hair. I think we've already covered the issues regarding the orientation.

Edit: BTW, looks like just a recolor with a zero/model Z helmet right now, but I'm sure you don't plan on keeping it like that, right?

[ManticoreJim]

right, right now it's a model X recolor with spliced on Zero horns. I made some with the V-thing but they don't look right. I'm still trying thought.

edit: witch head looks better?

[turpinator]

Lol, funny enough the original does.

[tuckur21]

Aren't you lucky today, I tried to do it a second time and I think I got it this time! Tell me what you think of my modifications. I hope I didn't go too far.

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/Bleach.png
Thanks but that doesn't really look too much like Ichigo's hair. It looks more like these pictures.
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/la/0/0d/250px-Ichigo.jpg
http://www.edu365.com:8801/~jgm2210/web_bleach/imagenes/ichigo.jpg
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/5675/bleachcover011vu.jpg
Edit: I'm gonna try to do the hair again because I have an idea how to.
The left foot (my left) needs to be smaller, as the right foot should be closer to us in that stance. Also, the two parts of the sword don't align.
I don't get what you mean with the foot and I realised the sword thing after I had already posted it so I'm going to fix that.

[ReSpored]

i'm bringing this old sheet back,

i just need the mugshot rated,i'v had the other parts rated alredy

as most know ,i'm bad at mugshots


my infamous noodleman sheet ((i do know he has a different name i just like noodleman better))

[turpinator]

tuckur21, if you've been paying ANY attention, you would already know I a.) know what his hair looks like, b.) I actually watch Bleach , and c.) I didn't just change the hair, I changed the hands, sleeves, and belt/waistband. No I'm not angry, I just talk this way to get a point across. Also if you looked at your previous attempts, I'm sure you could say the hair is at least a slight improvement.

Edit: @ReSpored: Woops forgot you! ^_^; The pic looks off. Hey! I got an idea! Wouldn't it be ok if you just grabbed a square of that picture you got as a mugshot?

[ReSpored]

i tryed the before it didn't work outto many color to be a bn mugshot and i tryed to fix it to be bn style and it looked horible

[turpinator]

Oh, that would've been my next option. Darn, I don't have a plan c. Uhhhh, *runs away!*

[NetSaver.exe]

Phantom Overworld. Please rate.
http://img417.imageshack.us/img417/5470/phansampleqt8.png (http://imageshack.us)

[ReSpored]

9/10,it looks good

[NetSaver.exe]

Thanks now what about Fefnir Overworld?
Don't rate the first sprite. Rate the second and third.
http://img274.imageshack.us/img274/4204/fefsampleee7.png (http://imageshack.us)

[[fish in space]]

He looks like he's stickin' out his butt, otherwise it's fine. 7/10

[tuckur21]

tuckur21, if you've been paying ANY attention, you would already know I a.) know what his hair looks like, b.) I actually watch Bleach , and c.) I didn't just change the hair, I changed the hands, sleeves, and belt/waistband. No I'm not angry, I just talk this way to get a point across. Also if you looked at your previous attempts, I'm sure you could say the hair is at least a slight improvement.
For the hair I posted the pictures because yours looked like shit. And the hands also look like shit. So pretty much everything you editted looks like shit. And did I ever ask you to do the hair or did you ask me if you could edit my sprite? No you didn't! And yes I know that the hair I did also looked like shit.

[NetSaver.exe]

Which is better the one with the gun slanted of straight on my Fefnir OW?

[[fish in space]]

Gun slanted looks better.

[NetSaver.exe]

Yea that which one I thought you would pick. You can't see how his butt is sticking out.

[[fish in space]]

Actually, I didn't notice that it covered it up, I just thought it looked better but it does cover it up making it all the better. For that particular one, 8/10!

[Jace]

Do any of you remember my Crimson Knight I made? Well, I remade him. Tell me what you think of this new version. I used KR's Knightman.exe model as a reference for the visor on the helmet. C+C/Rating please.

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/3693/haizuik6.png (http://imageshack.us)

[ManticoreJim]

Jace-That's good, 9.8/10.

[NetSaver.exe]

I got board. I made three PETs. Please rate and tell which one is the best.
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/8757/petsto3.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Jace]

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/9076/haizuds4.png (http://imageshack.us)

The bottom move is called Crimson Edge. What it does (obviosly) is imbue the sword with fire. The lines where the sword cut will also explode after awhile.

