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SpeedReemix
25-09-06, 16:06
Updated - Model (O)mega Added ( Its recolor but Its mine , I can do everything )
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/7585/newformmodelshv3.png
RATE PLEASE

megajosh2
25-09-06, 16:12
Well, Model O is okay too. I mean, it is still scratch parts.

SpeedReemix
25-09-06, 16:21
MegaJosh2 - Thnx and I'll make full sheet

leafgreenmegaman583
25-09-06, 16:37
My new sprites Model O2 and Model 03 ( Omega Form 2 and 3 ) fully scratch parts .
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/9770/newformmodelsls5.png

:g-ninja: I Give You 10/10:g-ninja:

SpeedReemix
25-09-06, 17:29
Model Omega - I made better head .
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/4836/modelofullsheetem5.png
Animation -
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/9959/modelomegashlashfs1.gif
RATE PLEASE

leafgreenmegaman583
25-09-06, 17:44
:g-O_o: Nice 10/10:g-ninja:

SpeedReemix
25-09-06, 17:55
I forgot the red scratch's on body . I fixed it rate again please.
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/3025/modelofullsheetma2.png

leafgreenmegaman583
25-09-06, 18:05
I forgot the red scratch's on body . I fixed it rate again please.
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/3025/modelofullsheetma2.png
:g-Rolleyes: 10/10:g-ninja:

SpeedReemix
25-09-06, 18:36
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/9025/modelofullsheetdr3.png
RATE PLEASE

The Walrus
25-09-06, 18:41
10/10- Awesome. When you complete it could i use it in GB?

Jace
25-09-06, 18:55
My Model M2. Rate please. Oh and if you don't know who it is you should be shot.
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/5830/modelm2aw3.png (http://imageshack.us)

The Walrus
25-09-06, 18:56
Can't see it

Edit- never mind, i can see it now. 10/10

SpeedReemix
25-09-06, 18:57
10/10- Awesome. When you complete it could i use it in GB?
I need few days . And the guardian betreyal is gba fangame ,right ?
Did you used my boss ?

The Walrus
25-09-06, 18:59
Off-topic- Gb is the comic, GB PT1 is the game. Yes i'm going to use the boss you made. I'm still working on the engine to fine tune it though

On-Topic- @Jace: are you gonna sheet that?

Jace
25-09-06, 19:01
Yes, but it's only gonna be a comic sheet, oh and try and guess who the human counterpart is, I'll give you a hint, think of KR's comic.

Kairos
25-09-06, 21:27
I can't see it...

Jace
25-09-06, 21:29
I think it might be your browser, cause I can see it just fine.

Kairos
25-09-06, 21:32
Nope,still can't see it...it is my server.. I even tryied copying the image tags into my post,still wouldn't work,

EDIt-After numerous refreshes,I got it to work,yay.

Anyways,nice,10/10,

Doogles
25-09-06, 21:42
Yes, but it's only gonna be a comic sheet, oh and try and guess who the human counterpart is, I'll give you a hint, think of KR's comic.
Your making it for my comic? I don't even know who it's for. :g-drop:

Jace
25-09-06, 21:45
No not yours. I said to guess who "WIELDS" it. And the hint was to LOOK at your comic, not that it is for your comic.

Doogles
25-09-06, 21:56
Oh, okay.

is it Trav?

Jace
25-09-06, 22:02
No, it's not for any of your char. Here's another hint, Fireman, Shadowman, Colonel.

Doogles
25-09-06, 22:03
Oh, it's Lan, isn't it?

Jace
25-09-06, 22:04
There you go. Give the boy a PRIZE!

Hzer0
25-09-06, 22:51
and those ???:

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7638/efectosyr1.png

SpeedReemix
26-09-06, 20:19
My new sprites - Exe to Classic Styled Blastman
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/167/blastmanclassicexeuq8.png
Fully scratch ,rate please

The Walrus
26-09-06, 20:24
9/10- the arms look kinda strange

Zero20XD6
26-09-06, 20:33
The hands are really screwed up 7/10

leafgreenmegaman583
26-09-06, 20:39
:g-ninja: It Is Good 8/10:g-ninja:

Zero20XD6
26-09-06, 20:54
Beam teleport
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/beamT.png
rating bump and I made a beam mug
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/beamm.png
Edit: why does itseem I kill threads.

tuckur21
27-09-06, 01:14
Well I finished Kakashi Hope you like it.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/tuckur21-T/KakashiSensei-1.png
Rating bump x4 I feel so ignored.:g-sad:

DragonZero
27-09-06, 03:02
His hair looks pretty weird: it's just coming out one side. Fix that up and it'll be a lot better.

Since no one was doing my request, I decided to make my own MMBN4-6 OW Zero (MMZ Form) Sprites.
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/4605/zerommzowpj4.png
Rate away.

NetSaver.exe
27-09-06, 03:07
Tucker you could work on the face a little bit 8/10.
DZ it looks like the MMZ Zero just like you planned. Nice try at it. 8/10.

GameSaver
27-09-06, 04:53
Here is my first scratch sprite and my first sprite posibly made!(that is not a recolor)Megaman is there for size perportions.

Jace
27-09-06, 05:07
1. It's spelled "Proportion". 2. Not bad for a first scratch, I'd blend the eye in more around the edges, 'cause it looks jagged.

