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ChaosVortex
07-05-06, 03:46
I can't seem to get enough C+C on my work in the Sprite Critique Thread. I only come here once a while to hear what needs to be worked on. Please, if you're reading this, please give me your opinions about my sprites. I'd love to hear them. If you're reading this topic and post anything regarding my sprites (especially my newest ones), I greatly thank you.
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If you can't see some of my sprites, then there is a possibility I may have deleted it from my upload account.
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This topic is for my sprites and ONLY sprites. If you wish to see my artwork and other stuff, look on other topics on boards made by me titled "Chaos Creations".

Here are all my past sprites.

http://www.freewebs.com/chaosvortex/Chaos5Clothes4.PNG
My character sprite. MegaMan 7 style.
http://www.freewebs.com/chaosvortex/ChaosZero8bit.PNG http://www.freewebs.com/chaosvortex/ChaosZeroJump8bit.PNG http://www.freewebs.com/chaosvortex/ChaosZeroAttack8bit.PNG http://www.freewebs.com/chaosvortex/ChaosZeroJumpAttack8bit.PNG http://www.freewebs.com/chaosvortex/ChaosZeroHurt8bit.PNG
Chaos Zero in 8-bit.

http://www.freewebs.com/chaosvortex/MTX.PNG
A sprite made upon request. Request: monkeytypex Sprite.

http://www.freewebs.com/chaosvortex/ChaosBNSheet1.PNG
My first sprite sheet, I'm in MegaMan: Battle Network style. There is still more to add to it though...

Criticism is granted to make the sprites better. Rate them if you want. Tell me what you think. I'm sometimes busy, so I may not update frequently.
Magnus
07-05-06, 06:42
I like the monkey X. that is quite possibly the most creative MMX edit i've ever seen.
rickysio
07-05-06, 06:56
Monkey X's face needs work. The tail too.

BN style is okay.

MM7 style has a pretty impossible hair, for it buldges alot at the back. Could use some work.

MM1-6 style = Dunno Whazzat?
Rainbow Dash
07-05-06, 07:21
MM7Style: What rickysio said, and his pants are pulled up to his chest.
MM1-6: What?
MMXMonkey: Make the tail thicker.
MMBNStyle: Really nice.
ChaosVortex
07-05-06, 19:19
I tried making the tail thicker on MTX, but I stopped. It was a request for a friend so he'll do the changes if he wants. The Chaos Zero sprites I stopped also, but I'll try seeing what I can do with the MM7 style.

The buldges on the back are supposed to be there so I don't know what I should do about fixing them.

I'll see if I could pull the belt down a little bit... It doesn't look like it's at his chest though...
NovaManXP
07-05-06, 19:22
I could've sworn you had more sprites, Chaos...

Eh, I might be going crazy. The BN sprites are good, other than the fact that his clothes are recolored. The 16 bit sprite, it seems you fixed his feet. They look alot better now. The Monkey Type X is meh though.
ChaosVortex
07-05-06, 19:26
Some are not exactly worth showing, and some I haven't exactly finished yet.
ChaosVortex
10-05-06, 23:50
Update on the MM7 style sprite. I decided to make an end to the jacket and turn it into a vest too. Does this look better Metool?

http://www.freewebs.com/chaosvortex/Chaos6Clothes4.PNG
Rainbow Dash
10-05-06, 23:52
Aye, much better. In my opinion, anyway. And saying it was up to his chest was an exageration, I agree.
ChaosVortex
30-07-06, 18:50
Lordy, was this topic dead...

http://www.freewebs.com/chaosvortex/ChaosEXE3.PNG

Posted here to hear your C+C. So please give it. I'd like to know what's crap and what's not.:g-winky:

Oh, forgot to mention. This is me in EXE form.

NOTE: The image in this post has been overwritten to preserve space. This is not the original image file.
DragonZero
30-07-06, 19:03
It looks alright, but has a few too many colors. I mean you've got red, black, green, grey, orange, AND blue. Maybe just stick to black, green, and blue. Other than that... You used BN6 Colonel as a base (The line on the hair, as well as the position gave it away). All in all, a very good edit. Except the shoes looks exactly like Colonel's.
ChaosVortex
30-07-06, 19:09
I liked the shoes but, meh, I'll change them.

And I did have black gloves but someone said they couldn't tell them apart from the pants/legs. The color was my most trouble. I need to recolor it I guess, but that may be where I'm stumped.
DragonZero
30-07-06, 19:10
It's not that the colors you have are BAD, it's just that you've got too many. just stick with 4 different colors, and you should be fine.
Enigma
30-07-06, 20:46
off-topic: DragonZero, did you get that thing I sent you?

On-Topic: ChaosVortex, change the color of: the chest and between the legs, the orange in all of it...and change the feet, they looks kinds off.
ChaosVortex
24-09-06, 06:02
http://www.freewebs.com/chaosvortex/ChaosEXE3.PNG

I'm sticking with these four colors: Blue, Green, Gray, and Orange (and black if you want to count that). I actually like the orange on there, but is there anything else that could be improved in your eyes?

I removed the movement sprites because I'm going to work on "real" ones.
ChaosVortex
19-07-07, 04:26
Alright. I brought back this old topic (hope it's not against the rules) because I can't seem to get enough C+C on my work in the Sprite Critique Thread. I only come here once a while to hear what needs to be worked on. Please, if you're reading this, please give me your opinions. I'd love to hear them.

Anyway, last comment I heard about these sprites was that the stance is overused and the shading of the hair is odd. I didn't know what that meant, so I'd appreciate it if anyone could clarify that with me.

Also, If anyone could animate these frames, it'd help me see if I screwed anything up.

http://www.freewebs.com/chaosvortex/ChaosZXBreathe.PNG

Again, if ANYONE posts here, I GREATLY thank you.
Grid Man
19-07-07, 05:44
Looks fine and dandy to me. I can see why people said the hair was shaded funny. It looks alright for the most part, but I think you've got just a few too many highlights on his bangs.

I like his design, though. Pretty cool.
Kairos
19-07-07, 06:00
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/4395/requestho5.gif (http://imageshack.us)

Legs move in 2nd and 3rd frame.
Xterra
19-07-07, 13:51
Really Rags!? It looks fine to me:

The only thing wrong is that he seems to 'twitch' as he breaths.

He needs to have a more fluid motion of breathing.
Loki
19-07-07, 14:08
You should maybe just compare Vent's breathing stance to yours.
Galeon
19-07-07, 14:30
It's like he's doing mid-light standing crunches to his abs. ^^;
Xterra
19-07-07, 15:20
Heh! That is true....It does look like he's doing that.

Also, PF is correct. Look at how Vent breaths, and then sprite it similarly.
ChaosVortex
20-07-07, 03:02
Thanks Grid Man and Xterra. I was having some trouble with the 3rd frame and yeah, that's looks weird. It doesn't look like real breathing at all. It's like he's just moving forward and backward...

I'm not so sure about the twitching. He's supposed to breathe like Vent in ZX. The 1st frame is default, switching to the 2nd quickly, then the 3rd for 2-3 seconds, then reverse and repeat.

*compares sprite to Vent on own Nintendo DS*

Wait. I see it now. I'm missing a frame. :/ Vent has a 4th frame when he breathes. I guess I better work on that...