[TarkarisZX]

SWEET!!! That is nice! The sword looks very good, along with everything in general!:g-winky:

[Jace]

Thanks. I've got three more attacks to make after I finish all the slashing poses. The last three attacks are called Wildfire, Blaze Burst, and Grand Cremation. Just a teaser.

[turpinator]

Alright, I finished this a very short time ago and am curious as to what people think of it. I would like to have my new sig evaluated, no it isn't just a cut/paste job, I also modified the BG itself to my own liking. I would like to be judged on: Originallity, use of space, flow, and colour sceme. Thank you.

[NetSaver.exe]

Can someone rate my character with Model Hero, please?
http://img110.imageshack.us/img110/6461/jackandmodelheroni7.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Valkus]

7/10 the humans arms look wierd/not shaded and I can see model hero is goo but is that a mask on his face or somethinG?

[NetSaver.exe]

Yes it is covering most of his face. I will work on his shading.
Edit- I think the shading is fixed.
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/8287/jackandmodelherobp4.png (http://imageshack.us)

[GameSaver]

This is my newly made 100% custom Yellow Devil.EXE sprite. Old on the left, new on the right. C+C

[tuckur21]

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/9076/haizuds4.png (http://imageshack.us)

The bottom move is called Crimson Edge. What it does (obviosly) is imbue the sword with fire. The lines where the sword cut will also explode after awhile.
Nice 9/10 and is that blade coming out of his wrist or is he holding it?

[Jace]

Like I said in my sprite thread. He's holding it. It's just that his hands turned to the left in that sprite. Zoom in on him and you'll see.

[TwIzTeR_91]

This is my newly made 100% custom Yellow Devil.EXE sprite. Old on the left, new on the right. C+C

Legs could use some work, and use a different pallette. The colors are odd. The legs are shaded very strangely, there seems to be a different light source. Use the old Pallette. It looks pretty good other than that though. I like the new design for the eye, and his structure altogether. You may actually be able to remove his legs, even. The eye looks pretty good, maybe slightly different colors. Be sure to use an official pallette to color it!

EDIT: and on his left hand, his pinky finger is distorted.

Edit2: I want something rated. Actually I don't care if you give me a rating, I just want C+C.

[Jace]

I would but I have no idea what style that's supposed to be in. But it looks good to me.

Now, would someone rate this update to Haizu I made? I put in three of his four, possibly five attacks.

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/439/haizuxb2.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Kairos]

That. Is friggin. AWSOME. 10/10,

[TwIzTeR_91]

If you're going to make it an animation it should have more frames so it flows better, methinks. I dunno how it would look though. It might turn out alright. If it's for a comic, it's very well spritten (Yes, I made that up). My sprite is not supposed to be in any particular style, it's just supposed to look decent.

Those were C+C on the 2 newest attacks. The firey sword thing kicks ass.

[Jace]

On the Blaze Bust attack. Yes, you're right I do need more. But I can't seem to get the flames right. The Wildfire attack should be fine though. All it's supposed to do is make a quick 2-3 second strike. And thanks for the compliments.

[Griega Master]

I made a new sprite because I have not made sprites in a long while
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/Ricardo_The_Man/Kakahi.gif
:g-winky: He's my first sprite in a while:g-neko:

[Valkus]

I made a new sprite because I have not made sprites in a long while
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/Ricardo_The_Man/Kakahi.gif
:g-winky: He's my first sprite in a while:g-neko:
8/10 good base for him, It was kind of hard too tell at first, make the hair mre pointier it looks flat

[turpinator]

Alright, I finished this a very short time ago and am curious as to what people think of it. I would like to have my new sig evaluated, no it isn't just a cut/paste job, I also modified the BG itself to my own liking. I would like to be judged on: Originallity, use of space, flow, and colour sceme. Thank you.

Ratings BUMP!


For the hair I posted the pictures because yours looked like shit. And the hands also look like shit. So pretty much everything you editted looks like shit. And did I ever ask you to do the hair or did you ask me if you could edit my sprite? No you didn't! And yes I know that the hair I did also looked like shit.