Shinobu
27-09-06, 05:35
With this, I give one sprite for a rating, I'm working on a sheet right now. It's Shinobu from Love Hina.
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a273/Shinobu1286/ShinobuM.gif
Can I please get a rating for this, I have been waiting for quite awhile and got nothing. I'd like some C+C before I start working on the sheet.

Zero20XD6
27-09-06, 12:55
rating bump and I made a beam mug
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/beamm.png
Edit: why does itseem I kill threads.
Rating Bump and sword slashing
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/beamslash.png

The Walrus
27-09-06, 19:02
His hair looks pretty weird: it's just coming out one side. Fix that up and it'll be a lot better.

Since no one was doing my request, I decided to make my own MMBN4-6 OW Zero (MMZ Form) Sprites.
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/4605/zerommzowpj4.png
Rate away.

9/10- that looks could though the points on the head are a little too long. BTW: i said i would have done it after i finished the request i was doing for reemix

sovietcommando
27-09-06, 21:58
1704

Hm, I wonder who these could be... :g-Gaga:

Just trying somethng out, nothing "really" special. :p

Kairos
27-09-06, 23:12
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/2358/ferhanandmodelslashmanqm1.png (http://imageshack.us)

Phakchi Fahran (as she will be called) And model S.

Also,S.C.,enough sarcasm,we know you by now,10/10.

NetSaver.exe
27-09-06, 23:15
Woah I like Model S and Ms. Fahran. 10/10.
S.C. are those the human forms of them? Does Fernir have one? Well anyway, 10/10.
Zero those Beam sprites are looking good. 10/10.

Kairos
27-09-06, 23:33
Well,Phakchi is not the only one I'm workig on. I got 3 more. Plus my navi.

NetSaver.exe
27-09-06, 23:37
who are the other ones. I can't wait to see them.

Zero20XD6
28-09-06, 00:22
Beam's shield
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/beamsheild.png

NetSaver.exe
28-09-06, 00:34
Woah Beam is awesome nice shield. 10/10

Zero20XD6
28-09-06, 00:52
Beam's a futuristic knight.

NetSaver.exe
28-09-06, 00:54
Wow so why does he have boxing gloves. Kinghts don't have boxing gloves.

Zero20XD6
28-09-06, 00:56
There gauntlets and they look cool.

NetSaver.exe
28-09-06, 00:57
Oh well now I get it. He is still cool.

Zero20XD6
28-09-06, 01:06
Beam Laser and Arrow
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/beamlaser.png
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/beamarrow.png

NetSaver.exe
28-09-06, 01:15
Once again 10/10.

Zero20XD6
28-09-06, 01:18
I'm out of attack ideas so here's an overworld
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/BeamOW.png

Lord Wraith
28-09-06, 01:23
What are you making Beam for?
and the OW is awesome 9/10

NetSaver.exe
28-09-06, 01:24
He looks so cute. 10/10
He is submitting him to my comic since barely anyone cameod.

Zero20XD6
28-09-06, 01:25
As netsaver said for his comic because no one cameo'd and I never really made my own navi.

RyuReiatsu
28-09-06, 01:29
Model Forte (I hope it's at least better than SpeedReemix's..)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v664/Lil_azn_Boii/ModelForte.png

@GameSaver: I see in your jelly devil that you made it's shape with the round tool... Shoulda edit it a lil bit so It would fit better.
@Rags: Awsome Model S!
@Zero: Really nice sprites x]

Lord Wraith
28-09-06, 01:41
I see

I give Model Forte a 8.5/10

Zero20XD6
28-09-06, 01:43
The gem should be light blue 8/10

NetSaver.exe
28-09-06, 01:44
I can't even see the gem. 7/10

RyuReiatsu
28-09-06, 01:47
The gem should be light blue 8/10

Actually I wanted it to be changed a lil bit but o well...

@NetSaver: That's because you don't have a bright screen

megajosh2
28-09-06, 01:47
Same here. 7/10.

Zero20XD6
28-09-06, 01:48
Damn I was outposted badly.

RyuReiatsu
28-09-06, 01:53
How does it look now >_>?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v664/Lil_azn_Boii/ModelForte-1.png

Jace
28-09-06, 02:01
MUCH better Azn. Now can someone rate these? The Models should be obvious.
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/5458/modelfhlpfp9.png (http://imageshack.us)

Edit: And yes, I already know I need to fix P's Legs.

NetSaver.exe
28-09-06, 02:06
Model Leviathan's right leg is too thin. 8/10

RyuReiatsu
28-09-06, 02:16
Model Phantom's eye is kinda completely BLACK so.. ya know...8.5/1o

(btw with that recolor of the crystal... does it look any better?)

Jace
28-09-06, 02:16
Okay, I made Model L's leg bigger and I fixed Model P's legs.
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/2180/modelfhlpuq0.png (http://imageshack.us)
Better? Oh, and P's eye is almost all black cause that's how it is on Phantom. I tried a lighter eye color but it freaked me out.

megajosh2
28-09-06, 02:19
Supersize scratch!! http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/8170/bigscratchuo3.png

RyuReiatsu
28-09-06, 02:19
Okay, I made Model L's leg bigger and I fixed Model P's legs.
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/2180/modelfhlpuq0.png (http://imageshack.us)
Better? Oh, and P's eye is almost all black cause that's how it is on Phantom. I tried a lighter eye color but it freaked me out.

