A Tale In 21XX

[rickysio]

Chapter 0 : Prologue
[Coming Soon!]

Chapter 1 : Discovery
Discovery (http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/9946/0011df.png)
X? (http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/5022/0028hz.png)
Ambush (http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/8944/0037rf.png)
Drones! (http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/3738/0042oj.png)

Fillers
[Coming Soon!]

That's the current amount i have. Enjoy!

[Pinkie Pie]

Tips:
1) Doesn't make much sense. I honestly have no idea whats going on.
2) Make sure the X drones look a little LESS like X.
3) Ambush is the same comic as Discovery.
4) Don't use mass reploids/etc. The games never used that many reploids in one spot, neither should comics based off the games.
5) Make the script more natural. It seems... scripted. (As daft as it sounds.) Make the characters speak how they would speak in real life.
6) Choose a different font. The one's you've chosen are too large, and too distracting.

[Hobo]

I agree with Ace, I don't even know what's happening in most of the panels. If I were you I'd redo some of the Comics and I'd make them better.

[rickysio]

yeah. Sure. That script was done like one year ago? I'll rewrite it soon. Exams are coming.
Edit: I corrected discovery.

[Anro]

I think it's good I like cliff hangers. I also like it when they start out not knowing a thing first!

[Mikado]

I like that you guys make original fonts, how do you do that?
( a bit of topic but, not much )

[rickysio]

Original? It aint Original.
Anyway, the fonts i use are Comic Book Commando, And Visitor TT2(BRK) And Journal.

Gee, I'm gonna revamp these, when i get My Sin to level 40... MapleAddict Is ME!