Do you mind if I take a stab at it? What do you think of this?

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/Bleach.png

Right..... :g-hmph:

[Jace]

Turp. That doesn't count. You did it AND asked at the same time. You should have asked first and see if he said yes go ahead. But you didn't, you did it anyway.

[turpinator]

But he never said anything afterwards, I only assumed he didn't say anything because he allowed it the first time.

[Jace]

No. He just wasn't online at the time. And you were impatiant.

[GameSaver]

Rating Bump. Newest sprite on the right.

[turpinator]

Jace: What I was TRYING to do was be helpful. Right now from the sounds of it, you guys think I'm a prick who likes to make people mad at me. As a matter of fact it feels like I'm getting alot of that from many of the normal+ users here, I don't get what I'm doing that makes you guys so angry with me, but it sure as hell isn't from me trying to do that.

GameSaver: It looks cool, shading's good. Maybe you could touch up the eye?

[Jace]

No, I just think it's rude to try and help someone when they don't want it. You seem like a nice guy, it's just I found it rude.

[turpinator]

-_-; Fine....., anyways no one found the time to critique my work yet, would you do it?

[Jace]

Sure, you want the sig rated right? Well I'd give it a 5/10. All you reallly did was stick char. in there. The background tends to hurt my eyes. It's just really ugly and eye stinging. If you used the regular bg then the rating would be higher.

[turpinator]

D'oh! Awww, I wanted the BG to look like that, it looked cool. Oh well, too late to change it now. >_<;

[Doogles]

Also- Sprite mixing is always a crime punishable by death.

[turpinator]

Ok, ok. Sheesh, I'll change it. But I'm keeping the original. Hmph! :g-hmph:

[Jace]

We're not telling you to change it. You asked our opinion on it and we gave it to you. That's it.

[Boja]

Yes, and was it nessecary to post 2 omega's in there?

[tuckur21]

For some reason I can't see it.

[turpinator]

Actually, it's not two Omegas it's one omega and one model Ox, and I also specified the guidelines on how you should evaluate it. I already knew the flaws of the picture, but I like it that way. Hence the sig itself in all it's simplicity.

[Jace]

Either way. That's our opinion and we're sticking to it.

[turpinator]

Yup, ditto. :g-Gaga:

[NetSaver.exe]

Ca someone rate the cover for my comic, Zero Network(replacing Battle Network Legends)
http://img383.imageshack.us/img383/8606/coverqn2.png (http://imageshack.us)

[turpinator]

Shweet, looks good, except I think Serpent's hair is purple, is it not?

[Jace]

No, that's the right color.

[NetSaver.exe]

Look at his sprite sheet it is in the ZX rip thread and look at his hair color.

[turpinator]

I double checked, it's purplish pink.

[Jace]

Which is what that is. It's just using a BN color for it.

[turpinator]

True enough I guess. ;P

It just looked alittle brown zoomed out. Anyways I give it a 10/10.

[Blackhook]

Here are two of my Chaos 7 exe Navis. TornadoMan, VolcanoMan
The chaos 7 are Wilys elite navis maked from dates of the strongest navis and viruses of the world
http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l212/blackhook/TornadoManexe.pnghttp://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l212/blackhook/VolcanoManexe.png

[Jace]

3/10. No, just no. Frankensteins with minor recolering. You need to come up with something more creative.

[Boja]

They're just C+P's as far as I can tell.

[Blackhook]

thats just experimental sprites

[tuckur21]

Those are so bad I'm thinking of commiting suicide. But for C+C you need to do more then just C+P and recolor.

[Blackhook]

Those are so bad I'm thinking of commiting suicide. But for C+C you need to do more then just C+P and recolor.
EEH. not funny

[tuckur21]

Not trying to be I was serious.

[Blackhook]

What, to make suicude?

[Jace]

Those are so bad I'm thinking of commiting suicide. But for C+C you need to do more then just C+P and recolor.

Tuck. I think he meant that. Now I don't know about you, but I didn't find that funny either. There have been suicides in my old High/Jr. High School. One of which was supposed to graduate with me. Now please, don't say that again.

[tuckur21]

Sorry about that Jace but they are just that bad.