Oh yeah?
O' well hm.. You're a terribly GREAT spriter ^^ with these things fixed... it's a 8.7/10 (It doesn't even make sense >_> but anyways.)

NetSaver.exe
28-09-06, 02:19
Jace Okay now it is better 9.9/10.

sovietcommando
28-09-06, 02:25
Supersize scratch!! http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/8170/bigscratchuo3.png
Eh... How should I put this...?

The shading needs to be fixed, the eyes are very large as compared to the rest of the head (looks very cartoonish), the face needs shading or the rest of the head should be unshaded to match the face.

Zero20XD6
28-09-06, 02:52
Beam Lightning thing
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/beamL.png

NetSaver.exe
28-09-06, 02:54
Yeah that was what I was talking about. The only problem is with his hands. Other than that. 9/10

SpeedReemix
28-09-06, 19:27
Model Omega O.F. Buster Added ( Omega Fefnir Buster ) -
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/1416/modelofullsheetls8.png
Animation -
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3584/fullchargeshotofmodelomegadc6.gif
RATE PLEASE

megajosh2
28-09-06, 20:45
Eh... How should I put this...?

The shading needs to be fixed, the eyes are very large as compared to the rest of the head (looks very cartoonish), the face needs shading or the rest of the head should be unshaded to match the face.

I was just seein what would happen when I tried. I need to shade it like a sprite...

Jace
28-09-06, 20:46
@SpeedReemix- It's pretty good, but the animation should be a tad slower. 8/10

Zero20XD6
28-09-06, 21:08
Better hands I hope
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/beamL-1.png

Kairos
28-09-06, 21:10
Model Omega O.F. Buster Added ( Omega Fefnir Buster ) -
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/1416/modelofullsheetls8.png
Animation -
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3584/fullchargeshotofmodelomegadc6.gif
RATE PLEASE

I thought I'd never ask you this,but,may I use that?

9/10.

NetSaver.exe
28-09-06, 21:35
Better hands I hope
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/beamL-1.png

Yeah it is better. 10/10

Jace
28-09-06, 21:40
Okay, I call this a Parasprite-Drone. It's my first enemy sprite and it is NOT mechanical. Tell me what you all think.

Zero20XD6
28-09-06, 21:42
Looks good and what are the attacks.

NetSaver.exe
28-09-06, 21:42
That looks good Jace. 9.9/10 If it is not a robot what is it a parasite, a ghost or what.

Jace
28-09-06, 21:51
Disect it's name. Para-Sprite (Para-S ite) And it doesn't really have any attacks. What it does is burrow into the back of someone's neck and slips in, (it's spineless, think of a jellyfish) After it's in, it wraps it's wings around the skull and it's "eye" opens and chews a hole into the skull, after that a long tube like tounge comes out and burrows itself into the brain and begins consumption, While all this is happening it jams it's stinger on it's tail into your spine to control your body. All this does not kill the host it just shuts down the body like it's sleeping but a PAINFULL sleep. When it leaves the body it just pops out the back and your pretty much dead then.

Any questions?

NetSaver.exe
28-09-06, 21:54
That is a cool para-sprite. It's attack is awesome. I do not have any questions

Jace
28-09-06, 21:55
And think of it this way, this is just a DRONE, there is a whole HIVE of ParaSprites.

Zero20XD6
28-09-06, 21:55
Yes I do wouldn't the host die of pain?

Jace
28-09-06, 21:58
Not quite, I forgot to mention that it produces a saliva from the mouth that keeps the victim alive. Besides, it's just immense pain it's not really life threatening injuries. Untill it explodes from the back at least.

Zero20XD6
28-09-06, 22:01
Oh ok and hooray for pain.

Jace
28-09-06, 22:02
Wait till you see the rest of the hive though, They are living DEATH machines.

Kairos
28-09-06, 22:27
9/10 for the sprite,15/10 for the pain.

Zak
28-09-06, 22:30
MUCH better Azn. Now can someone rate these? The Models should be obvious.
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/5458/modelfhlpfp9.png (http://imageshack.us)

Edit: And yes, I already know I need to fix P's Legs.
kick ass dude, 9/10

Jace
28-09-06, 22:30
@Rags-Thanks, I came up with the idea during summer school a few years ago and NEVER forgot it.

@PKitty- Those are my older versions, I fixed them up already, check back a page.

DragonZero
29-09-06, 00:05
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/454/zerommzow3hg3.png
Ok. I did a bit of work on the horns. Any better? I just want it to look its best for Triad.

Zak
29-09-06, 00:08
Okay, I made Model L's leg bigger and I fixed Model P's legs.
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/2180/modelfhlpuq0.png (http://imageshack.us)
Better? Oh, and P's eye is almost all black cause that's how it is on Phantom. I tried a lighter eye color but it freaked me out.
fix the littel dealy on the green dude (can't rember name.) helm that wing thing

NetSaver.exe
29-09-06, 00:11
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/454/zerommzow3hg3.png
Ok. I did a bit of work on the horns. Any better? I just want it to look its best for Triad.
It looks better. 9/10

DragonZero
29-09-06, 00:13
AND, that's one fan's opinion! Do ya think it's good enough to be in a comic?

NetSaver.exe
29-09-06, 00:14
Just make the hair on the front pose more visible and that should do it.

Jace
29-09-06, 00:15
fix the littel dealy on the green dude (can't rember name.) helm that wing thing

Why? What's wrong with it? It looks fine to me.

