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KSorian
07-05-06, 23:04
Basically seeing as the second chapter is now up for everyone to see, I'll update it here and leave VGA mayhem for only site related stuff. Below are The character bios for the three characters so far (i'm not including the new character as to put her bio up gives things away).

Wolf Chronicles Character Bios

Korius Sorian

A 23-year old man with bushy blue hair and red eyes and a scar over his right eye. His appearance, coupled with him being 6ft 2in's tall and that he has a fairly muscular body, strikes fear into his opponents and into people who do not know him for who he is. He and his younger brother Tyrone are all that is left of their family. Their mother died of a disease when both Korius and Tyrone were young, while their father died 3 years ago. Korius recieved his fathers sword as was his fathers dying wish, and he chooses to wield it in many situations out of respect for his father whom he looked up to with great admiration. He has a kind heart, willing to help people whenever he can, but when others see him to be kind they forget that he is fearsome in combat. He has already proved to be a formidable enemy to any that would harm the people of his native village of Mecyra. He displayed such tenacity and composure in a battle when a roving band of thugs attacked the village when he was only 16, that he was offered the job of enlisting into the village barracks. This tenacity in combat also gave him the nickname of "Wolf". Recently, a new attack was fended off by his actions outside the village and his brothers actions when the thugs attacked the barracks in a sneak attack when it was housed mainly with raw recruits. Well known in the village by both his names, many of the villagers prefer to say his real name, apart from Reina who seems to like Wolf more.

Tyrone Sorian

The 20-year old brother of Korius who sports red hair and brown eyes. Despite the differences in how Tyrone and Korius look, they are indeed brothers. Tyrone is not as muscular as he only started training a few years ago, where as his brother has been training for around half of his life. Tyrone has near enough the same personality as his brother, however he is more hot-headed than his brother. This naturally gets him into a lot more trouble than Korius gets into, most of the time however, he has the skills to get himself out of any trouble he ends up in. Tyrone admired his father for his strength but originally did not want to train to be a fighter. Academically, Tyrone did better than his brother Korius in various subjects, however because of Korius' rigourous training, Tyrone is always outdone by his older brother when it comes to anything physical. Tyrone had been enlisted as a recruit in the village barracks much like his older brother shortly before he asked his brother for help with his training.
Tyrone's first reason to start training was to impress a girl called Reina, the best way he saw of doing this was enlisting his fathers help. However once his father died he turned to his older brother for help. Although this did toughen him up, his brother's rough training usually ended up injuring Tyrone in some of the more intense sessions. After he and Reina started dating, he still contiuned his training because he wanted to keep challenging his brother and he wanted to make sure he could protect Reina, should the time ever come. Thanks to his own persistance, and his brothers training, Tyrone is also a force to be reckoned with. This was shown during an attack on the barracks when only the recruits remained. During that attack he bravely assisted many people without a thought for himself. Reina does not know about Tyrone's 'Heroic' deeds, because if she found out, Tyrone would be in more trouble than he's ever been in.

Reina Scarlet

Reina is a 20-year old woman with short blond hair and brown eyes and is Tyrone's girlfriend. She, unlike Korius and Tyrone, was born in Nerisca. Her family moved to Mecyra when she was still small, so all she remembers is Mecyra village. Academically she is rather bright, and she was recorded as being fairly agile by her gym teacher. Once her parents thought her old enough to take care of herself, her parents decided to travel as it was once of their desires to travel the continent together. She sports a rather curvy figure, which gets the attention of quite a few young men around the village. It wasn't until about 2 years ago that she met Tyrone. She had heard swords clashing together in the distance and went to see what the commotion was about. When she saw Korius and Tyrone training, she mistook Korius for an attacker trying to kill one of the village guards. She was about to put a stop to it when Korius spotted her in the bushes and told his brother that training had ended, due to "outside interference". Tyrone looking slightly dazed, did not understand what his brother meant until Reina came over to check if he was ok, thus starting their relationship. With regards to many things she is bright and cheerful, but she has a mean streak in her when something angers her. Although she cares for Tyrone deeply, sometimes the whole village can hear her shouting when they have an arguement, leaving some to wonder if they really are dating.