[Blackhook]

Suicide jokes arenīt funny.Back to thema: those sprites are just to showing demostration how they have to look like when iīm finish them,oh and i have finished my breakerman exe, but i giv in the name breakerman.exe and it wasnīt more a picture:g-hmph:

[tuckur21]

Can you rephrase that in English.

[pyros_rage]

2221If someone could give me some C+C on this Dark Protoman overworld thingy, that would be great, thanks

[GameSaver]

Rating bump. Yellow Devil.EXE. New sprite on right. C+C

[Solarblade]

@previous 2 posters

The first one: Um, I don't play the BN seris, so I really can't tell if it was recolor with edit or not, so =/. Can't rate it. But for not using Paint toolbar colors, i'll give you 6/10. Can't really rate it properly though =/ Sorry.

The second one: Wow. I like that. the eye looks a little funky though... 8/10. The folded arm skin thingy on the closest arm looks pretty cool.

Now for my turn:
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c137/Solar13lade/Sprites/ModelSlashMan-2.png
Expanded Model SlashMan sheet =D. Rate them all please. c+c would help tremdously, as the claws are giving me problems...

[pyros_rage]

Well, you rated it with an honest opinoin, and thats what I was looking for. And would someone else try rating it? I always like getting second opinions.
Edit 1: And i like model Slash. Could use a tad more shading on the chest, other then that, looks good. 8/10

[Jace]

Okay. This is my Onyx Knight. Could you all give me some C+C on him? I think he might need to be re-spritten but I want other opinions.

http://img463.imageshack.us/img463/1577/alexandereq4.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Boja]

He's pretty cool, His torso looks weird though.

[Jace]

Yea, I thought so too. I couldn't come up with a good lower torso idea though. Do you think that I should put a belt on him? Maybe that'll make it look better.

[Boja]

Yeah a belt probobley would make him look better, don't make it too big though.

[mega rock.exe]

Rating bump. Yellow Devil.EXE. New sprite on right. C+C
Nice work there. I suggest you fix the eye a bit. I'm also a bit concerned about the arms. Shouldn't it be that the closer arm is lower than the other one? I'm not sure, but the rest looks well done. :)

[Jace]

Okay, does this look better?

http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/8894/alexanderbe2.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Solarblade]

@Jace-I dunno. It looks like he has a tie on O_o... And I really don't see a belt. Its not really visible. Other then that, its pretty good, though he looks some what, fat. Don't know why though.

[Zak]

Okay, does this look better?

http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/8894/alexanderbe2.png (http://imageshack.us)
10/10 I like the coulors...

[Jace]

I don't see how it looks like a tie. The shirt is essentially recolered from Model ZX. And the belt is a dark brown, that might be why you don't see it.

[pyros_rage]

Could I get another Rating on mine?

[turpinator]

For a darkloid version of ProtoMan that is awesome, you even toyed with his hair a little, I think it looks superb: 10/10!

Now onto my HUGE update, a shooting pose of MysteryMan.exe:
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/MysteryManRedited-3.png

And a ZX armor version of MysteryMan complete with a full biometal spritesheet:
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/ModelM.png

I made the biometal for a Serpent base because MysteryMan is supposed to be a fair size bigger than Mega or X in relation, although technically it isn't Serpent who will be wielding it. It'll be another character I will create later, also to be called Pyre as the netop for MysteryMan.exe.

[Jace]

Update. I decided to stick with gauntlets as his weapon. Original poses were done by Worenx. (yes, he gave me permission.)

http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/8122/alexandertm7.png (http://imageshack.us)

[turpinator]

For a darkloid version of ProtoMan that is awesome, you even toyed with his hair a little, I think it looks superb: 10/10!

Now onto my HUGE update, a shooting pose of MysteryMan.exe:
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/MysteryManRedited-3.png

And a ZX armor version of MysteryMan complete with a full biometal spritesheet:
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/ModelM.png

I made the biometal for a Serpent base because MysteryMan is supposed to be a fair size bigger than Mega or X in relation, although technically it isn't Serpent who will be wielding it. It'll be another character I will create later, also to be called Pyre as the netop for MysteryMan.exe.

Glad to see people are paying attention. >_< RATINGS BUMP!!!