DragonZero
29-09-06, 00:16
I think Harpuia's head wings are normally longer than that.

Jace
29-09-06, 00:19
Yes, but it's a model. It's not supposed to look exactly like them. I shortened them on purpose.

DragonZero
29-09-06, 00:21
Oh. 'Kay. How's Zero?

Jace
29-09-06, 00:22
Didn't want to make a model Z 'cause Giro already had one.

NetSaver.exe
29-09-06, 00:23
Jace who's models are those.

DragonZero
29-09-06, 00:23
Didn't want to make a model Z 'cause Giro already had one.
No, I meant my Zero overworlds.

Jace
29-09-06, 00:26
@DZ-Oh, oops. I mis understood.

@NetSaver- No one's really, I made them for the hell of it, You can use them if you want, just give credit.

EDIT: This is Arthur Haizu, the main char. in my untitled story,(go to the writing section to read it.) as well as my new comic. (see below) C+C please.
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/8652/shatteredknighthaizudx9.png (http://imageshack.us)

HZ
29-09-06, 00:34
Giro and his navi zero ( :) )
Now for the cross fusion. (It will look like model z)
EDIT:oops forgot to uploas

DragonZero
29-09-06, 00:37
RATE MY SPRITES!!!
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/454/zerommzow3hg3.png
Woah. Sorry, had a spaz attack for a sec there.:g-drop:

HZ
29-09-06, 00:41
good 9/10
oh and credit to you for the O.W. head

NetSaver.exe
29-09-06, 00:42
Just make the hair on the front pose more visible and that should do it.
And then it will look great.

DragonZero
29-09-06, 00:43
Alright, two 9/10s is comic quality, right?

Jace
29-09-06, 00:45
@HZ- You need to fix up the OW Giro, it looks like Lan dyed his hair and grew it out, and finnaly changed his clothes.

Edit: Yes DZ, it is. 9/10

NetSaver.exe
29-09-06, 00:45
DZ,Just make the hair on the front pose look visible.

RyuReiatsu
29-09-06, 00:49
@Hunter Zero: As I Said... REMAKE THE DAMN Giro SPRITE! Don't freaking use Netto's head without even editing it! DON'T Add Blues' Hairs! Make THEM! Delete that sprite... & that zero... It looks ugly.
Remake them & make them look more custom or else I'll just keep bitching at you!

Model Omega O.F. Buster Added ( Omega Fefnir Buster ) -
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/1416/modelofullsheetls8.png
Animation -
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3584/fullchargeshotofmodelomegadc6.gif
RATE PLEASE

Howly I didn't notice it..

The sprite is not bad... the "hairs" are horrible though...
the "waves" need shading cause it's horrible too..

And well.... TRY TO COLOR It's LEGS AND ARMS!
You never did... And it's making it look ugly...

But what ever, good work.

Jace
29-09-06, 00:56
This is Arthur Haizu, the main char. in my untitled story,(go to the writing section to read it.) as well as my new comic. (see below) C+C please.
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/8652/shatteredknighthaizudx9.png (http://imageshack.us)

Rate Bump

crimson hammer
29-09-06, 01:14
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/8822/firstfefnirexewc8.png (http://imageshack.us)
here is my try at fefnir exe rating and pwn rating please.

Jace
29-09-06, 01:16
I'll rate your's if you rate mine. It looks REALLY GOOD, the only problem is that I can tell the base (searchman). 9/10.

crimson hammer
29-09-06, 01:24
well his stance yes but the sprite was heavily edited and scratched.

like the dragon gun is scratch
the torso
and part of the legs

I give your character a 8/10

the good thing is it barely shows any resemblence to rock or whatever his name is but there is somewhat problem with his arm, make it more buff

Jace
29-09-06, 01:32
You're thinking of Vent, but as for the arm. It was buff to begin with, but I made it not, 'cause Haizu is supposed to be fast and fierce like fire.

RyuReiatsu
29-09-06, 01:54
use rock as a base... because I think you used searchman enough.

crimson hammer
29-09-06, 02:01
what do you mean I used searchman enough. If you are talking about crimson then I just used searchman for reference not as a base. and why rock then fefnir would be short and he is not.

Zero20XD6
29-09-06, 02:10
My first 100 percent scratch sprite chillamn
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/chillman.png

MegaManPrime
29-09-06, 02:11
Earth Man
http://photo.xanga.com/MegaManPrime/ec77d79708024/photo.html

Ember Man (I know it sucks!)
http://photo.xanga.com/MegaManPrime/153ff78022183/photo.html

Water Man (16-Bit)
http://xc3.xanga.com/574a6143c033272720576/b48976250.bmp

Water Man (8-Bit)
http://x14.xanga.com/c07a4a310643268175452/b45784139.bmp

Grass Man (16-Bit JPEG SORRY.[not a weed reference])
http://x2b.xanga.com/7eba2143c243171004424/b47761083.jpg

Grass Man (8-Bit)
http://x2d.xanga.com/377a222215d3749929099/b33529389.bmp

Tell me what ya' think!

megajosh2
29-09-06, 02:24
My first 100 percent scratch sprite chillamn
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/chillman.png

:g-O_o: The arms and head need serious work. By the way, anything light blue on him should be steelblue, and the sunglasses are more like protomans. Hanging off of his helmet.

Zero20XD6
29-09-06, 02:30
I know the head but the arms as in the hands, the whole arm or just the stuff above the hand?