If you haven't read my second (or indeed first) chapter then the links are in my sig. Enjoy!

KSorian
02-09-06, 22:17
Just and update on a few things:

Chapter 3: Yes, i said it would be out and it isn't. There are reasons for this, but most of all, its already 2 months overdue. So what i might do is, release this and Chapter 4 once thats done, together.

Chapter 4: not much done yet. Mainly because I have writers block again. However this, as much as it is bad news, is good news, as over the weekend, all i've done is practice drawing. So hopefully I'll be able to make a competant picture of one of my characters in the future.

As always, if you have questions, feel free to contact me or post here.

BlueSonnet
04-09-06, 11:34
Seeing i've read and praised your work so far, i'll be looking forward to 3 and 4 when they come out.

KSorian
04-09-06, 17:42
Thanks mate, its good to know that. I'm going to try my hardest to make chapter 3 and 4 the best so far!

KSorian
01-10-06, 16:49
Basically with a few recent changes (and hopefully with my placement going well) I'm going to release chapter 3 in the next week and release chapter 4 whenever.

To keep people going till I fully release it, here is a first paragraph preview!

'Ugh...that drink has a hell of a kick' Tyrone thought as he opened his eyes. When he opened them he saw nothing but black clouds pouring rain onto the ground. He was laid on a cold, hard path, in front of a building that was a ruin of a church. Tyrone rose to his feet and gazed upon the massive doors. 'Where am I? What am I doing here?' he thought as he walked over and pushed them open. When he entered, he saw a few wooden benches scattered, broken and on fire, the alter smashed, the floor covered in shards from the broken stained glass windows, a huge amount of blood covering the floor with dead animals, some of which he'd never seen before, and a figure in blood red armor almost demonic in its appearance, holding a body wrapped in a blood stained cloak. As Tyrone approached, he noticed that the figure in the armor was crying. The figure rose to his feet, with the body in his arms, turned and began to approach Tyrone. The figure then gave Tyrone the body and said in a deep tone "You take care of her.....there is nothing I can do for her now, I couldn't protect her...” Upon saying this, the figure walked slowly to the exit. Once the person left, Tyrone's attention turned to the body. 'Whoever this was, they must have been important to them' he thought. He began unwrapping the bit covering the head. As he unwrapped it, Tyrone immediately knew who it was and started to scream out...

Any comments?

Aki-at
01-10-06, 16:55
The beginning is very atmospheric and indeed sets the mood and slowly builds up to the later part, a great preview, new MOAR now.

KSorian
01-10-06, 16:59
The beginning is very atmospheric and indeed sets the mood and slowly builds up to the later part, a great preview, new MOAR now.

Thanks mate, and you'll have plenty more to look forward to.

Aki-at
04-10-06, 10:26
Cool dude, I'm looking forward to the next update you'll put up for the story.

BlueSonnet
04-10-06, 11:38
Oh geez i think i have a good idea which girl got her arse handed to her. :g-sad:

KSorian
04-10-06, 12:36
Oh geez i think i have a good idea which girl got her arse handed to her. :g-sad:

You might do, you might not. You'll have to wait and find out.

KSorian
09-10-06, 21:20
Chapter 3 is out! You'll be able to find the link in my sig!

BlueSonnet
17-10-06, 11:03
As i mentioned on deviantart, besides the od two or three things i picked, it was wicked. Get chapter 4 up ASAP ok.

KSorian
17-10-06, 16:10
Cheers mate,I've started to do a side project, should I ever hit a barrier while writing Wolf Chronicles, but Wolf Chronicles takes priority over it, I'm attempting to get chapter 4 done by the end of this month, if i can do that, I see no reason why chapter 5 can't be done during november and chapter 6 around december time. If I can do that, I'll be near enough ahead of my previous schedule of trying to get 1 chapter done every 2 months or so.