Anyways, I just created this sprite right this minute and would also like to have it evaluated. I call him Kraft.exe!!!!
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f368/turpinator/Non-Emblems/Kraft.png

[DragonZero]

I never DID get a rating on these...
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/6386/modelv2im0.png

[Jace]

@Turp- Okay, the mug looks messed up for some reason, but other than that everything on the Navi looks fine. 8/10. Same with the model and Kraft.exe. both 8/10.

@DZ- They look great! 9.5/10. An extra .5 'cause it's a vampire.

Now, how about mine?

[turpinator]

Oooh VampireMan, right? Cool, I can't tell if any of his parts have been reused from other chars or recolored (if there IS any). Good job 10/10. I already said I liked yours (I think), if not I love them, very original. I would work on his earlier shown sword attacks, Ex: The sword itself if you're willing.

Edit: Woops, for these current sprites 10/10.

[Jace]

Wait. Are you talking about the Crimson Knight sheet? I meant I wanted C+C on the new sprites I posted at the top. I'm done with Crimson for now.

Edit: Nevermind, I just noticed your edit.

[GameSaver]

Need some C+C for my Flip-Top.EXE!(Hey, that almost....sorta rhymes!)

[Valkus]

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/7782/highmaxexeoutliness5.png
Highmax ex. outline of his design.

Gamesaver:Make it look less more look like a met

[GameSaver]

Uhhhhhh.....the original Flip-Top looked like a met also.

[Worenx]

Rate this sprite sheet, please. :g-neko:
Model D (http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/5019/modeldot8.png)

And those look great Jace. ^^ Glad to see those poses helped you out. I give them a 10/10, not because the poses were mine, but because I like how they look overall.

[[fish in space]]

Update. I decided to stick with gauntlets as his weapon. Original poses were done by Worenx. (yes, he gave me permission.)

http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/8122/alexandertm7.png (http://imageshack.us) Really good except I think it looks too much like Model Marino. 8/10
-Worenx, do you think I could use those poses?

[The Walrus]

@Worenx- 10/10

@DZ- 10/10

@Jace- 10/10

They all look great

[pyros_rage]

Ok, here is something that I was tampering with, I call it, Wild Heart Armor2235

Then I tryed to make a soul where Megaman fuzes with Darkloid Protoman2236, C+C on both please, thanks.

[[fish in space]]

Try to make Wildheart look less like Zero.

[NetSaver.exe]

It is armor Tuna. It is suposed to look a little like Zero.

[pyros_rage]

Um...it is an armor for Zero, since he has none, I made one
Edit: How is it tuna??

[[fish in space]]

Oh, if it's an armour for Zero then it was great, now it's even better!

[pyros_rage]

Ok, nevermind about the edit, I thought you were calling it the Tuna Armor, O read it wrong, sorry about that, anyways. What about the DPS?

[[fish in space]]

Yeah, it's good. I don't know much about Darkloid Proto though so, meh 7/10.

[pyros_rage]

Hey...just for laughs, should I try to make a Soul that looks like Mega Fuzed with me???? not a cross fusion, but make it like I was a net navi

[[fish in space]]

So Worenx, could you answer my question?

[Jace]

Another update on Alexander. The two stone magic attacks are pretty ordinary. The first, Assaikobushi(Crushing Fist), enhances Alex's already tremendous strength 3 fold. And the other, Ishiyari(Stone Spear), creates two upheavels of stone on either side of him. Now I just need at least one more attack idea and I can go onto the next knight.

http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/1276/alexandernn3.png (http://imageshack.us)

[tuckur21]

I got an idea for an attack. He can punch the ground on an angle and send rocks flying at the enemy. (Damn I've been playing way too much Bleach DS)

[Jace]

That's what the punching the ground attack was gonna be but I couldn't get the actual attack sprites right so I just went with the spear thing.

[Worenx]

Right, sorry Tuna! :g-drop: Yeah, you can go right ahead and use the poses.

Jace: The new poses look great. Again, perfect 10. Also, how about creating a large sword out of stones as another attack?

[Zero20XD6]

Presenting Forte Axl mode.
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/bass.png

[Kairos]

Get craking on theat sheet. 10/10.

[tuckur21]

@Jace: Ok I was playing as Ichigo in Bleach DS and I just used that attack.

[Zero20XD6]

Huzzah I finished the teleporting.
2238

[tuckur21]

10/10 Another good sprite.