Zak
29-09-06, 03:27
RATE MY SPRITES!!!
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/454/zerommzow3hg3.png
Woah. Sorry, had a spaz attack for a sec there.:g-drop:
10/10 only becuse its the first good ow sprite of zero i have seen:g-winky:

Shinobu
29-09-06, 18:01
With this, I give one sprite for a rating, I'm working on a sheet right now. It's Shinobu from Love Hina.
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a273/Shinobu1286/ShinobuM.gif
Still no rating or C+C.

tuckur21
29-09-06, 20:02
Well i fixed kakashi's hair and now I'm gonna add more detail to it so don't comment about the face unless it is a way to make it look better.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/tuckur21-T/KakashiSensei-2.png
C+C

SpeedReemix
29-09-06, 20:49
Howly I didn't notice it..

The sprite is not bad... the "hairs" are horrible though...
the "waves" need shading cause it's horrible too..

And well.... TRY TO COLOR It's LEGS AND ARMS!
You never did... And it's making it look ugly...

But what ever, good work.

I made waves better -
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/6034/modelofullsheetqx5.png

Jace
29-09-06, 20:54
Still no rating or C+C.

Looks like she's gonna hurl. :g-laugh: I'd give it an 8/10. It would be higher but I don't know what style you're emulating.

MegaManPrime
29-09-06, 22:52
Hey were mine okay. Personally, I think the only one worth a damn was Grass Man, but PLEASE tell me what you think!

crimson hammer
30-09-06, 04:44
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/173/firstfefnirexerv0.png (http://imageshack.us)
ok Ive done his shooting teleporting and a skill but I might change the the fire though and if possible pwn rating.

Doogles
30-09-06, 04:47
That's pretty kickass. The firing pose is a little odd, and the base is kinda obvious, but it's still really cool.

crimson hammer
30-09-06, 04:53
well the fire firing pose was copyed from a show so I cant see how it would be awkward and what rating would you give it

mega rock.exe
30-09-06, 05:51
Something on it just makes it look un-EXE styled. It's hard cross-spriting, so it's a good job. Make the head bigger and keep the fire. It makes him more Fefnir. Don't give him a buster. Or if you want to keep it, make it bigger. The guy is lethal. A pea buster does not suit him.

Nicktendonick
30-09-06, 06:01
SpeedRemix- Ok speed. It looks good. First, is this model Fefnir-Omega or just it's model Omega?

I'm sorry, I hope I don't offend you Speed I don't want to. I love the sprite, especally the hair and the blasts, but........

I don't see fefnir at all in this. If this is model Fefnir-Omega, I don't see fefnir at all. Plus, keeping the legs like the other models is a VERY bad idea. They're that color because of model X. It's been a gripe that I have with your previous sprites. Those legs are like model X's, not fefnir's.

Fefnir has shin guards on his knee caps, gold rings on ankles (but the omega shell doesn't, so I could see why you didn't put that in). The breast plate seems well placed (shorted to fit with fefnir's breast plate) Now, there needs to a gold ring around on his shoulders. The fins on the head I think are a bit too big.

I see almost next to nothing that has fefnir in it minus the busters. In my opinion, it looks like a triple rock on between Models X, Z, and O shell.

I give the sprite a 8/10. It's doesn't look much like model Fefnir-Omega(shell), but it's still a damn good sprite

Jace
30-09-06, 06:11
I believe it's just an Omega Model not Omega Fefnir. He just used Fefnir's busters.

MegaManPrime
30-09-06, 06:16
Really guys, at least look at Grass Man please. I'm very proud of Grass Man, and I wanna' know if I should be.

RyuReiatsu
30-09-06, 06:29
I made waves better -
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/6034/modelofullsheetqx5.png

God...

sovietcommando
30-09-06, 06:49
*Sigh* Something has to be done about these one-word posts...

Anyways, here's some extra poses for Girouette, based off of Official ZX art.
1727

Griega Master
30-09-06, 07:16
It's not a BIG Edit but I made hyper burst like from the anime!
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/Ricardo_The_Man/HyperBurst.gif
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/Ricardo_The_Man/HyperBurstAnimation.gif

SpeedReemix
30-09-06, 07:53
I made waves better -
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/6034/modelofullsheetqx5.png
Sorry But RATEEE THISSSS

sovietcommando
30-09-06, 08:14
I'd say change the buster. A recolored Knuckle Buster isn't very original, expecially since your model is based off of Omega.

SpeedReemix
30-09-06, 08:18
I'd say change the buster. A recolored Knuckle Buster isn't very original, expecially since your model is based off of Omega.
Its based on omega only I mixed f buster and its not model Omega Fefnir .

sovietcommando
30-09-06, 08:26
Its based on omega only I mixed f buster and its not model Omega Fefnir .
I never said it was "model Omega Fefnir"; I know full well that you intended to make a model Omega Zero (Armored Form 1). However the buster is still not fitting for the particular character you're trying the imitate.

SpeedReemix
30-09-06, 14:29
My new models ( model sigma , sigma2 and sigma3 )
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/945/modelsigmasut3.png
RATE PLEASE

NetSaver.exe
30-09-06, 14:32
Those actually look pretty good.9/10

Kairos
30-09-06, 16:09
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/173/firstfefnirexerv0.png (http://imageshack.us)
ok Ive done his shooting teleporting and a skill but I might change the the fire though and if possible pwn rating.

Add 5 to your PWN rating dude.

9/10,for the obvious base.

Mikado
30-09-06, 16:22
My new models ( model sigma , sigma2 and sigma3 )
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/945/modelsigmasut3.png
RATE PLEASE
It's nice, but sigma, even his model, should be a bit bigger, atleast that's wat fits xD
He looks also kinda bored with his eyes, and sigma was also more balt
Futher they are nice, so here is an.....7.8/10

Griega Master
30-09-06, 16:24
It's not a BIG Edit but I made hyper burst like from the anime!
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/Ricardo_The_Man/HyperBurst.gif
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/Ricardo_The_Man/HyperBurstAnimation.gif
sorry that guys rate bump like killed the rating on my sprite.

NetSaver.exe
30-09-06, 17:14
Could someone rate this. It is supposed to show a netbattle or anythinbg that is going on the net. It is also my first scratch.
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/1588/battlesimulatorzb7.png (http://imageshack.us)

Kairos
30-09-06, 17:25
Needs more shading,espically if it's MMBN style,or is it 8-bit?It's pretty goood though.

7/10

NetSaver.exe
30-09-06, 17:26
I just need to add the shading to the box, right.

Mikado
30-09-06, 17:29
It's nothing special.
Shading it would make it a bit better, and making the ball
more colorized would be allot better.
4/10

NetSaver.exe
30-09-06, 17:31
Okay, I will try to work on it even though I am not good at shading. I tried my best to shade the ball.

Mikado
30-09-06, 17:47
Yea but it's grey.
Try to make it more with colors, so that it looks more like...the net

AndromedaMan
30-09-06, 17:50
You could use light green.

NetSaver.exe
30-09-06, 18:05
Okay I changed the colors.
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4904/battlesimulatorrj8.png (http://imageshack.us)

AndromedaMan
30-09-06, 18:14
Well, I would make a grid in the ball, the lines would be light green and the rest would be black

crimson hammer
30-09-06, 18:23
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/156/firstfefnirexeyr5.png (http://imageshack.us)
ok changed his buster and another atack where he summons meteors
coming up probably were he creates that green shock wave

NetSaver.exe
30-09-06, 18:34
Nice Fefnir Crimson Hammer even though you can tell the base it still looks awesome. 9/10, except isn't the gun supposed to open up when it shoots the fire.
Now can someone tell me how my scratch sprites looks now.
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/635/battlesimulatorzs8.png (http://imageshack.us)

crimson hammer
30-09-06, 18:39
the net thing on the ball try to make the lines curve so it looks like a ball instead of a flat circle and try add more shading to the box but over all it is good 8/10

sovietcommando
30-09-06, 18:40
A more unique Rock-on animation?
Frames:
1731

Animation:
1730

[I used Vent and Model X are there for example only, meaning the animation may work with other models.]

Edit: Erg... I just notice a slight discrepancy in the animation (animation shifts slightly one pixel in certain frames). >.<

NetSaver.exe
30-09-06, 18:43
S.C. that looks good.10/10
Crimson what do you mean by curve?

AndromedaMan
30-09-06, 18:44
Nice Fefnir Crimson Hammer even though you can tell the base it still looks awesome. 9/10, except isn't the gun supposed to open up when it shoots the fire.
Now can someone tell me how my scratch sprites looks now.
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/635/battlesimulatorzs8.png (http://imageshack.us)
Can I help you?

SpeedReemix
30-09-06, 19:12
My new sprite - EX-Skill for model zx , triple hero attack .
Not finished some scracth parts and some recolors but its ex-skill we must use c+p parts .
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/1522/extraposesofmodelzxuv8.png
RATE PLEASE
EDIT - Un Finished animation , I need model zx dashing sprite .
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/2593/modelzxtripleheroattackzk5.gif

mega rock.exe
30-09-06, 20:08
Nice Fefnir Crimson Hammer even though you can tell the base it still looks awesome. 9/10, except isn't the gun supposed to open up when it shoots the fire.
Now can someone tell me how my scratch sprites looks now.
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/635/battlesimulatorzs8.png (http://imageshack.us)
The green is an eye killer. The box could use some work. As for the ball, just make the lines curve, or a shine on the upper right. Look at map items to get the idea.
Here is a modified version of the box. Corrected, if you may say so.
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/7167/nbmachineqx3.png

Zero20XD6
30-09-06, 20:19
Beam hurt
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/hurt.png

NetSaver.exe
30-09-06, 20:21
Thanks and here is the latest one for it. Andromedaman made the grid in the circle.
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/8100/bsrh6.png (http://imageshack.us)

Zero20XD6
30-09-06, 20:57
Beam's net-op Adam
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/adamnetop.png

crimson hammer
30-09-06, 21:01
fix his hair

NetSaver.exe
30-09-06, 21:02
fix the hair in his mugshot.

Zero20XD6
30-09-06, 21:02
Fix what about his hair?

NetSaver.exe
30-09-06, 21:06
It looks like it is too short compared to the actual sprite's hair.

crimson hammer
30-09-06, 21:06
the spikes it doesnt look good.

Zero20XD6
30-09-06, 21:09
OH ok I was confused because fix the hair's ver vague.

mega rock.exe
30-09-06, 23:53
Thanks and here is the latest one for it. Andromedaman made the grid in the circle.
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/8100/bsrh6.png (http://imageshack.us)
You know, the box I gave you made more logical sense. At least one side has to be brighter. Look at the Chip Trader.

NetSaver.exe
30-09-06, 23:58
I know, I am using yours. At first I didn't know How the shading worked. Now I know. I am using it for my comic. Except I had to change the colors. I still have the black one though.

Griega Master
01-10-06, 00:37
I finished a full sheet of my hper burst!
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/Ricardo_The_Man/HburstFullSheet.gif
Animation
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/Ricardo_The_Man/HyperBurstAnimaton.gif
I did not know it's size so parts are cut out in the animation

NetSaver.exe
01-10-06, 00:41
That is awesome!10/10.

Demoni
01-10-06, 01:19
The green is an eye killer. The box could use some work. As for the ball, just make the lines curve, or a shine on the upper right. Look at map items to get the idea.
Here is a modified version of the box. Corrected, if you may say so.
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/7167/nbmachineqx3.png

Wow your edit version really looks like Capcom made it.

NetSaver.exe
01-10-06, 01:23
All he did was shade the parts I needed shaded for the one I did.

Zero20XD6
01-10-06, 02:14
Yay I finished my first backround.
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/bg.png

NetSaver.exe
01-10-06, 02:19
9.9/10 What is that for?

Skull Master
01-10-06, 02:20
That looks pritty good 'sept the rocks in the distance look like they have blocks around them.

sovietcommando
01-10-06, 02:21
Very good. However, the stalactites could use some shading. But don't use a simple conical shading. Since it's a naturally occuring object it should have some texture to it.

Zero20XD6
01-10-06, 02:22
Fixed it and it's for Taor's game
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/bg-1.png

Skull Master
01-10-06, 02:23
Much better! :)

Edit: But Sovi's right, stalagtights need more shading.

Zero20XD6
01-10-06, 02:24
OK SC it shall be fixed.
Edit: more like this
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/bg-2.png

RyuReiatsu
01-10-06, 04:02
Holy Cow! Zero that's some great work o.o

Zero20XD6
01-10-06, 04:03
Stage thing's bigger
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/bg-02.png

Nicktendonick
01-10-06, 06:47
Need some help with this character. Can you tell me how I'm doing sofar? Also, this is a female sprite, so, tell me which one works best?

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a369/Nicktendonick/concept%20sprites/tashaconcepts.png

tuckur21
01-10-06, 13:28
Well i fixed kakashi's hair and now I'm gonna add more detail to it so don't comment about the face unless it is a way to make it look better.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/tuckur21-T/KakashiSensei-2.png
C+C
Rating Bump

MegaManPrime
01-10-06, 15:22
Earth Man (I might edit the hair later)
http://photo.xanga.com/MegaManPrime/ec77d79708024/photo.html

Ember Man (I know it sucks!)
http://photo.xanga.com/MegaManPrime/153ff78022183/photo.html

Water Man (16-Bit [I plan on editing the cords later])
http://xc3.xanga.com/574a6143c033272720576/b48976250.bmp

Water Man (8-Bit)
http://x14.xanga.com/c07a4a310643268175452/b45784139.bmp

Grass Man (16-Bit JPEG SORRY.[not a weed reference])
http://x2b.xanga.com/7eba2143c243171004424/b47761083.jpg

Grass Man (8-Bit)
http://x2d.xanga.com/377a222215d3749929099/b33529389.bmp

PLEASE!!!! Tell me what ya' think! I NEED to know if I'm a disgrace to the custom spriting world!

megajosh2
01-10-06, 17:46
Take a look at this. 1741
I made it from scratch.

Zak
01-10-06, 18:10
wha is it?

Mikado
01-10-06, 18:23
Whatever it is, 7/10
and 8/10 if now what it has to be (maybe)

megajosh2
01-10-06, 20:09
It's a tile. A game tile.

RyuReiatsu
01-10-06, 22:59
Need some help with this character. Can you tell me how I'm doing sofar? Also, this is a female sprite, so, tell me which one works best?

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a369/Nicktendonick/concept%20sprites/tashaconcepts.png
Make them look at little bit hm... Solid
'cause right now the middle one seems to be sliping on the ground because she can't stand well.
Overrall hm...7/1o

Jace
01-10-06, 23:53
Okay, I know this isn't much of an edit but, could you all rate this and give me ideas on how to improve it? It's a new elite soldier unit for my new comic (also need a better name).

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/448/elitepantheonma7.png (http://imageshack.us)

Zero20XD6
01-10-06, 23:55
Looks like master chief and to improve give him a knife coming out of the wrist to stab people like in trinitry blood and republic commando.

Jace
01-10-06, 23:57
Ah, Trinity Blood... Why didn't I think of that?! All right, anything else?

Zero20XD6
01-10-06, 23:58
Maybe a jetpack or a secondary gun.

Jace
02-10-06, 00:00
Alright, thanks. After I'm done with this, it's on the HEAVY ARTILLERY ELITE!!

Zero20XD6
02-10-06, 00:04
No problem and now it's time for model's upadted slash.
http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j123/zero20xd6/slashy.png

tuckur21
02-10-06, 00:06
Good but on the one slash where you could see the blur of his hand it looks to bright.

Jace
02-10-06, 00:07
It looks fine to me. 8/10.

tuckur21
02-10-06, 00:08
On the second one on the top?

Zero20XD6
02-10-06, 00:08
Nevermind Tucker I just realized that when zero slashes hie brightens up.

RyuReiatsu
02-10-06, 00:14
To me, the blades a bit too thin.
7.5/1o

tuckur21
02-10-06, 01:09
Well here is another attempt at kakashi I added more detail and changed the hair the one on the right is the new one the one on the left is there for comparison.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/tuckur21-T/KakashiSensei-3.png

megajosh2
02-10-06, 01:27
Love it. 8/10. Is it an edit?

tuckur21
02-10-06, 01:34
Thanks your the first person that didn't say that the hair sucked and yes it is an edit I used a base and then edited it heavily until it looked like kakashi. But I bet you can't guess the base.

megajosh2
02-10-06, 01:59
Which series?

tuckur21
02-10-06, 02:01
I thought it was a bit obvious that it was ZX but what ever.

NetSaver.exe
02-10-06, 02:02
My guesses are Vent or Giro from ZX.

tuckur21
02-10-06, 02:05
Nope and the pose is custom I forgot to mention that. But when I sheet it yes I am going to use Giro but for the time being you are wrong.

NetSaver.exe
02-10-06, 02:07
Aw Man.

tuckur21
02-10-06, 02:08
Ya had I don'tthink that you will get it because the pose is custom.Well here is another attempt at kakashi I added more detail and changed the hair the one on the right is the new one the one on the left is there for comparison.
http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j8/tuckur21-T/KakashiSensei-3.png
And could I get a rating for this.

megajosh2
02-10-06, 03:03
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/9238/rakenxh8.png

Here's my latest scratch creation, Raken.

tuckur21
02-10-06, 03:05
I just think that the position is akward because of the right hand pointing out but other than that good job.

megajosh2
02-10-06, 03:29
Thanks. And the arm pose is for when he holds his sword thing.

tuckur21
02-10-06, 03:30
Oh well are you gonna post that sprite?

Zero20XD6
02-10-06, 03:32
Tucker you double posted.

tuckur21
02-10-06, 03:35
Ya I just noticed that the Post reply button wasn't working so I double clicked it and I guess it posted twice.

megajosh2
02-10-06, 03:45
http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/4720/rakenla4.png

Done. :0

tuckur21
02-10-06, 03:49
There that looks much better but the swords handle looks a bit lopsided.

megajosh2
02-10-06, 04:35
There that looks much better but the swords handle looks a bit lopsided.
Yeah. Remember when I said it was "like" a sword? Well, the sword moves.

Like this.
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/5808/rakenbladeth8.png

tuckur21
02-10-06, 04:38
Thats cool what are the attacks gonna be is it gonna be like a whip?

megajosh2
02-10-06, 04:40
Not really. But it'll change size.

tuckur21
02-10-06, 04:42
I thought it would be cool if it was like Ivy's sword from SC.

megajosh2
02-10-06, 04:44
It'll be so-so.

tuckur21
02-10-06, 04:45
So it might be like a whip?

megajosh2
02-10-06, 04:46
It'll do stuff like a whip, but a little off-the-edge.

tuckur21
02-10-06, 04:47
Sounds very unique and creative which is good.

Jace
02-10-06, 05:43
This is Eos.(brownie points if you know why, hint- decipher the attack name) Rate/C+C please.

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/6554/eoska0.png (http://imageshack.us)

tuckur21
02-10-06, 05:48
It is Pirateman

Jace
02-10-06, 05:50
How the hell did you come up with Pirateman? It has NOTHING to do with past MM games. It's an OC. Try Wiki-ing Eos.

tuckur21
02-10-06, 05:52
It looked like a pirate hat.XD

Edit: She is some greek goddess titan. She is the Titan of Dawn.

Jace
02-10-06, 05:54
You know what? Screw it. I'll tell you the meaning of it all. Eos is the greek god of the dawn/twillight. And HigureSenkou means Twillight Flash.

tuckur21
02-10-06, 05:55
I just edited my post before you said that.

Jace
02-10-06, 05:56
Fine, take your brownie points and go... At least you didn't get the attack right.

tuckur21
02-10-06, 13:44
Thats because I don't know greek and I still think she has a pirate hat.

megajosh2
02-10-06, 16:40
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/8406/rakenblade2qu9.png
Blade transformation sprites.

Jace
02-10-06, 18:55
Thats because I don't know greek and I still think she has a pirate hat.

Ah well, I don't think she does. Anyway, the attack was in Japanese not greek. I hate greek. (the writing at least)

Zero20XD6
02-10-06, 18:57
I tried translating it from japanese and it didn't work.

megajosh2
02-10-06, 19:03
Japanese words CANNOT end in consonants.

Jace
02-10-06, 19:04
http://www.freedict.com/onldict/jap.html

Go there, type in Higure, get translation, then type in Senkou, get translation. It's that simple.

MJ- They don't. They end in VOWELS.

Zero20XD6
02-10-06, 19:06
That would explain it I put it as one word.

Jace
02-10-06, 19:07
Yea, I forgot the space in their. Oops.

Zero20XD6
02-10-06, 19:13
Japanese words CANNOT end in consonants.
Yes they can almost all of Zero's attacks in X 4 end in consanants examples:
RAIJINGEKI-Thunder God Attack
KUUENBU-Sky Walk
HIENKYAKU-Flying Jump
SHIPPUUGA-Hurricane Fang
RAKUHOUHA-Fallen Phoenix Crush
TENKUUHA-Sky Command
See all of them except two.